Reincarnation Finds You
by Zfxia Ai
About This Novel
If one day a little girl you never knew called you and said she was your deceased girlfriend, how would you react? When the girl who died accidentally saw the world again, she was already in another body. "I want to find him and my family again." She was carrying the memory, and he was immersed in the memory. A connected yet hard-to-reach emotion. What they both have in mind is the same thing: "I have found you, and I still want to be with you."
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Official(4)Scraped 22d ago
Good come on
Very good. I hope I can write better.
It's very well written, so keep up the good work!
Author, you can't even use quantifiers correctly. Do you use a door? The connection between the two-line narrative of past life and present life is very poor and very fragmented, and the psychological description is even more dramatic. For people like you, I recommend reading more stream of consciousness.
The language is too Japanese, with "eh", "well" and "... What", and the writing style itself is not good. The plot of acquaintance in the previous life is not particularly important. The hero saving the beauty is too cliched.
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Official(4)Scraped 22d ago
Good come on
Very good. I hope I can write better.
It's very well written, so keep up the good work!
Author, you can't even use quantifiers correctly. Do you use a door? The connection between the two-line narrative of past life and present life is very poor and very fragmented, and the psychological description is even more dramatic. For people like you, I recommend reading more stream of consciousness.
The language is too Japanese, with "eh", "well" and "... What", and the writing style itself is not good. The plot of acquaintance in the previous life is not particularly important. The hero saving the beauty is too cliched.
