Conan: My Ghost Story Organization Started with Vests

When will the Washing Machine Death really see a ghost? It's always like this. What's the point of Ke Xue? Let him faint at the critical moment, or let him go away (/ω＼). Anyway, the washing machine is so fearless of death, let him really hit it once. It's a bit unpleasant not to deal with him all the time.

I saw the updated chapter in 500 Minutes, which is basically a fanfic that combines the world view of Kaitan and Conan. Reminiscent of several popular Conan fanfics with similar themes, this article more or less draws on and imitates them. Fortunately, this kind of borrowing and imitation is not copied. It has a strong independent story and can barely stand on its own. The author of this article rarely used his brain and listened to opinions, which resulted in some changes in the character, plot rhythm, and writing style. I personally think it is an improvement, but some people feel uncomfortable. Different people have different opinions. The general plot of this article is that the time traveler himself is the ghost story of this world, so he has gained the ability to control the ghost story. Based on this, the protagonist recruits people from all walks of life (mainly characters who are unhappy and those who are looking for fun) to establish a mysterious organization and engage in the Majia style and the Dihua style. Different from other books where Conan firmly believes in science, the strange stories in this book are participated by all the people, and everyone who sees them has a share. There are cases, and each character himself has been blessed by ghost stories. The protagonist travels around on this basis, with the main purpose of overthrowing the black organization that controls some of the ghost stories. The secondary purpose is to create behind-the-scenes drama and make jokes about popular characters. There are many shortcomings and big problems, but they are not fatal. The main ones are: The pace before Chapter 1.50 Is very slow and the main theme is unclear. This is reflected in the fact that the protagonist obtained the first powerful Kaitan in an instant kill, but when he was clearly overwhelmed by strength and had the subjective emotions to pursue the second weak Kaitan, he dragged on for a long time and could not get it. It's so grinding that the plot doesn't get to the point for a long time; 2. The characteristics of the kaidan are insufficient. Take the several kaidans that the protagonist currently owns as an example. Yamato Nadeshiko's slit girl is very capable of fighting, the arrogant elevator ghost who criticizes a lot, the quiet and obedient sword spirit, the older, loyal and experienced Kiriten dog... They are all kaidan in name, but the impression they leave on people is the various prefixed adjectives, not the monsters themselves such as the rift girl, elevator ghost, and Kiriten dog. Even if you change the subject and replace these strange stories with human beings, there will be no sense of violation. The same goes for the villains and ghost stories, which will only show the corresponding monster characteristics before being discovered. For example, the snow girl can freeze people... When fighting with the protagonist, they are as powerful as a fairy tale. There are very few scenes in the monster legend that involve the use of rules and weaknesses to fight. Some of the so-called ghost stories are selling dog meat with their heads crossed; 3. The division of strength is confusing. Although there is a Japanese official-type power system. But the standards and promotion conditions for each level are not obvious. This causes many problems, including but not limited to the protagonist's habit of easily defeating higher-level monsters than himself, but often being unable to crush his lower-level monsters. The strange tales mastered by the Black Organization sometimes seem strong, sometimes they feel weak, etc.; 4. The plot is routine. Although there have been some magical changes, the plot development has not changed much. Moreover, some of the magically modified nerve knives are sometimes good and sometimes bad. The bad ones even cause the character to collapse. For example, a teacher is willing to kill two people in revenge for his own students, but in order to avoid trial, he controls the dead students to turn into strange stories and kills two other innocent students to silence them. The plot occasionally feels familiar to other books (and the plots are similar, but the behavior patterns of some characters and the way the plot is handled); 5. The protagonist has a distinct character in the early stage, with subjective initiative and persistent dreams. Maybe he was criticized for being unpopular, and later on he became a bit like a nanny and a virgin. The three views are correct. I personally feel that it is not as good as the previous period. ... In short, these questions themselves are somewhat dialectical, which makes people feel a little disconnected and at the same time reduces the difficulty of reading this article, speeds up the pace, and makes the development of the plot smooth and controllable. Moreover, the author is familiar with the history of Japan's Warring States Period and is very good at incorporating various allusions into it. At the same time, he is also good at mixing in all kinds of hell jokes, dirty jokes, and social hot topics in the form of complaints. Just right and not distract from the topic. It doesn't engage in the literary youth's tendency to moan without reason or reflect on human nature, so there are no obvious poisonous points (there are quite a lot of small poisonous points). The plot is laid out in an easy-to-understand manner, without any pretentious hooks or fancy conspiracy theories. Overall it belongs to the cool writing category. Overall evaluation: The level is just that level. If it is too high, it will be too low. But the readability is a bit higher than it lets on. To be more specific, it's the kind of book that you won't think is very good when you read it, but you can read it and get into it without realizing it. Do not trample other works

The first few chapters are very good. The protagonist has thoughts and motivations. Later on, the protagonist becomes a plot tool, a virgin with no desires and desires. She is completely Conan's nanny.

The story of this book is better than those of She Jing Bing, but the protagonist's presence is too weak and there is no sense of substitution. The story has poor coherence. You can only watch the plot, which is like a unit drama.

The extraordinary power of Conan's world, plus strange stories

Has the update been discontinued? What are you doing here? Don't be a eunuch.

Will Xiao Ai appear in this book? Author!

I wish it could be longer, but it's actually okay

The plot is very good, but the description of the characters and environment is too long and too long, which makes listening to the book feel very fragmented.

At which chapter did you start to establish your power? After reading chapter 50, it is still developing.