It Turns Out That This is Also About Cultivating Immortals

Why did you delete my book review? I show you beautiful girls and recommend books to you. How nice.

It's really abominable, a set of nine pictures for the handsome guys and beauties in the book circle. Comments are welcome!

If you watch this type too much, you'll find it ugly! There are a lot of these types now, and some of them are called... I feel like I can't stop licking the protagonist. I suggest the author not to make the supporting characters too brainless or too licky! Just come to anyone, this is an opportunity, master... A good novel has become a mess! I hope the author doesn't make the supporting characters so brainless!

Two chapters are updated in one day. It seems like a real blow to the brain. When can I update a few more chapters?

Lu Fanchen walked to the table, put down the pen, and every move was full of charm, evolving the path of the avenue, becoming the most divine and holy, as if he was integrated with the heaven and earth.

It represents only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. It may also be that I am mentally tired from reading this kind of works, and I always feel that this book is not as good as the other ones on the shelves. Don't just leave if you don't want to read it. If you don't comment in the comment section, why are you doing it? This book still needs to be improved... It feels like it's not polished! First of all, let's talk about the subject matter of this book. There are basically many books in this book, and I have read several of them. I have seen some that are well written, and some that are not well written. Those well-written thoughts are transferred very smoothly and don't feel sudden. However, the quality of this book is still lacking. I feel that the handling of some characters is not done well. It always feels very abrupt and jumpy, and the plot feels a bit too fast... I have only read more than 20 chapters, and three women appear... What I want to say is, can you not just use women to lead the plot? What I saw was basically plot lines using women! More characters! Don't just have a female follow the protagonist, come with something else. Another thing I think about is that books with this kind of theme basically don't have a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, she will appear after many chapters. There will not be multiple female protagonists. I read the rhythm of this book, and there are quite a few female protagonists. What about the protagonist? The protagonist traveled through time when he was twelve years old and is now eighteen years old. With the help of the system, he has learned a lot. In six years, the protagonist should have read a lot of books about sages, but why does he... As soon as he sees a woman... It's not that it's not good to like beautiful women, plus a beautiful woman who cultivates immortality, that's even more amazing! But people have to be self-aware. As soon as the protagonist comes on, he feels good about himself and feels that he can win over the fairy. Hello! No! Wake up, people cultivating immortals, you are just a mortal, you can't even become an immortal, do you think they will like you? People can cultivate immortality and live for a long time. If you die by then and they are still alive, why don't you think that they will like you? You're a mortal, so don't delay others. Now that the system characters have been completed, why do you still want to get them? Why! I can't figure it out! I can't figure it out! Forget it, forget it... I don't want to complain! This book has some minor flaws, but I can still read it! Even though the plot was not handled very well and the relationship between the characters was not well controlled, I felt like I was going to do something wrong! Anyway, I felt a little embarrassed!

Many book friends like to see beauties in the industry, and today she is here! Came with a smile!

I suddenly came here today and saw this book, which actually became a trend vane. Congratulations to the author!

I, the punch-in person, am here again, and all of you who come in will lose your experience by punching in!

Before this book is put on the shelves, more than 4,000 words will be updated on time at 8:00 and 9:00 every night! After being put on the shelves, it will be updated every day with about 8,000 words, so you can rest assured to collect it.