I Asked You to Be a Sparring Partner, and You Became a Swordsman for the Young Master?
by There Is No Fort In Beechburg
About This Novel
Su Mu, who was the Little Celestial Master of Longhu Mountain in her previous life, woke up and traveled directly to an ordinary fantasy family-- A gambling father, a seriously ill mother, young siblings, a broken home... Su Mu, who was numb, could only take it as it came. No one supports me Qingyunzhi? I borrowed money to go to the top of the mountain! In order to save his mother and change the fate of his family, Su Bai had no choice but to go out and look for opportunities. Fortunately, Lingxiu was chosen as a sparring partner by the young master from the Xiuxian family who came out to play! But the young master's talent was mediocre and he was unwilling to endure hardship, so... He had a plan in mind: let Su Bai join the sect's holy land in his place. So... The world of poverty has lost an insignificant blade of grass, while the world of immortality has gained a thousand-year-old wizard who is famous throughout the world! At the age of six, you practice your Qi, at the age of eight you build your foundation, at the age of ten you condense your spiritual sea, and at the age of thirteen you form the golden elixir, which becomes your own sword bone. A single thought can open the gate of heaven... Countless guys who claim to be geniuses have become the threshold for just having a chance to see Su Bai's heels. Ten years later, the second generation cultivator was preparing to take Su Bai home. When they met, he was stunned. No, man! I asked you to be my sparring partner. How did you become a true swordsman? ?
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Official(16)Scraped 1d ago
It's messy, what are you writing? Don't you know how to memorize data? The data before and after are completely different. You can't write like this without thinking.
This preface does not match the postscript. Whoever has read it will know. Anyway, I read it and uninstalled it.
Not to mention the chaotic writing of "Five Years Old and Fifteen Years Old". He just killed that Chen Changsheng and was worried about the Chen family's revenge. The elder of your sect is only at the spiritual level. You can't let the Chen family run away to a higher one. Otherwise, why would Chen Changsheng join the sect? He can cultivate well at home.
After looking at the introduction, there is no need to try the trick.
Originally, the introduction seemed okay. The sentence "One thought opens the door to heaven" at the end of the introduction made me not want to read it. Poisonous articles are always accompanied by stupid words such as "open the licking door", "once stunned forever", "poisonous for eternity", "ancient kidney body", etc. I advise all book friends to run away when encountering such dark words!
The content is okay, but the realm and age are too confusing.
It's really wrong. AI, you should check it out. It makes me very angry.
Don't tell the truth
One is five years old and the other is fifteen. I'm afraid it's not written by AI, so it won't be reconciled.
Overall it's okay, but the plot is lagging, and the preface really doesn't match the postscript. The first 20 yuan of medium-grade spiritual stones becomes 200 yuan later. There are really countless examples like this. I don't know which body part you used to write this novel.
The plot is really confusing, and you can't watch it without thinking.
something
Take a look at Chapter 10 and Chapter 21 for yourself. The preface and the follower do not match.
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Official(16)Scraped 1d ago
It's messy, what are you writing? Don't you know how to memorize data? The data before and after are completely different. You can't write like this without thinking.
This preface does not match the postscript. Whoever has read it will know. Anyway, I read it and uninstalled it.
Not to mention the chaotic writing of "Five Years Old and Fifteen Years Old". He just killed that Chen Changsheng and was worried about the Chen family's revenge. The elder of your sect is only at the spiritual level. You can't let the Chen family run away to a higher one. Otherwise, why would Chen Changsheng join the sect? He can cultivate well at home.
After looking at the introduction, there is no need to try the trick.
Originally, the introduction seemed okay. The sentence "One thought opens the door to heaven" at the end of the introduction made me not want to read it. Poisonous articles are always accompanied by stupid words such as "open the licking door", "once stunned forever", "poisonous for eternity", "ancient kidney body", etc. I advise all book friends to run away when encountering such dark words!
The content is okay, but the realm and age are too confusing.
It's really wrong. AI, you should check it out. It makes me very angry.
Don't tell the truth
One is five years old and the other is fifteen. I'm afraid it's not written by AI, so it won't be reconciled.
Overall it's okay, but the plot is lagging, and the preface really doesn't match the postscript. The first 20 yuan of medium-grade spiritual stones becomes 200 yuan later. There are really countless examples like this. I don't know which body part you used to write this novel.
The plot is really confusing, and you can't watch it without thinking.
something
Take a look at Chapter 10 and Chapter 21 for yourself. The preface and the follower do not match.
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