After the Breakup, Dr. Jiang Begged for Reconciliation Every Day
About This Novel
Lin Manchuan has a secret that everyone knows. She has had a crush on the young medical genius Jiang Beiyu for a long time, and she has liked him since they met in college. But he was so proud that even if he endured ridicule and bullying for him, he could not get back a look back at him. Then Jiang Beiyu went abroad and settled down, and Lin Manchuan lost contact with him. After she saved up enough money to pursue him, she learned from conversations between him and his colleagues that her position was a problem that she couldn't get rid of. Lin Manchuan knew that this relationship of several years was over. "Jiang Beiyu, I am not without dignity." After sending the last sentence, Lin Manchuan changed his mobile phone, took out the phone card and threw it in the airport trash can, and boarded the flight back home. Later, Lin Manchuan met Jiang Beiyu again and found out that during the time she left, the genius doctor who was known as an extremely rational man had harmed himself as many as ten times. "Manchuan, forgive me for understanding it too late. Without you, I realized that every minute is meaningless."
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
This style of sadistic writing must have been popular when I was in junior high school. It was just a few years ago, but now it lags behind. Unless you have something novel in the plot setting, otherwise this kind of story will be bad. The subsequent plot is nothing more than the appearance of the second male character, showing kindness to the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist feels a sense of crisis, reconciles, and then experiences misunderstandings. The female protagonist finally decides to leave the male protagonist, and then starts the crematorium to pursue his wife. The copywriting is not good either. The last sentence is too youthful and painful, right? ? ? ! ! ! What does it mean that he hurt himself more than a dozen times in the years after the heroine left, so that he could show his affection? Then the heroine has been with him for several years, and you haven't seen how good she is? To put it bluntly, your novel is too superficial, and it feels like it was written within a template. The role of the second female lead is also too classic. The male protagonist's character image is also not strong enough. Since you have set up the fact that the heroine's feelings for the two of them started to waver because of the existence of the second heroine, you must at least write clearly why the hero is more special to the second heroine than to the second heroine? It's because the two of them knew each other before. To what extent did they know each other? Otherwise, if a school girl from the same department has a gentle attitude, then I can only say that the male protagonist is a central air conditioner. He allows her to cross the line even though he clearly has a girlfriend. Either it is intentional, or he enjoys it too, so don't try to whitewash him later.
This is too romantic, so give up.
Self-harm "long" 10 times? I should use "many"
If it's not Big Be in the end, I feel sorry for the foreshadowing. Too explosive I don't know if it's a characterization problem or something else. I think it's so difficult to make your girlfriend give up all the time. In the early stage, it has been foreshadowed that the male protagonist will be more powerful and excellent in medical skills. Is this the result? A bit outrageous to be honest
How can the heroine not live without a man?
For such domestic violence men, they will kneel down and beg for mercy after the domestic violence. Women often choose to forgive and warn others not to hurt the domestic violence man. For such scumbag men and bitches, the only choice is to bless them and prevent them from harming Chiyu.
In order to see his crematorium, I have to chase him
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
H looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good
If the female protagonist were with the male protagonist, I would beat the author to death
The author's writing is really good and beautiful. I wish the author's future partners will be as good as this.
It's okay! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really think it's okay!
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
This style of sadistic writing must have been popular when I was in junior high school. It was just a few years ago, but now it lags behind. Unless you have something novel in the plot setting, otherwise this kind of story will be bad. The subsequent plot is nothing more than the appearance of the second male character, showing kindness to the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist feels a sense of crisis, reconciles, and then experiences misunderstandings. The female protagonist finally decides to leave the male protagonist, and then starts the crematorium to pursue his wife. The copywriting is not good either. The last sentence is too youthful and painful, right? ? ? ! ! ! What does it mean that he hurt himself more than a dozen times in the years after the heroine left, so that he could show his affection? Then the heroine has been with him for several years, and you haven't seen how good she is? To put it bluntly, your novel is too superficial, and it feels like it was written within a template. The role of the second female lead is also too classic. The male protagonist's character image is also not strong enough. Since you have set up the fact that the heroine's feelings for the two of them started to waver because of the existence of the second heroine, you must at least write clearly why the hero is more special to the second heroine than to the second heroine? It's because the two of them knew each other before. To what extent did they know each other? Otherwise, if a school girl from the same department has a gentle attitude, then I can only say that the male protagonist is a central air conditioner. He allows her to cross the line even though he clearly has a girlfriend. Either it is intentional, or he enjoys it too, so don't try to whitewash him later.
This is too romantic, so give up.
Self-harm "long" 10 times? I should use "many"
If it's not Big Be in the end, I feel sorry for the foreshadowing. Too explosive I don't know if it's a characterization problem or something else. I think it's so difficult to make your girlfriend give up all the time. In the early stage, it has been foreshadowed that the male protagonist will be more powerful and excellent in medical skills. Is this the result? A bit outrageous to be honest
How can the heroine not live without a man?
For such domestic violence men, they will kneel down and beg for mercy after the domestic violence. Women often choose to forgive and warn others not to hurt the domestic violence man. For such scumbag men and bitches, the only choice is to bless them and prevent them from harming Chiyu.
In order to see his crematorium, I have to chase him
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
H looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good
If the female protagonist were with the male protagonist, I would beat the author to death
The author's writing is really good and beautiful. I wish the author's future partners will be as good as this.
It's okay! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really think it's okay!
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