Yaonv Farming

After reading a few chapters, I felt that an experienced time-traveler and Golden Finger were living such a frustrating life that I had no desire to continue reading. Abandoned

It feels like a mess. A modern person who has traveled back in time does not have the consciousness to grow up under the red flag, and has no aversion or resistance to people or things?

The plot is okay! It's just that the ending is too long-winded! Author, did you piece it together in a dream? Grandma Wang's foot-binding cloth is really smelly and long! It's all just trying to make up the word count! 😜😜😜😜

The first two thirds are okay! Although the plot of the last third is exciting, it is too long-winded! The Queen Mother's foot-binding cloth! I just can't bear to look at it😜😜😜

After watching it, I just found the emotional line very complicated and a bit depressing.

I always write repeatedly,

Dealing with things at home is more exciting

The previous writing was okay, the plot was relatively compact, ranging from the partiality of the heroine's parents, the meanness of the parents-in-law, to the sweetness of the male and female protagonists, everything was pretty good. But after the male protagonist came back from the border military camp, various female supporting characters came to find him, and he started to reminisce + repeat, making up the word count in a mess, and it became unreadable. What a pity

(But) If there are too many words, can't you use other words? The content is very good, but the author is too verbose. If it were written by a good author, it would definitely be wonderful, and you can't stop reading.

Sometimes it's so boring! Over and over again!