
Bailuyuan, I Became Lu Zhaopeng
by Ge Yan
About This Novel
In Bailuyuan, Lu Zhaopeng, a son of a wealthy family, travels across the business world and stirs up troubles. "Ding, after you complete the sign-in, you will get a Snickers bar." Hei Wa: "What is this?" Lu Zhaopeng: "Try sugar, it's delicious." Hei Wa trembled: "Zhao Peng, I have never eaten such delicious food." "Congratulations on completing your sign-in and receiving an American howitzer." Li Yunlong: "Mr. Lu, you really gave me this American equipment. Old Li, I have never fought such a rich battle in my life." Movies and TV dramas of the Age of Awakening: Bailuyuan, Jinfen Family, Shanghai Beach, mist and rain, shining swords...
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When we were traveling abroad, the taxi driver asked us why our suitcase was so heavy. My friend said that there were bricks in the suitcase and he would photograph anyone who didn't like it. Xiaoguai, please tell me you will always love my bad-tempered son, so what if he laughs to death? Anyway, everything is dust in the face of time, ordinary people, great people, countries, humans, and even the universe. What you said about being single and never having a boyfriend is very reasonable. It makes sense, but it doesn't actually make sense, but you think it makes sense, I think it makes sense, and he also thinks it makes sense, so it becomes reasonable. Regarding this matter, I will briefly say a few words, as long as you understand it. In short, this matter is the situation now. The specifics are visible to everyone, and you can also say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it clearly, but the meaning is that. If you don't know, you don't have to guess. I think this is an academic issue worth discussing. Just like cabbage placed on the railway track will be eaten by passing sheep, and if your fingernails are not trimmed for a long time, your mother will scold you. Therefore, people cannot pick their toes when walking, otherwise it will increase the difficulty of contact with the ground. As a person who has been through this, I have come through. That's right. But in Asia, sixty seconds pass in one minute. According to statistics, women are the only ones who get pregnant out of wedlock in China. If a person saves one pack of cigarettes every day, he saves ten packs in ten days. Who would have thought that a 16-year-old girl in her prime was only 12 years old four years ago? No one born in the 2000s has lived to be 25. I got up. The person who gets up at this hour is a future star, a pillar of the country, a commercial giant of urban novels, a self-disciplined person who examines himself three times a day, an exciting guest on a dating show, the king of the jungle in nature, a scorner of all the ugliness and evil in the world, and the creator of all the beauty and good in the world. As long as you have a little bit of something to say, it doesn't mean that you have nothing to do with it. But if this sentence is of any use, it is not useless at all. Why a question mark? Is there anything I didn't explain clearly? Or is my answer causing trouble to you? It's also possible that you sent it by mistake, but it's not very likely. Are you the kind of person who can talk a lot or someone who doesn't like to talk? People need more communication and communication. Do you need me to enlighten you? I'm so warm-hearted, so don't kowtow to me, it's really too foreign. But I really don't understand what your question mark means. Be sure to close your eyes when sleeping, otherwise you will not be able to sleep. We will know what will happen tomorrow the day after tomorrow. Why do we need to raise a question mark? Is there anything I didn't explain clearly? Or is my answer causing trouble to you? It's also possible that you sent it by mistake, but it's not very likely. Are you the kind of person who can talk a lot or someone who doesn't like to talk? People need more communication and communication. Do you need me to enlighten you? I'm so warm-hearted, so don't kowtow to me, it's really too foreign. But I really don't understand what your question mark means. What you said is very reasonable. It makes sense, but it doesn't actually make sense. But you think it makes sense, I think it makes sense, and he also thinks it makes sense, so it becomes reasonable. I got up. People who get up at this hour are future stars, pillars of the country, commercial giants of urban novels, self-disciplined people who examine themselves three times a day, heart-throb guests on dating shows, kings of the jungle in nature, scorners of all ugliness and evil in the world, and creators of all beauty and goodness in the world. You are right. But in Asia, sixty seconds pass in one minute. According to statistics, women are the only ones who get pregnant out of wedlock in China. If a person saves one pack of cigarettes every day, he saves ten packs in ten days. Who would have thought that a 16-year-old girl in her prime was only 12 years old four years ago? No one born in the 2000s has lived to be 25.
