Marshal, Your Vest Has Fallen Off

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I was slapped in the face and felt uncomfortable. I thought I could add an update today, but it turned out that the normal update couldn't be done. Alas, as we get older, there are more things happening. I'm sorry, I'll update it tomorrow. No more talking, I still have to go and cry.

I wish you all the best in health and good health in the new year!

I'm focusing on the red envelopes tonight. Please take a night off.

I'm busy today, so I can't update in time. Please take a day off and I'll continue updating tomorrow.

To be honest, from the introduction, I felt that the heroine seemed pretty good. After all, she was also a marshal. I never expected that the main text would be so lackluster. The heroine Mary Sue has the same aura, and all the male supporting characters like her, including the emperor, Rong Han, Zhao Wuyuan... Emm, she still has a hundred million bits of mother's heart, which is completely inconsistent with the marshal's decisive and decisive character. Not to mention that it was to prevent her brothers from recognizing her true identity, this reason was too blunt and deliberate. In addition, there were obviously many opportunities to leave Kyoto in the early stage, but I gave up every time. To put it nicely, it was because of the importance of love and righteousness, and for Xiao Ning'er and the brothers, which was said to be indecisive. In the early stage, Xiao Ning'er and Xiao Ning'er didn't leave when they didn't know each other. They knew that there would be constant turmoil when returning to Beijing, but they took risks many times just for the little solace money. The plot was too blunt. As an all-powerful marshal, it is far-fetched that leaving Kyoto should be so difficult. As a commander-in-chief of an army, not to mention how high your emotional intelligence must be, at least you must not be so "crude". What if the enemy takes advantage of this? Personal conflicts are serious The article feels like a running account, with no ups and downs. Although there are various assassinations, it is dull and the rhythm is not strong. You can read it to pass the time, and you can leave it out if you are pursuing a reading experience. After all, I have read hundreds of novels, and I have a certain system for evaluating novels. (Don't argue, if you argue you are right) It can be seen that the writing style is not particularly mature. The author may still be a middle school student, but it is not easy to write so many words, so the four-star rating is encouraging. At the same time, we are looking forward to Da Da's new completed work Duck

I agreed to revise the text in two points, but now I really can't concentrate, so I can only revise it tomorrow. I'm sorry, everyone.