American Comics: Enlightenment of Arkham, Ascension of the People of the Motherland

It's Arkham and it's from the motherland. I thought it was a cool article, but it turned out to be a watery article. Every passerby I met would murmur a long paragraph.

It starts off with a goal of revenge, but then it becomes boring and a bit watery. I really like to write some scraps of text. I just want to say one sentence, but I want to chat with people for three or four sentences. I also like to add some uninteresting little plots. A small role can waste most of the protagonist's time. I obviously want to describe the protagonist in a very subversive way, but I just think that the protagonist is a fool. And from time to time in novels with a Western background, there will be a bad guy, a bad guy, a complete loser, etc., Which is really a drama.

Do you really think it's expensive? The bakery removes the cost of renting a house, the cost of water and electricity, the cost of logistics, the cost of technology investment, the cost of purchasing machinery and equipment, the cost of machine maintenance, the cost of raw materials, the cost of eating for a family of eight, the cost of children attending cram schools, the cost of hospitalization for the elderly at home, the cost of pensions, the cost of alimony for parents, the cost of buying a house and a car, plus the following costs, in fact, it will not make a few dollars: tax costs, advertising costs costs, employee training costs, employee welfare costs, accidental loss costs, holiday celebration costs, social media operation costs, daily office supplies costs, store decoration costs, environmental protection equipment purchase costs, environmental protection taxes and sewage charges, employee health insurance costs, store cleaning and sanitation maintenance costs, employee uniforms and work shoes costs, store music and atmosphere creation costs, customer feedback and promotional activity costs. Now look at it, is it still expensive?

A batch of water. It's all literal waste

The piling part is a bit too casual. It feels like a woman with a certain character is just talking about it. I feel like I can talk about anything. Why do I write the protagonist more and more like a little loser who sticks to everything in some area on the coast and then becomes rich?

Another serious protagonist who pretends to be crazy. He has no basic moral values, etiquette or integrity. You throw all these away and then use these behaviors to pretend to be crazy. It's really disgusting.

It's very long-winded, with a lot of useless plots and dialogues! Looks very irritating

To be honest, this is a bit disappointing. After seeing the introduction and name, I thought we were going to have a revolution...

First, you don't speak Chelulu dialect, one sentence is just one sentence, and you don't use the second or third sentence to explain the previous sentence. Second, the plot is exciting and tepid, making people want to watch it. Disadvantages No goal, no ultimate goal, such as immortality, immortality, and the liberation of mankind? Wait, wait, the goal is all for epilepsy? Mad? It's only been over a hundred chapters now, and your superpowers are already fearful to DC... How will your plot develop in the future? Could it be that after a wave of fun, I started to work hard? Come on, it feels very good compared to now, and there is no stability at all... The timeline has only been four days.

The obvious problem is that the duration of a copy or "map" of the Invincible article is directly proportional to the author's writing ability. After thirty chapters of Invincible, it is obvious that the writing has become sluggish, and the author has not grasped it.