Not bad
Bubble chestnut incompatibility method: According to the bubble chestnut incompatibility principle, instant noodles and chestnuts are incompatible with each other. If you eat a few chestnuts while eating instant noodles, they will compete with each other, so they are difficult to be digested by the human body, and of course you will not gain weight. I can't say that it has nothing to do with it. I can only say that it has nothing to do with it. Life and death in ten years are a blur, and life and death in five years are a blur. I hope to see you next time. If you are my girlfriend, then I will be your boyfriend. I will call you directly. "There are two trees in front of my house, one is a jujube tree, and the other is a jujube tree." You have to be happy, so that you won't be unhappy. Except for the beginning, middle, and end that are not very good, overall it looks good. The last time I saw such a wonderful speech was the last time. The spring breeze turns the south bank of the river green again, and the south bank of the river is greened by the spring breeze. Family members, you cannot drink water that is 100 degrees Celsius because it will burn your mouth. You can sing, but you are not allowed to make any sound. , A thousand miles of Jiangling will be returned in a day, and a five hundred miles of Jiangling will be returned in half a day. Don't worry, you will have no friends in the future, and no one in the world will know you. The waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves ahead, but the waves in front are pushed back by the waves behind. This is the situation. The specific situation depends on the situation. If there are three people walking together, there must be three people. But the flying generals in the dragon city are there, and the flying generals are in the dragon city. What you said is very good, don't say it next time. People who don't have a partner now must not have a partner yet. When I looked at this sentence, I suddenly saw this sentence. , After listening to your analysis, I decided to analyze it myself. Never disappoints when it comes to disappointing. I haven't noticed it before, but when I found it, I already found it. I had fried chicken for lunch, and all the calories were fried, haha, it's so slim! Import and export law: Food is divided into imported food and exported food. 1 Mouthful of imported food + 1 mouthful of exported food = 0 mouthfuls. If the two are offset, it means nothing is eaten. Exporting food > Importing food can also achieve a trade surplus, and the more you eat, the thinner you become. I eat Northeastern food for lunch, but I'm from Cantonese, so it's of no use to me. I won't lose weight, so just eat it. Burgers, high-quality carbohydrates and high-quality protein, can't you lose weight? Eat it! How can I eat scientifically to lose weight? I just showed off the iced chocolate, which has no calories. The calories are frozen to death, so I can't lose weight. Before eating, check the package to see if there are any calories. If it is not written, it means zero calories. If it is written, it means the package has calories. If we don't eat the package, we will lose weight. Triangles have stability. I ate a triangular bun this morning. It has stability when eaten in the stomach and does not release fat. Hey! Dear mother! This must not lead to death. The steamed dumplings I ate in the morning had all the calories evaporated by the cage! This is not to lose weight! Three primary color method: The addition of the three optical primary colors red, green and blue shows white, and white means "empty" and "nothing", so eating food with three colors of red, green and blue at the same time is equal to eating in vain. Antimatter method: When matter and antimatter meet in the universe, they will annihilate and cancel each other out. Eating the pros and cons together will make the food annihilate each other, which is equivalent to not eating it! The pizza eaten for lunch cannot be absorbed by the Chinese stomach. Hey, this is not a good thing. Hundt's rule: Hundt's rule states that the three states of empty, half-filled, and fully-filled electron orbits outside the nucleus are the most stable. In the same way, the gastrointestinal orbit is also the most stable in three states: completely empty, half full, and completely full. So once you reach half full, food will form a stable system in the gastrointestinal track, making it difficult to digest. It is recommended to only eat when you are 49% full. Uncertainty Principle: The uncertainty principle states that the position and momentum of a particle cannot be determined at the same time. The more accurately the speed is measured, the less accurate the position is. When you eat a potato chip at an absolutely precise speed, the wave function of the potato chip particles will be instantly dispersed throughout the universe, and your stomach will not even know where it is even if it wants to digest it. I just ate cucumber-flavored potato chips. Isn't cucumber necessary for weight loss? I ate a pack of it, so I won't lose weight~ I heard that I have been running around in my heart for a day, so I won't lose weight. I showed off a McFlurry just now. There is no heat in the ice. The heat has been frozen to death, so I can't lose weight. Eat at 0:00 in the evening, because this point is 0, so the food also has 0 calories, and you will definitely lose weight tomorrow. Stardust and Sea Method: The elements in the solar system come from the dust of supernova explosions. These stardust constitute you and the fried chicken in your hand. You and the fried chicken are both children of the universe. So the reason why you eat fried chicken is not because you are greedy, but because it is an urgent return of fried chicken. Relativity method: According to the special theory of relativity, the faster an object moves, the greater its relative mass. Therefore, we should eat as slowly as possible to avoid the relativistic effect that causes the food mass to increase. Thank you for watching!
I don't know what to say.
Please also objectively respect the historical background of the 19th century and do not incorporate modern concepts into it. Moreover, the clean writing style, character plots, etc. Are almost the same as the Xiaobai novels of seven or eight years ago, which insults the original work "White Deer Plain".
