The Perfect System of Rebirth

The overall concept is okay, and the ending is not perfect either. It can even be seen that the pace accelerated in the later period. In the later period, the ideas began to become messy, and the rhythm connection was not smooth (๑•ω•๑). There were relatively few foreshadowings. The city and cultivation levels still need to be smooth.

I only read the first chapter, and I didn't feel very good about it. The protagonist was expelled because he was framed, and then the protagonist's parents borrowed a huge debt to send the protagonist to a private aristocratic school. This operation is very abstract. In the previous life, the protagonist's parents died from overwork because they had to repay the debt. It's really 666. I went to the new class to pretend to be a bitch, and the protagonist introduced himself in English. This Nothing, but another mysterious operation is to ask the class teacher to translate for you, and in a commanding tone, "Teacher, please be responsible for the translation." When the class teacher was shocked by his English, the protagonist said, "Are you going to wait for me to finish everything before translating?" This questioning tone is also a 6, I want to say how did the protagonist achieve 50 billion assets in his previous life with such EQ and IQ?

I asked for a lot of help. I read 20% of it and deleted it completely. I didn't write anything about the system in the whole article. Anyway, it just said that the system has selected skills. Then he put some existing companies together and talked about the protagonist's investment in a long and lengthy article, and then most of them talked about investment, and he knew exactly when to sell off. Is Rebirth so awesome? Are everything accurate in the past ten or eight years? Then I continued to invest and make money😘😘😘After reading the ending, I immediately became an immortal. 🤗🤗🤗🤗Then I deleted it directly. The subject matter is actually very good. If you write about the system, it will be better than this thing. Technology, some scientific skills, make your own chips and stuff, network, some computer science, make your own JD. Com software, Liu Zhendong and the others become the protagonists and work part-time, learn martial arts skills, practice martial arts, etc. This type of system is the perfect system. The result is all investment and making money. . . Bad review

Not to mention how outrageous the descriptions of stocks and futures are, when I flipped through the catalog and saw the chapter on cultivation at the end, I suddenly found it boring.

I just spent my time investing and reading. The more I read, the more intelligent I became. Halfway through, a family suddenly appeared. From the middle of the article about entrepreneurship, it suddenly turned into a story about Dragon King spraying water. What the heck, I changed my name to the urban little miracle doctor. The main character, a billionaire with assets of tens of billions, is inferior to a small local family? I feel a little bit crazy. Forcibly creating conflicts, forcibly subduing people's intelligence. Playing investments well. Just for the sake of word count, give me an extraordinary one? Do you want to cultivate immortality with your entire Xuanbing body? ? ?

No one is watching. It makes me feel dumb.

No, what I wrote before is okay. I even looked forward to building some kind of business empire. But the result is a cultivator. I really didn't expect it.

Very good, from a Taekwondo club. He could also say that no one in the world could catch his punch, which made me laugh.

You act cool when you come up, it's like fucking shit

After reading the previous chapters, hackers hacked 13 companies in half a day, and forums. The concept of time is so abstract that I can't stand it anymore.