Great Lecturer of Tiandao

Author, I really don't like that Xiaoru, her image is too different. He actually dares to fight the protagonist. The protagonist competes with others and doesn't believe that the protagonist will win. She also thinks that the protagonist's selling martial arts skills is a lie, and he also cares about the protagonist's affairs. For example, she will not give the money that the protagonist sells martial arts skills to the protagonist, and she will not give it to the protagonist. In other novels, the maids of the protagonists are loyal to each other, and whatever the protagonist says is true. Although it is cliché to write this way, it is also summarized by countless predecessors. It's not something you can break instantly. I hope you don't ruin this book. After all, I am quite optimistic about this book.

One day, Xiao Yan met Lin Dong Xiao Yan: I know you, you are Lin Dong. Looking at the entire martial arts world, you are a rare existence. Lin Dong: I know you too. You are Xiao Yan. Once you make a move, you can shock the whole book. Xiao Yan: I think back then, in Wutan City, our Xiao family was one of the three major forces. Lin Dong: I think back then, in Qingyang Town, our Lin family was one of the four major forces. Xiao Yan: I think back then, in Wutan City, I got a ring Lin Dong: I think back then, in Qingyang Town, I got a rune stone Xiao Yan: There is Yao Lao in my ring, his origin is mysterious Lin Dong: There is Lord Diao in my rune stone, and his origin is also mysterious. Xiao Yan: There is an auction house in Wutan City. I often sell elixirs there. Lin Dong: There is an underground exchange in Qingyang Town, and I also sell elixirs there. Xiao Yan: I have a sister named Xun'er, who is not my biological child. Lin Dong: I also have a younger sister named Qingtan, who is not my biological child either. Xiao Yan: My confidante, the Little Medical Fairy, is an evil poisonous body. She suffered a lot at first, but when she controls the poisonous elixir, she becomes powerful. Lin Dong: My childhood sweetheart Qingtan is a Yin evil demon body. She suffered a lot at first, but she is even more powerful after controlling the Yin elixir. Xiao Yan: My goal is to go to Yunlan Sect and defeat Nalan Yanran Lin Dong: My goal is to go to the Lin Family in Great Yan and defeat Lin Langtian Xiao Yan: I also have an identity, I am an alchemist Lin Dong: I also have an identity, I am a Talisman Master Xiao Yan: We alchemists rely on mental power Lin Dong: We talisman masters also rely on mental power. Xiao Yan: We have a tower called Dan Pagoda Lin Dong: We have a tower called Talisman Tower Xiao Yan: Yao Lao took me to practice Lin Dong: Mr. Diao will accompany me to practice. Xiao Yan: The purpose of my training is to find strange fire Lin Dong: The purpose of my training is to find the ancestral talisman Xiao Yan: With the strange fire, I will become a powerful alchemist, and my strength will be doubled. Lin Dong: With the ancestral talisman, I become a powerful talisman master, and my strength is doubled. Xiao Yan: My first time was given to Medusa Lin Dong: My first time was given to Ling Qingzhu Xiao Yan: My first time... Was not voluntary... I lost control Lin Dong: My first time... Was not voluntary... I also lost control. Xiao Yan: After everything was done, Medusa wanted to kill me, but she saved me again Lin Dong: After the incident, Ling Qingzhu also wanted to kill me, but he also saved me. Xiao Yan:...... Lin Dong:...... Xiao Yan: I was written by a guy named Tudou Lin Dong: I was also written by a guy named Tudou.

I love this book. . First. Please write in your own style. Don't be too similar to the Tiandao Library. I've seen the Library of Heaven's Path. After all, you are selling books, not teaching people. . Don't stay in the academy for too long. It would be boring. . Have you ever watched Stephen Chow's kung fu? . The old man who sells martial arts secrets. . You have to imagine. You should live your life how you want to be that person. And the world background. The setting of pig's feet background or something. At least half. Think well. In fact, a lot can happen in the process of selling books. Can write

That Xiaoru always looks innocent. Instead, it was contrived and disgusting. However, the protagonist still tolerates her and looks helpless.

According to my own opinion, if I like a book, I will urge the author to update it from time to time. Because I really enjoyed reading that book, I couldn't get enough of the author. If I don't like the book, I feel bad about it. Even if you update ten or twenty chapters every day, I don't like reading it. So, author, please update it quickly, update it quickly. It's better to have more, I like it so much.

The introduction and name are poisonous...

Author: First of all, you are writing about a person who only sells martial arts skills, and who is the protagonist, the male or the female? ? ? Speaking of the great lecturer, I didn't talk much about changing your own style, such as your own ideas, and how the male protagonist can become a great lecturer by becoming knowledgeable.

Author, let me give you a suggestion. This book is called The Great Lecturer of Heavenly Dao, and the main character's selling of martial arts skills is inconsistent with the title of the book. He doesn't look like a teacher at all. Doesn't the Void Palace require spiritual energy? Moreover, the setting is that anything can be converted into spiritual energy, so the protagonist can preach to the world and gain merit. This is more in line with the title of the book. The author can look at Urban Preacher Master for inspiration.

This book is so similar to the Library of Tiandao

Chapter 26: Did you take Xiaoke out of the classroom? Why did you become Xiaoru again?