Douluo: I Am Dong Kuang

Author, you still continue your style.

Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! [Emot=default,06/]Already addicted! ! !

Please give the author a big update!

It's nice to look at, but it's so sad.

First of all, it's been a long time since I've seen a good Douluo fanfic. Either Tang San is too cheesy, or the protagonist seems too cheesy, or too licky, or it's just a harem story, some are too novice, and some are trying to persuade people to quit at the beginning. Secondly, the author's writing style is very good, and I am very moved. It has a warm and sad feeling, uh - and a little bit of secondary. Although it is a short story, I don't seem to have seen the author write a long story. Then, the author's protagonists seem to have that kind of gentle character. Although the middle is good and the beginning is good, the ending is often a little sloppy, or a little messy? But unless it is particularly crappy, I can accept it. After all, it is better than breaking the chapter, and the author's ending is okay. Finally, the one that impressed me the most among the author's novels was "Stillborn". I wanted to tweet it to others before, but when "Stillborn" was pushed, I found that I couldn't search for it. Today I clicked on the author and found that there are only three books. I have read one and haven't read one yet. The subject matter is not very attractive to me, and then this is it. Anyway, come on, author, you are much better than me? After the second revision, I added a few things. Most of the above is what I half-read. The protagonist is a god, to be precise, a man with divine power. He is in a place with relatives and friends. They are trapped there and cannot get out. He is always sad when he sees bad things, but he is powerless. He sees it again and again, and wants to change again and again. Until Bibi Dong is there, he can't stand it anymore and wants to save it, so there is the beginning of the novel. Talking about the emotional line, Bibi Dong's is more about family than love, and Xiao Wu's is the kind of love between life and death, or Xiao Wu's love for a long time. The protagonist also has some feelings, but because of the memories and emotions of his previous life, he feels that he loves Bibi Dong, so his feelings for Xiao Wu are his younger sister at first. Later I found out that I fell in love with Xiao Wu. As for Xiaoxue, she has the least emotional line. Because the characters in Douluo are all precocious, she likes the protagonist. As for the protagonist, she feels more like a pure sister, but I can accept it. After all, the author's writing is good and it didn't make me feel romantic. To be honest, it seems that there are still some things that have not been written. For example, the cheap student A Yin in the future should be resurrected. According to my understanding, she should be able to forgive, but after all, there is such a thing, Tang Hao is not sure, and there is no explanation of what will happen next, and then there seems to be nothing special. I rarely write reviews, and it's a long review. This one is extra long, and it's a short story. However, although the author's writing style is much better than mine, you can still see that in some aspects, such as emotional scenes, he can't write well, but it is much better than mine. Finally, come on, I really think your writing is very good. I have a feeling that the author first writes about a person, throws him into a world, and lets him develop freely. Maybe he also adds a person he likes in this world. It is the character who promotes the development of the plot, just like this book. The protagonist was thrown into Douluo. I don't know why I didn't drop the stillborn book. It was thrown into the world of Conan. I hope the author can write his own world, even if it is just a scene, like the temple behind the protagonist in this book, it is still the same sentence, come on, you are much better than me.

Come on! I believe you can write better!

Not great, in short it's okay, but it's sad that it's heartbreaking

Damn, this book... I don't know how to comment on it, but I still give it five stars.

How cruel! ! ! Author

It should be longer, but it's too short.