Beauty Fills the Sky

Everyone, please be careful not to run out of battery until the phone shuts down automatically. It is really too dangerous. Just now I was playing with my phone and I didn't pay attention to the low battery prompt. Then after the phone ran out of battery, the screen suddenly went black and it turned off automatically. I saw the screen His own face in the curtain almost scared him to death. There is such a good-looking person among us. Dear guests, look at the small hand next to it. It has long and delicate features and is beautiful. If you touch it, it will light up and three words will appear. If you don't believe me, try it.

In this book, I got promoted to the fourth grade, and I will give you the monthly pass. I finally got promoted, I'm happy ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪

I didn't even pay attention to the author. I thought Long Teng stopped writing after he wrote the beginning. Although I haven't read this book, the beginning of the book is really good. It's the ending. It was ended so hastily. I was confused. At that time, at that time, I was still thinking about the next world after the prehistoric era. Then you tell me the ending, I'll go

There are no characters, no plot, and the background is confusing. I read Chapter 80. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist collects this and this, keeps shouting to become stronger, and commits murder and arson. Maybe my words don't sound good, but what I said is what I saw. There's no point in making a fool of myself. The author's writing style is much better than most of the non-brainy and cool writing I've seen. If you add the three elements of a novel, you should be able to write a good work.

Can the author bring out the little bitch's abilities?

The probability of being a eunuch is too high. Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk.

There is basically no characterization of the supporting characters. The portrayal of the protagonist is too poor, just like a person who shouts justice on his lips but does things like chickens and dogs stealing behind his back. Everyone hates the disgusting villains in real life. If the protagonist in a novel is still such a person, if you don't know how to write, don't write. The protagonist is either white or black. I want to portray it more delicately. I'm sorry you don't deserve it. You don't have that level. The plots become more and more confusing as they are written, with no connection and no structure. I guess you don't even have an outline, so you just rely on one sentence to deal with Thanos, and then write whatever comes to mind.

I'm really convinced. What's the point of getting a bunch of limited-time ones? Obviously all the permanent artifacts you made are limited-time, but your system is really dark, and the artificial intelligence you made is really poisonous. The biggest points are the godhead and artifacts. You completely treat this thing as a disposable thing. How are you going to fill these pitfalls? You are planning to be like the third uncle of the southern faction in Tomb Raiders Notes, but you don't seem to have that level. Watching and playing is really taxing.

Hum my Kingpin will come back.

The front is fine, but at least it won't cause damage for no reason, and even if the damage caused is innocent casualties, it won't be too much. But after reading Chapter 145, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Even if you want to experiment, what do you mean by putting an ancestor of the gods on the earth for experiment? Don't you really care about human life?