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How can you be reliable? You have traveled through time and are still searching for your life experience. Why don't you go to heaven? Why don't you go to Honghuang? Ask the twelve ancestral witches of the witch clan whether they have something to do with this tattoo? If you can't write, don't write. To put it bluntly, you are a moth.

Author, please slow down the pace a little and write some details more carefully. It looks like a running account and I can't stand it at all. There is no sense of immersion at all. Overall, the subject matter is not bad, but the pace is too fast. I hope the author can improve it.

I have to say, you might as well see it yourself. It's really up to you to see for yourself! I can't afford this blessing.

I suggest the author divide the story into sub-parts. The pace is too fast. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is a bit low, as are the supporting characters.

Why is the timeline so messed up? Author, can't you fix the timeline? Is the protagonist Alexandre Dumas? I fell in love with Hong Guliang, Hua Ling'er, how can I get married even if I save a life without any emotional connection at all?

It's all a person talking to himself. You can't see what's written at all. There's no dialogue at all.

I must be in sixth grade, I laughed so hard, haha

You don't know paragraphing or punctuation. You haven't even been to elementary school! My little sister can write better essays than you.

The author hasn't updated it after so long.

The content is a bit watery, many passionate parts are mentioned in one stroke, there are a lot of typos, and the pace is a bit fast. I hope I can write slower and write more details.