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I feel that the path is too biased. Let's talk about the protagonist first. If you look at too many relatives, the protagonist will definitely be kidnapped if he takes too much technology. Now let's talk about the development of the protagonist. Since the protagonist is given such a golden finger, why are you afraid of giving an artificial intelligence?怕背叛,作者写成不可背叛就行对不对! Don't be so serious, just take a look! With artificial intelligence, the protagonist can monitor the network. In terms of recruitment, he can detect spies, protect his family from threats, know who to recruit, and can take care of many aspects. Also, the development of the protagonist is too poor! There is no villain in more than 90 chapters, no power of his own, no weapons of his own, and no water meter checked? Since the protagonist's cancer treatment has not been investigated, are you kidding me? Finally, since the protagonist is embodied, look at the fact that the protagonist can carry 3 tons of stuff. With such advanced technology over there, don't they have space-based weapons? With this, we won't be afraid of threats from all major powers! In summary, development is too uneven, some places are too watery, and planning is not done well. Personal summary, please point out any shortcomings. Don't curse!

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Don't you say "" I said "" He said "" Li Luo said "→_→ Blah blah blah. Wait, wait. For example: "You're sleepy, get up quickly." Zhang Mingyang smiled and Li Luo urged. Li Luo looked at Zhang Mingyang and asked puzzledly, "Well, the next class is next." "The teacher wants to take names, there are no classes, you have slept through all the morning classes," Zhang Mingyang said with a smile. 可以这样写:张明阳笑着催促"睡迷糊了吧,赶紧起来"李洛看着张明阳头上打满问号"嗯? It's the next class." Zhang Mingyang was a little dumbfounded. "The teacher wants to take your name, and there is the next class. You slept late in the morning class." You have a lot more. Basically, your entire text is in such a pale narrative, which makes people read it like chanting sutras and notepads, without any sense of substitution. Although we are all very ignorant now, we can't just make up for it. I also changed it very clearly, but everyone will understand after reading it. It's comfortable. If you don't believe it, ask everyone. This is what many great writers write like this. Why don't you learn from it? Every time I see a writer like this, I get a headache. I've read the book for 20 years. I believe you. I've thought about it a lot and I don't want to talk about it. I've seen so many novices writing like this. I don't know if they all graduated from junior high school. It's rare for me to complain. I'm free today.

When I first started watching it, I didn't know what to expect next. It looked pretty good at first