Douluo Continent: the Beast is the King

Author. . . You this. . . It's written too much like an outline. . Would you like to read what you wrote again. Everyone basically knows the plot of Douluo Dalu, but this is not just about: A and B fight, and the reason why A wins. I feel like the author is a bit impatient and advances the plot too quickly - generally speaking, there is a big scene where the author is proud of himself. But writing things, especially fan fiction, is like a PPT format. My immature personal suggestion: The interaction between Tang San and Rabbit is what everyone loves to watch. You can write eight of these nine chapters, and their plots will be fine as long as they are well written. As for A and B fighting and B winning, these can be cut directly, and then after the cutting is completed, a description can be given: being beaten by Tang San. It's that simple.