
He Was a Brave Man but Was Kicked Out
About This Novel
As a hero, he was obviously summoned to another world as a hero, but he was kicked out because his attributes were 00. But, if the attribute is really 0, why does it have to display 00? Wait a minute, the 00s seem to be connected together? What's going on? (Group number: 451330490, welcome to update and tease...)
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Official(123)Scraped 21d ago
Some settings are annoying
Being summoned to another world as a hero? Without the consent of the person concerned, he is forcibly summoned and asked to grow up with the righteousness of another world. There is no means of return that should be available. . . . The so-called summoning of heroes is completely an act of banditry and a naked slave contract! The high-sounding name of justice is indistinguishable from the evil in their mouths!
Say a few words
He was unilaterally summoned to another world, and his attitude towards him was extremely bad as soon as he landed. Because his attributes were not strong enough, he was thrown out as garbage and left to die. Even so, he still turned around and licked like crazy. After saving three people, he was judged as a softie, but he continued to lick. I've read a lot of books about Japan, but there aren't many such frustrating books.
The protagonist's endurance is really high
I can tolerate being scolded, but I believe it is not tolerated by an individual. Moreover, the protagonist has just killed a group of bandits, and ordinary people have seen it. You still dare to scold him. Don't tell me about values and worldview. According to the setting of this book, the era is similar to the imperial era. It is completely unacceptable that ordinary people will laugh at the strong. Moreover, at that time, the strong should be respected. The protagonist feels too aggrieved.
O_o
When I looked at it, I felt like the main character was a dog licker. After reading other comments, the author said it wasn't the case, but that's how I felt when I looked at it... I was drunk. The recent new series Shen Yong is quite good-looking.
Some people's reading comprehension skills are really poor
Why is it strange that the nobles summoned the protagonist and asked him to help him with a natural expression? A nobleman would talk nonsense with a first-level rookie? Besides, this is based on the fact that they see that the protagonist's attributes are "00". If the protagonist's attributes are a little bit awesome (in their eyes), they will definitely kneel and lick him on the spot. After all, they spent a lot of materials to summon such a "waste" in a very poor state. Who is not angry and who is not uncomfortable? For example, if you were playing a game to draw cards, you had accumulated cards for five years, and you could draw tens of thousands of ten-consecutive cards, but all the cards you got were one-star waste cards (maximum ten stars), would you not be angry?
Generally speaking it's pretty good.
But the road went astray from the beginning. If you want to write that the protagonist is underestimated and kicked out, you must learn from Shield Hero. People in this kingdom recommend appearing as villains or supporting characters. Otherwise, readers won't like it. Also, you said that intelligence represents magic attack. Then why is it that the protagonist's skills will be learned in a single step, and others will learn by analogy? Is it because of IQ or because the protagonist has a skill panel. Should we add a comprehension attribute to represent the speed of learning? The protagonist's performance in the article does not meet the setting of infinite attributes. The protagonist's attributes can be very high, but infinite is not good. Just like Aizen said, if an elephant steps on ants, can it control not to kill the ants? If it is an infinite attribute, it would be best to explain how the power becomes so small as shown in the article. Infinite attributes may cause the world to be destroyed. Saiki Kusuo even made two seals to prevent the world from being destroyed.
Poison to death. Give me a five-star reward. I turned left when I went out.
It's really poisonous... It poisoned me to death right away... Can you please stop being such a coward? I don't know what will happen next, but I really can't stand it. It's hard work for you to write it. Just give it five stars.
Sure enough, I can't stand anime-style novels. The difference between anime and novels is still very big. Animation has sound and pictures. If these two are done well, the plot and the like are irrelevant. But novels are different. What readers want is enjoyment and a sense of immersion. But originally The sense of immersion in the Western background setting has been partially cut off. The protagonist is written like this by you. He has invincible strength but no invincible momentum. You obviously have a good writing style and a decent subject matter, and your words are very nice, but you have made the plot setting so unpleasant.
(´⌒`。)
The plot of this book is quite good, but the writing style is still a bit lacking, so please give the author a boost. (●'ᴗ'σ)σணღ*
It collapsed from the beginning
It was already set to be invincible at the beginning, so why wasn't the character set properly? The protagonist is just a soft-footed shrimp, a dog-licker and incompetent. If you drag someone in the real world to write about a different world and set him to be invincible, he will be stronger than the protagonist in your book. A normal person will first understand this alien world before going out to wander. As a result, except for the invincible setting, the rest of the protagonists in your book are just novices, and they also show the attributes of a holy mother. Aren't you kidding?