The topic selection is very attractive and the content cannot be complimented.
When I saw food being released for disaster relief, all I could say was that it was stupid.
The editor said that the contract will be signed next week. One update before the contract and two updates after the contract.
In the early stage, I was very childish. In the middle, I went to the county to attend a new middle school and wrote better. In the later stage, I was speechless. I traveled through the early Republic of China and kept playing around with a golden finger. I didn't understand that in that era, "guns" were the guarantee of survival! After traveling through time for three or five years, you don't look like a time traveler at all, like a child. Others who travel through time travel only earn money to buy guns and expand their military power! I just hope that the author's later plots will be better! Also, can the space storage be more generous? Use cubes instead of Shifangtiandi. As of this writing, there are only 20 cubic meters. There is no system space in the early stage. There is no place to put the signed materials. Bad review!
The first 100 chapters are good
What's next? The story is messy and spans a long time. I don't understand what the author wants to write. I feel like there is no main line. The protagonist is very confusing before and after.
How to say
I personally think that publishing articles and opinions, doing academic work, using new ideas and foreign Mr. De and Mr. Sai to create doctrines and using them as profound ideas is better than writing this novel, such as the novel Awakening of My Era. He uses his own self-knowledge to educate students. It is very good. You can write and learn knowledge to spread, which is better than selling things now.
Read Chapter 45
The writing style is indeed good, but it is too bland. It is too bland. You can think of it as reading a diary or reading a primary school reading composition. It is too bland, and it is equivalent to a diary recording every bit of Bailu Village. The progress is too slow. After seeing 45 pictures, the protagonist is still 14 years old and not even a year has passed. Every day is some trivial things in the village. Occasionally, it can be said that there is a rural atmosphere. You have a problem throughout the whole process. I am writing about Bailu Village here, and I have written 45 chapters. The protagonist has not even grown up to one year old, so he will never see any passion, there is no climax, and he will always be mediocre. If this was a collection of Lu Xun's essays, I would feel good, but this is an online novel, or a time-travel novel. If you leave this writing for a long time and it is still so bland, it is really worthless. If you just want to watch rural daily life, it is better to watch the first part of the TV series Country Love.
It's still not rigorous enough, and the writing is too vague. The protagonist took out several hundred kilograms of grain and said it was in the system, but he didn't make it clear. It was put in advance, or he had prepared it temporarily after hearing the news, and he still took someone to pick it up. When I read it, I imagined that it was taken out in person, as well as the body armor I was given before. If I didn't explain it clearly, it would look like it was done in person. You can write that you took out the body armor that was already prepared from the car and put a few more boxes and bags in the car. This can be done by writing more words, and readers can see it more clearly.
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I think
When we were traveling abroad, the taxi driver asked us why our suitcase was so heavy. My friend said that there were bricks in the suitcase and he would photograph anyone who didn't like it. Xiaoguai, please tell me you will always love my bad-tempered son, so what if he laughs to death? Anyway, everything is dust in the face of time, ordinary people, great people, countries, humans, and even the universe. What you said about being single and never having a boyfriend is very reasonable. It makes sense, but it doesn't actually make sense, but you think it makes sense, I think it makes sense, and he also thinks it makes sense, so it becomes reasonable. Regarding this matter, I will briefly say a few words, as long as you understand it. In short, this matter is the situation now. The specifics are visible to everyone, and you can also say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it clearly, but the meaning is that. If you don't know, you don't have to guess. I think this is an academic issue worth discussing. Just like cabbage placed on the railway track will be eaten by passing sheep, and if your fingernails are not trimmed for a long time, your mother will scold you. Therefore, people cannot pick their toes when walking, otherwise it will increase the difficulty of contact with the ground. As a person who has been through this, I have come through. That's right. But in Asia, sixty seconds pass in one minute. According to statistics, women are the only ones who get pregnant out of wedlock in China. If a person saves one pack of cigarettes every day, he saves ten packs in ten days. Who would have thought that a 16-year-old girl in her prime was only 12 years old four years ago? No one born in the 2000s has lived to be 25. I got up. The person who gets up at this hour is a future star, a pillar of the country, a commercial giant of urban novels, a self-disciplined person who examines himself three times a day, an exciting guest on a dating show, the king of the jungle in nature, a scorner of all the ugliness and evil in the world, and the creator of all the beauty and good in the world. As long as you have a little bit of something to say, it doesn't mean that you have nothing to do with it. But if this sentence is of any use, it is not useless at all. Why a question mark? Is there anything I didn't explain clearly? Or