
I Beat up the Boss at the Beginning, Do You Call This Undercover?
About This Novel
"If I remember correctly, your profession is undercover, right? You just beat up the boss?!" Zhang Feng was originally a retired killer who was tired of fighting and killing, but something went wrong while enjoying his retirement life. He accidentally traveled to the current world and became an undercover? "Undercover? I can only kill people! What should I do?!" There was no other way, Zhang Feng could only take the wrong approach and beat the boss on the spot in the cell. When the boss was released from prison, he hugged Zhang Feng's thigh and cried: "Brother, please be my little brother!" As time goes by, things get worse and worse: "It was agreed upon for three years, three years and three years, and three years and three years, why haven't you closed the network yet?!" ...
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Official(31)Scraped 12d ago
Your protagonist has the wrong character
What you write is a killer, not a gangster. You start a fight by provoking a fight, then you look at your female boss lewdly, and then you flirt with her in a lewd manner. You are completely a gangster, and you have nothing to do with a killer. If a killer acts in such a high-profile manner, he is afraid that others will not notice and will be discovered before he takes action.
Author, please work hard
Hello author, I saw the same work as this one on another website, and the progress is about the same. In order to avoid misunderstandings, I suggest you directly update Chapter 50 to prove your innocence🐶🐶🐶 This may be a bit overwhelming, so let's take a step back. It's quite easy to update 10 chapters a day. You don't want to let everyone down😈😈😈
It seems like the ending was not written, and the rest was just made up and written randomly.
The King of Killers? Over seventy chapters, not only did he do nothing, but he was almost killed by others!
The most fatal thing about this novel is that the setting and content are seriously inconsistent. It is not a novel at all! ! You are the king of killers. For more than seventy chapters, you have done nothing important, and you were almost killed. You know clearly that you are not at your peak, but you still go around pretending to be drunk and causing trouble! Are you a fool? What are you doing undercover? You have laid the foundation, how will you write in the future? How can I write that this person is awesome? There is only one way left, be smart!
Update, please update quickly. I haven't updated it for many days.
Niu Pi, the author, do you think writing this way will make you a eunuch? If you insist on writing, I will support it😁
reminder
I still have more to read. It's a good article about food and grass. The protagonist's combat power will be better if you push it upwards.
The first one, and possibly the last one
This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever move me. I didn't expect to see such an exquisite book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe how wonderful this book is, so I just want to say this: My only regret is that I haven't read it yet.
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Official(31)Scraped 12d ago
Your protagonist has the wrong character
What you write is a killer, not a gangster. You start a fight by provoking a fight, then you look at your female boss lewdly, and then you flirt with her in a lewd manner. You are completely a gangster, and you have nothing to do with a killer. If a killer acts in such a high-profile manner, he is afraid that others will not notice and will be discovered before he takes action.
Author, please work hard
Hello author, I saw the same work as this one on another website, and the progress is about the same. In order to avoid misunderstandings, I suggest you directly update Chapter 50 to prove your innocence🐶🐶🐶 This may be a bit overwhelming, so let's take a step back. It's quite easy to update 10 chapters a day. You don't want to let everyone down😈😈😈
It seems like the ending was not written, and the rest was just made up and written randomly.
The King of Killers? Over seventy chapters, not only did he do nothing, but he was almost killed by others!
The most fatal thing about this novel is that the setting and content are seriously inconsistent. It is not a novel at all! ! You are the king of killers. For more than seventy chapters, you have done nothing important, and you were almost killed. You know clearly that you are not at your peak, but you still go around pretending to be drunk and causing trouble! Are you a fool? What are you doing undercover? You have laid the foundation, how will you write in the future? How can I write that this person is awesome? There is only one way left, be smart!
Update, please update quickly. I haven't updated it for many days.
Niu Pi, the author, do you think writing this way will make you a eunuch? If you insist on writing, I will support it😁
reminder
I still have more to read. It's a good article about food and grass. The protagonist's combat power will be better if you push it upwards.
The first one, and possibly the last one
This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever move me. I didn't expect to see such an exquisite book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe how wonderful this book is, so I just want to say this: My only regret is that I haven't read it yet.










