
Perfect World: the First Emperor of Immortality
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Su Bai, who traveled through the late Immortal Ancient Period, planned to do three things. The first thing is to crush the foreign land. The second thing is to kill the Immortal King who is targeting them. The third thing is to kill across the boundary sea and go to God to see.
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Official(55)Scraped 6d ago
Author, the novel you wrote is good to read, but there are too few updates and it is not enough to read. Also, is there a female protagonist? Could it be Qingyue? Kunpeng shouldn't be dead. After all, the plot has changed a lot. The existing true immortals are all more powerful than in the original work. I hope I can write more exciting content. I don't think you need to write another book. Just update this one. After all, this one is more interesting. A little more exciting. I hope you can write more than 3 million words in this book. Come on. In fact, after the protagonist breaks through to become a true immortal, he can write a clone method to cultivate his essence, energy and spirit separately when he breaks through the king. All cultivated to the peak and merged together to directly break through to the giant Immortal King. It's also possible that your own ideas will be more exciting. I'm just giving you a small opinion to give you some ideas.
Does the heroine have a willow god? I hope the heroine has a willow god.
Compare 9 days and 10 places
Foreign lands are considered good, but what about 9 days and 10 places? A 9th Heaven, an encounter with an immortal. You are a genius in a foreign land. They are really training you. Look at 9th Heaven and wish you would die.
Keep it up, it has the flavor of a perfect world and an original plot
It's so good. I've been following it since the Perfect World series. The IP of Perfect World has always been the pinnacle of fantasy in my mind. During this period, I also read many, many perfect fanfics, such as The Rise of the Ten Evils, Meng Hui Immortal Ancient, Only Wo Huangtian Emperor, and two books about Chongtong, which are all good. This book by the author has the background of a perfect world and its own plot. It's great. Come on, come on😘
As the heroine, I think both Ye Qingxian and the Witch should not be missed.
Update, very good, I wish I could keep writing.
A good Perfect World fanfic
Good book, good reading, good, very satisfying
Please update soon. How long has it been since you updated?
Not bad, not bad, not bad. Come on and write.
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Official(55)Scraped 6d ago
Author, the novel you wrote is good to read, but there are too few updates and it is not enough to read. Also, is there a female protagonist? Could it be Qingyue? Kunpeng shouldn't be dead. After all, the plot has changed a lot. The existing true immortals are all more powerful than in the original work. I hope I can write more exciting content. I don't think you need to write another book. Just update this one. After all, this one is more interesting. A little more exciting. I hope you can write more than 3 million words in this book. Come on. In fact, after the protagonist breaks through to become a true immortal, he can write a clone method to cultivate his essence, energy and spirit separately when he breaks through the king. All cultivated to the peak and merged together to directly break through to the giant Immortal King. It's also possible that your own ideas will be more exciting. I'm just giving you a small opinion to give you some ideas.
Does the heroine have a willow god? I hope the heroine has a willow god.
Compare 9 days and 10 places
Foreign lands are considered good, but what about 9 days and 10 places? A 9th Heaven, an encounter with an immortal. You are a genius in a foreign land. They are really training you. Look at 9th Heaven and wish you would die.
Keep it up, it has the flavor of a perfect world and an original plot
It's so good. I've been following it since the Perfect World series. The IP of Perfect World has always been the pinnacle of fantasy in my mind. During this period, I also read many, many perfect fanfics, such as The Rise of the Ten Evils, Meng Hui Immortal Ancient, Only Wo Huangtian Emperor, and two books about Chongtong, which are all good. This book by the author has the background of a perfect world and its own plot. It's great. Come on, come on😘
As the heroine, I think both Ye Qingxian and the Witch should not be missed.
Update, very good, I wish I could keep writing.
A good Perfect World fanfic
Good book, good reading, good, very satisfying
Please update soon. How long has it been since you updated?
Not bad, not bad, not bad. Come on and write.


