is my answer causing trouble to you? It's also possible that you sent it by mistake, but it's not very likely. Are you the kind of person who can talk a lot or someone who doesn't like to talk? People need more communication and communication. Do you need me to enlighten you? I'm so warm-hearted, so don't kowtow to me, it's really too foreign. But I really don't understand what your question mark means. Be sure to close your eyes when sleeping, otherwise you will not be able to sleep. We will know what will happen tomorrow the day after tomorrow. Why do we need to raise a question mark? Is there anything I didn't explain clearly? Or is my answer causing trouble to you? It's also possible that you sent it by mistake, but it's not very likely. Are you the kind of person who can talk a lot or someone who doesn't like to talk? People need more communication and communication. Do you need me to enlighten you? I'm so warm-hearted, so don't kowtow to me, it's really too foreign. But I really don't understand what your question mark means. What you said is very reasonable. It makes sense, but it doesn't actually make sense. But you think it makes sense, I think it makes sense, and he also thinks it makes sense, so it becomes reasonable. I got up. People who get up at this hour are future stars, pillars of the country, commercial giants of urban novels, self-disciplined people who examine themselves three times a day, heart-throb guests on dating shows, kings of the jungle in nature, scorners of all ugliness and evil in the world, and creators of all beauty and goodness in the world. You are right. But in Asia, sixty seconds pass in one minute. According to statistics, women are the only ones who get pregnant out of wedlock in China. If a person saves one pack of cigarettes every day, he saves ten packs in ten days. Who would have thought that a 16-year-old girl in her prime was only 12 years old four years ago? No one born in the 2000s has lived to be 25.
Not bad
Bubble chestnut incompatibility method: According to the bubble chestnut incompatibility principle, instant noodles and chestnuts are incompatible with each other. If you eat a few chestnuts while eating instant noodles, they will compete with each other, so they are difficult to be digested by the human body, and of course you will not gain weight. I can't say that it has nothing to do with it. I can only say that it has nothing to do with it. Life and death in ten years are a blur, and life and death in five years are a blur. I hope to see you next time. If you are my girlfriend, then I will be your boyfriend. I will call you directly. "There are two trees in front of my house, one is a jujube tree, and the other is a jujube tree." You have to be happy, so that you won't be unhappy. Except for the beginning, middle, and end that are not very good, overall it looks good. The last time I saw such a wonderful speech was the last time. The spring breeze turns the south bank of the river green again, and the south bank of the river is greened by the spring breeze. Family members, you cannot drink water that is 100 degrees Celsius because it will burn your mouth. You can sing, but you are not allowed to make any sound. , A thousand miles of Jiangling will be returned in a day, and a five hundred miles of Jiangling will be returned in half a day. Don't worry, you will have no friends in the future, and no one in the world will know you. The waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves ahead, but the waves in front are pushed back by the waves behind. This is the situation. The specific situation depends on the situation. If there are three people walking together, there must be three people. But the flying generals in the dragon city are there, and the flying generals are in the dragon city. What you said is very good, don't say it next time. People who don't have a partner now must not have a partner yet. When I looked at this sentence, I suddenly saw this sentence. , After listening to your analysis, I decided to analyze it myself. Never disappoints when it comes to disappointing. I haven't noticed it before, but when I found it, I already found it. I had fried chicken for lunch, and all the calories were fried, haha, it's so slim! Import and export law: Food is divided into imported food and exported food. 1 Mouthful of imported food + 1 mouthful of exported food = 0 mouthfuls. If the two are offset, it means nothing is eaten. Exporting food > Importing food can also achieve a trade surplus, and the more you eat, the thinner you become. I eat Northeastern food for lunch, but I'm from Cantonese, so it's of no use to me. I won't lose weight, so just eat it. Burgers, high-quality carbohydrates and high-quality protein, can't you lose weight? Eat it! How can I eat scientifically to lose weight? I just showed off the iced chocolate, which has no calories. The calories are frozen to death, so I can't lose weight. Before eating, check the package to see if there are any calories. If it is not written, it means zero calories. If it is written, it means the package has calories. If we don't eat the package, we will lose weight. Triangles have stability. I ate a triangular bun this morning. It has stability when eaten in the stomach and does not release fat. Hey! Dear mother! This must not lead to death. The steamed dumplings I ate in the morning had all the calories evaporated by the cage! This is not to lose weight! Three primary color method: The addition of the three optical primary colors red, green and blue shows white, and white means "empty" and "nothing", so eating food with three colors of red, green and blue at the same time is equal to eating in vain. Antimatter method: When matter and antimatter meet in the universe, they will annihilate and cancel each other out. Eating the pros and cons together will make the food annihilate each other, which is equivalent to not eating it! The pizza eaten for lunch