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Official(123)Scraped 21d ago
Some settings are annoying
Being summoned to another world as a hero? Without the consent of the person concerned, he is forcibly summoned and asked to grow up with the righteousness of another world. There is no means of return that should be available. . . . The so-called summoning of heroes is completely an act of banditry and a naked slave contract! The high-sounding name of justice is indistinguishable from the evil in their mouths!
Say a few words
He was unilaterally summoned to another world, and his attitude towards him was extremely bad as soon as he landed. Because his attributes were not strong enough, he was thrown out as garbage and left to die. Even so, he still turned around and licked like crazy. After saving three people, he was judged as a softie, but he continued to lick. I've read a lot of books about Japan, but there aren't many such frustrating books.
The protagonist's endurance is really high
I can tolerate being scolded, but I believe it is not tolerated by an individual. Moreover, the protagonist has just killed a group of bandits, and ordinary people have seen it. You still dare to scold him. Don't tell me about values and worldview. According to the setting of this book, the era is similar to the imperial era. It is completely unacceptable that ordinary people will laugh at the strong. Moreover, at that time, the strong should be respected. The protagonist feels too aggrieved.
O_o
When I looked at it, I felt like the main character was a dog licker. After reading other comments, the author said it wasn't the case, but that's how I felt when I looked at it... I was drunk. The recent new series Shen Yong is quite good-looking.
Some people's reading comprehension skills are really poor
Why is it strange that the nobles summoned the protagonist and asked him to help him with a natural expression? A nobleman would talk nonsense with a first-level rookie? Besides, this is based on the fact that they see that the protagonist's attributes are "00". If the protagonist's attributes are a little bit awesome (in their eyes), they will definitely kneel and lick him on the spot. After all, they spent a lot of materials to summon such a "waste" in a very poor state. Who is not angry and who is not uncomfortable? For example, if you were playing a game to draw cards, you had accumulated cards for five years, and you could draw tens of thousands of ten-consecutive cards, but all the cards you got were one-star waste cards (maximum ten stars), would you not be angry?
Generally speaking it's pretty good.
But the road went astray from the beginning. If you want to write that the protagonist is underestimated and kicked out, you must learn from Shield Hero. People in this kingdom recommend appearing as villains or supporting characters. Otherwise, readers won't like it. Also, you said that intelligence represents magic attack. Then why is it that the protagonist's skills will be learned in a single step, and others will learn by analogy? Is it because of IQ or because the protagonist has a skill panel. Should we add a comprehension attribute to represent the speed of learning? The protagonist's performance in the article does not meet the setting of infinite attributes. The protagonist's attributes can be very high, but infinite is not good. Just like Aizen said, if an elephant steps on ants, can it control not to kill the ants? If it is an infinite attribute, it would be best to explain how the power becomes so small as shown in the article. Infinite attributes may cause the world to be destroyed. Saiki Kusuo even made two seals to prevent the world from being destroyed.
Poison to death. Give me a five-star reward. I turned left when I went out.
It's really poisonous... It poisoned me to death right away... Can you please stop being such a coward? I don't know what will happen next, but I really can't stand it. It's hard work for you to write it. Just give it five stars.
Sure enough, I can't stand anime-style novels. The difference between anime and novels is still very big. Animation has sound and pictures. If these two are done well, the plot and the like are irrelevant. But novels are different. What readers want is enjoyment and a sense of immersion. But originally The sense of immersion in the Western background setting has been partially cut off. The protagonist is written like this by you. He has invincible strength but no invincible momentum. You obviously have a good writing style and a decent subject matter, and your words are very nice, but you have made the plot setting so unpleasant.
(´⌒`。)
The plot of this book is quite good, but the writing style is still a bit lacking, so please give the author a boost. (●'ᴗ'σ)σணღ*
It collapsed from the beginning
It was already set to be invincible at the beginning, so why wasn't the character set properly? The protagonist is just a soft-footed shrimp, a dog-licker and incompetent. If you drag someone in the real world to write about a different world and set him to be invincible, he will be stronger than the protagonist in your book. A normal person will first understand this alien world before going out to wander. As a result, except for the invincible setting, the rest of the protagonists in your book are just novices, and they also show the attributes of a holy mother. Aren't you kidding?
















