
The Phoenix Rises in the Heavens
by I Wish Haibo Would Be Peaceful
About This Novel
A man cannot eat five pots of food in life, and he will be cooked in five pots in death I started under the Nine Earths, and now I stand on the top of the Nine Heavens
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
It looks okay, there doesn't seem to be any flaws! The number of words is still small, so you can look forward to it
Too toxic at the beginning
Has the author read the first chapter himself? The identity of the protagonist is not arranged well, so it would be better to change the protagonist's father to an ordinary person. This way, more people will see it naturally.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
It looks okay, there doesn't seem to be any flaws! The number of words is still small, so you can look forward to it
Too toxic at the beginning
Has the author read the first chapter himself? The identity of the protagonist is not arranged well, so it would be better to change the protagonist's father to an ordinary person. This way, more people will see it naturally.









