After Making a Will, the Whole Network Burst into Tears after the Truth Was Exposed
About This Novel
Lin Yi traveled to a parallel world and met Bai Yueguang Chen Yuwei in his heart. When his career was on the right track, he also awakened the system. Just when he felt that his life was about to be complete, he was diagnosed with an incurable disease. After three years of sober treatment in isolation overseas, he learned that Chen Yuwei was pregnant before he left and gave birth to the child. But thinking that his condition might worsen at any time, Lin Yi hoped that they would forget about him. So I chose another way to express my love. Later, he secretly helped Chen Yuwei become a CEO worth billions. Help your daughter clear away all the darkness on her way to growth. Feeling that your life is coming to an end. Lin Yi made a will and left all his property to his wife and daughter. When the truth was revealed, countless people shed tears.
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Official(193)Scraped 11d ago
Good
As always, themes such as memories are exposed all over the Internet. The difference is the male protagonist's indifferent mood. As a terminally ill patient, I really feel that this man is quite real when he talks in the hospital bed. The male protagonist has really done a lot for his wife, but I don't want to deny that the female protagonist has also made a lot of efforts. Both male and female protagonists are great people, and you are just over thirty chapters! Too little! ! ! Give me more quickly! ! !
I was convinced. I was very moved at first, but then I became less and less impressed.
The protagonist's desire to die has highlighted his difficulty in all aspects, and he has never owed anything to his children. They didn't give his wife and daughter a chance to forgive him and be happy, and they didn't let him die, so they completely stopped thinking about him. And if you want to write a long novel, there is a high probability that the protagonist will not die in this situation, but I feel that there is too much foreshadowing and the pace of advancement is too slow. It's like, one thing, whipping the corpse repeatedly...
good
It's not as brainless as other books of the same type. The netizens and the protagonist's relatives will not ignore the good things you have done just because you did something wrong. Their IQs are also online, so you can take a look.
Which one kills the male protagonist?
Which one kills the male protagonist? Which one kills the male protagonist?
Did the male protagonist die in the end? I feel better if he is dead.
I feel that I have written so much and laid the groundwork for a long time. Even the title is about a will. It would be too stupid to create some kind of system to save the protagonist. I was moved for nothing. The male protagonist has been in pain for so long. The system does not respond. Even when he is about to die, it responds. I will abandon the book immediately after writing this.
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The writing is really messy, sometimes it talks about other families, sometimes it talks about the daughter's memories, sometimes it's the male protagonist's monologue (at the same time)?
Your update speed is a bit slow, the plot advancement is also a bit slow, and each chapter is a bit fragmented. The most important thing is that every time the chapter is broken, it is very uncomfortable.
Isn't this novel just about telling the story of my daughter's life? It's getting more and more boring
been crying
I have never spent money to read novels, but this time I am willing to break it. As long as you write, I will keep following you.
this system
Excellent, even if you have a system and still have a terminal illness, this is probably the most useless system🙄
Rating
Community(0)
Official(193)Scraped 11d ago
Good
As always, themes such as memories are exposed all over the Internet. The difference is the male protagonist's indifferent mood. As a terminally ill patient, I really feel that this man is quite real when he talks in the hospital bed. The male protagonist has really done a lot for his wife, but I don't want to deny that the female protagonist has also made a lot of efforts. Both male and female protagonists are great people, and you are just over thirty chapters! Too little! ! ! Give me more quickly! ! !
I was convinced. I was very moved at first, but then I became less and less impressed.
The protagonist's desire to die has highlighted his difficulty in all aspects, and he has never owed anything to his children. They didn't give his wife and daughter a chance to forgive him and be happy, and they didn't let him die, so they completely stopped thinking about him. And if you want to write a long novel, there is a high probability that the protagonist will not die in this situation, but I feel that there is too much foreshadowing and the pace of advancement is too slow. It's like, one thing, whipping the corpse repeatedly...
good
It's not as brainless as other books of the same type. The netizens and the protagonist's relatives will not ignore the good things you have done just because you did something wrong. Their IQs are also online, so you can take a look.
Which one kills the male protagonist?
Which one kills the male protagonist? Which one kills the male protagonist?
Did the male protagonist die in the end? I feel better if he is dead.
I feel that I have written so much and laid the groundwork for a long time. Even the title is about a will. It would be too stupid to create some kind of system to save the protagonist. I was moved for nothing. The male protagonist has been in pain for so long. The system does not respond. Even when he is about to die, it responds. I will abandon the book immediately after writing this.
?
The writing is really messy, sometimes it talks about other families, sometimes it talks about the daughter's memories, sometimes it's the male protagonist's monologue (at the same time)?
Your update speed is a bit slow, the plot advancement is also a bit slow, and each chapter is a bit fragmented. The most important thing is that every time the chapter is broken, it is very uncomfortable.
Isn't this novel just about telling the story of my daughter's life? It's getting more and more boring
been crying
I have never spent money to read novels, but this time I am willing to break it. As long as you write, I will keep following you.
this system
Excellent, even if you have a system and still have a terminal illness, this is probably the most useless system🙄
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