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About This Novel
Yang Xiao had saved the down payment for a house for several years, but his girlfriend used it to help her ex-boyfriend tide over his difficulties! Yang Xiao: "Go to him immediately and ask for the money back. I won't lend it to him." Bu Yaolian: "No, no, absolutely not! I want the money back, what will he do?" Yang Xiao broke up with him decisively and took him to court afterwards! Bu Yaolian bit back... ... Yang Xiao: "I didn't order takeout!" Liu Yi: "It's your takeaway!" Li Wanji: "Have you heard..." ...
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Official(119)Scraped 13d ago
poison
If there are multiple female protagonists, you should write more free and easy. Don't start off by being very affectionate and in love with the female protagonist. Then she becomes your girlfriend and then they end up having a double fight. The male protagonist is directly written as a stallion, one after the other without any brain...
Thoughts after reading
This book tells the story of the protagonist Yang Xiao, who transformed from a poor guy who was looked down upon by others to a chance to reach the pinnacle of life. It describes the darkness, corruption, and evil of human nature in this society in the author's heart, but he wants to change it through the power of law. (In addition, this book has many advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are the image and detailed description of the characters, the description of the environment, and the language expression. However, the plot of the story is a bit old, and the development of things is still very good.) Give a five-star review, encourage the author, don't care about other people's opinions, come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! (ง˙o˙)ว
Have to say The author of this book is Really versatile Can combine shamelessness and tea-smells It's so well written
I'm so self-satisfied that I haven't even reached the level of cool writing.
I'd like to give you some pertinent advice. It doesn't require a high degree of literary talent or depth in what you write, but it should at least be a little bit real. It's best to describe people realistically when writing urban cool articles. Even if you are down and out, it is impossible for people in the same class to directly mock you in the group. No matter how selfish you are, you must be able to show off. Even if the protagonist's situation appears on the Internet, most people will pity the protagonist and scold the woman. If someone mocks a miserable person like this on the Internet, they will be immediately flushed. Not to mention that in life, it is impossible for everyone to show such a face. Ordinary people are generally sympathetic. Even if they are really selfish, they will give a few words of false comfort and will not let others see their face. Moreover, it is impossible for a high school classmate who has not contacted you for so long to suddenly transfer 30,000 yuan to you. Even if you write about a family member or a dead brother, this is too fake.
There is really no need to forcibly reduce one's intelligence. Let's return the cool article to the cool article.
Let's not talk about why your former classmates are targeting you and what outrageous things you have done that are so annoying. Why would a classmate who has only been classmates for a few years not hesitate to transfer 30,000? Then the classic slap in the face is really unnecessary. It's 2022 and I'm tired of seeing this routine. It's not scary to read cool articles, it's scary to be smart, 😅😅😅
The author said that life is quite miserable. It is fake to get rich after getting married. The rest is just life experience. I feel sorry for the author. I really can't find a class. The name should be as awkward as possible.
Avoid pitfalls, enter with caution, and be mentally prepared
It's rubbish, the subject matter is good, it's a God's favourite, but is the heroine bad? Abandon the pit
It looked okay at first, but the more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became. The writing was all about nonsense, the character names were extremely perfunctory, and the more I watched the plot, the more speechless I became.
It's well written. I followed it on Douyin. I've been reading all the chapters I can read at home these past two days. I've read a lot of other novels and it's good to read this kind of mindless and refreshing article. I hope the author will work hard and speed up the update of the angle to finish this novel as soon as possible. Come on😽
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Official(119)Scraped 13d ago
poison
If there are multiple female protagonists, you should write more free and easy. Don't start off by being very affectionate and in love with the female protagonist. Then she becomes your girlfriend and then they end up having a double fight. The male protagonist is directly written as a stallion, one after the other without any brain...
Thoughts after reading
This book tells the story of the protagonist Yang Xiao, who transformed from a poor guy who was looked down upon by others to a chance to reach the pinnacle of life. It describes the darkness, corruption, and evil of human nature in this society in the author's heart, but he wants to change it through the power of law. (In addition, this book has many advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are the image and detailed description of the characters, the description of the environment, and the language expression. However, the plot of the story is a bit old, and the development of things is still very good.) Give a five-star review, encourage the author, don't care about other people's opinions, come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! (ง˙o˙)ว
Have to say The author of this book is Really versatile Can combine shamelessness and tea-smells It's so well written
I'm so self-satisfied that I haven't even reached the level of cool writing.
I'd like to give you some pertinent advice. It doesn't require a high degree of literary talent or depth in what you write, but it should at least be a little bit real. It's best to describe people realistically when writing urban cool articles. Even if you are down and out, it is impossible for people in the same class to directly mock you in the group. No matter how selfish you are, you must be able to show off. Even if the protagonist's situation appears on the Internet, most people will pity the protagonist and scold the woman. If someone mocks a miserable person like this on the Internet, they will be immediately flushed. Not to mention that in life, it is impossible for everyone to show such a face. Ordinary people are generally sympathetic. Even if they are really selfish, they will give a few words of false comfort and will not let others see their face. Moreover, it is impossible for a high school classmate who has not contacted you for so long to suddenly transfer 30,000 yuan to you. Even if you write about a family member or a dead brother, this is too fake.
There is really no need to forcibly reduce one's intelligence. Let's return the cool article to the cool article.
Let's not talk about why your former classmates are targeting you and what outrageous things you have done that are so annoying. Why would a classmate who has only been classmates for a few years not hesitate to transfer 30,000? Then the classic slap in the face is really unnecessary. It's 2022 and I'm tired of seeing this routine. It's not scary to read cool articles, it's scary to be smart, 😅😅😅
The author said that life is quite miserable. It is fake to get rich after getting married. The rest is just life experience. I feel sorry for the author. I really can't find a class. The name should be as awkward as possible.
Avoid pitfalls, enter with caution, and be mentally prepared
It's rubbish, the subject matter is good, it's a God's favourite, but is the heroine bad? Abandon the pit
It looked okay at first, but the more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became. The writing was all about nonsense, the character names were extremely perfunctory, and the more I watched the plot, the more speechless I became.
It's well written. I followed it on Douyin. I've been reading all the chapters I can read at home these past two days. I've read a lot of other novels and it's good to read this kind of mindless and refreshing article. I hope the author will work hard and speed up the update of the angle to finish this novel as soon as possible. Come on😽









