
Lin Jia Fubao
by Be Kind
About This Novel
One day, the little koi in the Yaochi of Dabie Mountain disappeared. Some monsters said she ascended, and some monsters said she disappeared! At the same time, the Lin family's daughter-in-law gave birth to a little baby. Her father loved her mother dearly, and the whole family doted on her. , Daddy kissed a big wild boar he hunted on the mountain, and the eyes of the village and outside were red. , Give me a hug from my mother, money will come rolling in from the store! The Lin family: My family is the most blessed with blessings Everyone... Bang! A few years later! Look at the home-made steamed buns with pickled vegetables, and then look at other people's big fish and meat! Everyone: We are so stupid, really!
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The content of the storyline is okay, but I hope there won't be too many emoticons, ellipses, redundant symbols and other things that have nothing to do with the main text. Otherwise, it will feel like you are trying to make up the word count. The rest feels pretty good. I hope that the point I just mentioned can be of great reference.
Sanlang, his wife is about to give birth, and the family is very anxious, but Sanlang's wife has not given birth yet. It doesn't matter if it doesn't happen, but the family is anxious to death. They are on tenterhooks every day and cannot get a good night's sleep every day.
Fu Bao is really a Fu Bao, the Lin family's Fu Bao. It rained as soon as Fu Bao was born, which saved the lives of the crops. This may be a coincidence. However, Fu Bao's father, Sanlang, picked up another wild boar. This cannot be said to be a coincidence.
Thank you to all the cuties who came to read Shanshanwen!
Shanshan would like to thank all the cuties who voted for Shanshan! ! 👏 It is inevitable that mistakes will be made when writing a good article. I am very grateful to the hard-working little cuties who [catch insects] for "Lin Family Fubao" every day! The Charity Association will try its best to correct the shortcomings here. If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave a message! ! Come on (ง •̀o•́)ง (ง •̀o•́)ง
I like to read this kind of heart-warming and top-notch novels that don't have so many family pets, and form a group to steal blessings.
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
While reading the article, I saw the author's use of emojis and what the author had to say. I suddenly felt that the author was a very cute person. The author's writing is very nice, I love it!
Some advice for authors.
The author doesn't need to say more at once. If you add too much at once, it will be automatically put on the shelf. After it is automatically put on the shelf, you will not have any good recommendation positions. Besides, you have so few recommendation votes now. If there are so few recommendation votes, the editor will ask you to cut it out, or you will have to bite the bullet and write it down. This is really not good for your long-term development. Because I've tried it too. When we get to the end, we can only be eunuchs. I really don't want to be such a good book eunuch anymore There should be more recommendation votes in the early stage.
good
I thought it was okay at first, but toward the end it felt more perfunctory. Sometimes I didn't even know what to write and there were no details.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(39)Scraped 8d ago
Can
The content of the storyline is okay, but I hope there won't be too many emoticons, ellipses, redundant symbols and other things that have nothing to do with the main text. Otherwise, it will feel like you are trying to make up the word count. The rest feels pretty good. I hope that the point I just mentioned can be of great reference.
Sanlang, his wife is about to give birth, and the family is very anxious, but Sanlang's wife has not given birth yet. It doesn't matter if it doesn't happen, but the family is anxious to death. They are on tenterhooks every day and cannot get a good night's sleep every day.
Fu Bao is really a Fu Bao, the Lin family's Fu Bao. It rained as soon as Fu Bao was born, which saved the lives of the crops. This may be a coincidence. However, Fu Bao's father, Sanlang, picked up another wild boar. This cannot be said to be a coincidence.
Thank you to all the cuties who came to read Shanshanwen!
Shanshan would like to thank all the cuties who voted for Shanshan! ! 👏 It is inevitable that mistakes will be made when writing a good article. I am very grateful to the hard-working little cuties who [catch insects] for "Lin Family Fubao" every day! The Charity Association will try its best to correct the shortcomings here. If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave a message! ! Come on (ง •̀o•́)ง (ง •̀o•́)ง
I like to read this kind of heart-warming and top-notch novels that don't have so many family pets, and form a group to steal blessings.
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
While reading the article, I saw the author's use of emojis and what the author had to say. I suddenly felt that the author was a very cute person. The author's writing is very nice, I love it!
Some advice for authors.
The author doesn't need to say more at once. If you add too much at once, it will be automatically put on the shelf. After it is automatically put on the shelf, you will not have any good recommendation positions. Besides, you have so few recommendation votes now. If there are so few recommendation votes, the editor will ask you to cut it out, or you will have to bite the bullet and write it down. This is really not good for your long-term development. Because I've tried it too. When we get to the end, we can only be eunuchs. I really don't want to be such a good book eunuch anymore There should be more recommendation votes in the early stage.
good
I thought it was okay at first, but toward the end it felt more perfunctory. Sometimes I didn't even know what to write and there were no details.