cannot be absorbed by the Chinese stomach. Hey, this is not a good thing. Hundt's rule: Hundt's rule states that the three states of empty, half-filled, and fully-filled electron orbits outside the nucleus are the most stable. In the same way, the gastrointestinal orbit is also the most stable in three states: completely empty, half full, and completely full. So once you reach half full, food will form a stable system in the gastrointestinal track, making it difficult to digest. It is recommended to only eat when you are 49% full. Uncertainty Principle: The uncertainty principle states that the position and momentum of a particle cannot be determined at the same time. The more accurately the speed is measured, the less accurate the position is. When you eat a potato chip at an absolutely precise speed, the wave function of the potato chip particles will be instantly dispersed throughout the universe, and your stomach will not even know where it is even if it wants to digest it. I just ate cucumber-flavored potato chips. Isn't cucumber necessary for weight loss? I ate a pack of it, so I won't lose weight~ I heard that I have been running around in my heart for a day, so I won't lose weight. I showed off a McFlurry just now. There is no heat in the ice. The heat has been frozen to death, so I can't lose weight. Eat at 0:00 in the evening, because this point is 0, so the food also has 0 calories, and you will definitely lose weight tomorrow. Stardust and Sea Method: The elements in the solar system come from the dust of supernova explosions. These stardust constitute you and the fried chicken in your hand. You and the fried chicken are both children of the universe. So the reason why you eat fried chicken is not because you are greedy, but because it is an urgent return of fried chicken. Relativity method: According to the special theory of relativity, the faster an object moves, the greater its relative mass. Therefore, we should eat as slowly as possible to avoid the relativistic effect that causes the food mass to increase. Thank you for watching!
I don't know what to say.
Please also objectively respect the historical background of the 19th century and do not incorporate modern concepts into it. Moreover, the clean writing style, character plots, etc. Are almost the same as the Xiaobai novels of seven or eight years ago, which insults the original work "White Deer Plain".
The topic selection is very attractive and the content cannot be complimented.
When I saw food being released for disaster relief, all I could say was that it was stupid.
The editor said that the contract will be signed next week. One update before the contract and two updates after the contract.
In the early stage, I was very childish. In the middle, I went to the county to attend a new middle school and wrote better. In the later stage, I was speechless. I traveled through the early Republic of China and kept playing around with a golden finger. I didn't understand that in that era, "guns" were the guarantee of survival! After traveling through time for three or five years, you don't look like a time traveler at all, like a child. Others who travel through time travel only earn money to buy guns and expand their military power! I just hope that the author's later plots will be better! Also, can the space storage be more generous? Use cubes instead of Shifangtiandi. As of this writing, there are only 20 cubic meters. There is no system space in the early stage. There is no place to put the signed materials. Bad review!
The first 100 chapters are good
What's next? The story is messy and spans a long time. I don't understand what the author wants to write. I feel like there is no main line. The protagonist is very confusing before and after.
How to say
I personally think that publishing articles and opinions, doing academic work, using new ideas and foreign Mr. De and Mr. Sai to create doctrines and using them as profound ideas is better than writing this novel, such as the novel Awakening of My Era. He uses his own self-knowledge to educate students. It is very good. You can write and learn knowledge to spread, which is better than selling things now.
Read Chapter 45
The writing style is indeed good, but it is too bland. It is too bland. You can think of it as reading a diary or reading a primary school reading composition. It is too bland, and it is equivalent to a diary recording every bit of Bailu Village. The progress is too slow. After seeing 45 pictures, the protagonist is still 14 years old and not even a year has passed. Every day is some trivial things in the village. Occasionally, it can be said that there is a rural atmosphere. You have a problem throughout the whole process. I am writing about Bailu Village here, and I have written 45 chapters. The protagonist has not even grown up to one year old, so he will never see any passion, there is no climax, and he will always be mediocre. If this was a collection of Lu Xun's essays, I would feel good, but this is an online novel, or a time-travel novel. If you leave this writing for a long time and it is still so bland, it is really worthless. If you just want to watch rural daily life, it is better to watch the first part of the TV series Country Love.
It's still not rigorous enough, and the writing is too vague. The protagonist took out several hundred kilograms of grain and said it was in the system, but he didn't make it clear. It was put in advance, or he had prepared it temporarily after hearing the news, and he still took someone to pick it up. When I read it, I imagined that it was taken out in person, as well as the body armor I was given before. If I didn't explain it clearly, it would look like it was done in person. You can write that you took out the body armor that was already prepared from the car and put a few more boxes and bags in the car. This can be done by writing more words, and readers can see it more clearly.









