I Changed My Qi Number in the Red Mansion

Let's not talk about the unreasonableness of letting him serve as this official. After he became the prefect of Shuntian. 1. I have never written about one day's yamen life. 2. Directly ask for leave for half a year and go to Yangzhou. 3. No one outside the family regards him as the prefect. 4. He himself does not walk around the world as a prefect but as a noble young master. When meeting officials at all levels in Yangzhou and Suzhou, everyone remembered that Jia Lian was still the prefect of Shuntian Prefecture, the No. 1 Prefecture in the world. The prefect of Suzhou also had a conflict with him and treated him not as a prefect but as a villain. Is this in line with official rules? What is the significance of this setting of the prefect of Shuntian Prefecture?

The article is generally good and quite exciting. But not saving Xiangling is a failure. Xiangling is more pitiful than Qingwen, and the danger she is in is more urgent than Qingwen. Xiangling's status in the story is also higher than Qingwen. The best way to save Qingwen is to let the story unfold along the plot, and then lend a helping hand when she is sick and driven away. Because Qingwen and Baoyu did not cross boundaries in the end, and the emotional entanglement between her and Baoyu further highlighted Baoyu's passion and incompetence. It was too early to save Qingwen, and all these plots were gone. It is not appropriate to abandon Xiangling and become Xue Pan's concubine early. Xiangling is actually a very important character throughout the whole story. Many main characters have connections and friendships with her, but they all gave up on her and did not let her escape her tragic fate. Jia Yucun, Baoyu, Daiyu, Aunt Xue, Baochai, these real or fake sages can help more or less, but none of them can. In addition, I have been entangled with Wang Xifeng for too long and there is no winner yet. The portrayal of Xue Pan was also not very successful. He talked too much and did not fit the character of Erluozi.

In the book, aunts and aunts are clearly distinguished, and aunts are concubines, such as Aunt Zhao. An aunt should be called aunt in spoken language, such as Aunt Xue. Although modern people may not think it matters, the difference in the book is very obvious.

No one can die? But you must die, the writing is so rubbish, I'm speechless, it's home

You all know about Wang Xifeng's power manipulation, human life lawsuits, and loan sharking, and you just talk about it. Because in a society where filial piety is greater than heaven, the elders in the family cannot refute, the husband and wife cannot reprimand, and they are still worried about confiscating the family and exterminating the clan, so they still have the support of immortals to travel through time.

To be honest, it is indeed quite novel at the beginning, but the shortcomings are also too obvious. In order to recruit other women to die, they gang up on Wang Xifeng. According to the logic of the original work, if Jia Lian is so awesome in the article, Wang Xifeng, do you care about Mrs. Wang's family? In the original work, it is because Jia Lian is too useless and cannot be counted on at all, so he follows Mrs. Wang and goes to find out how big an official Shuntian Prefect is equivalent to the current mayor of Beijing. Let's talk about it again. If Jia Lian can be such a high official, he will definitely be the best in the family. Who dares to bb

There's not much to say, it's very well written and exciting.

Personality guarantee, there is absolutely no "bad description", but it was suddenly blocked. Some people say they were reported. I feel bad. I revised each chapter several times, and finally checked carefully to make sure there were no typos, because I was afraid that readers would feel "bitter" after reading my book. The words I wrote with my hard work are used by you as a needle to stab me in the back. I really feel uncomfortable, so I just said a few words.

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