Am I a Person of Interest as a Newbie in the Second Dimension?

I've finished reading it for now, let's talk about my feelings for now In the first chapter, Xia Shizi's character collapses. Will she be venomous to strangers? ? When I read it later, I felt that the book was very messy. When I read it back, I realized that it was about memories. Memories can be written, but when you write the memories mixed with the plot, I felt that it was very messy and out of place. I don't know if others feel this way, but I did, and I suddenly felt that what you wrote was like a running account. Huhu, slipped away, I don't object to memories being written together with the plot, which is also based on the excellent writing style of an excellent author.

A few comments: 1Timeline chaos 2. The main plot line is slow and the advancement is slow, and the text is mainly narrative and reminiscence type. 3. The relationship between the characters is messy and the insertion is tough. Often a character's background setting is included in several chapters of the story. 4. The character of the protagonist has collapsed, the source and level of skills are generally mentioned in a few strokes, and the emotional setting of the protagonist is vague. Most of the stories in the 5 articles are mainly narrative, with the development status of the protagonist; skills column; and blurred cheat codes. The 6 major world powers; territorial boundaries; and the environment are vague, and most of the environment settings rely on emotions. 7. It is recommended to start a new book based on the growth history of the protagonist of this book. The plot is like a side story (personally, I suggest that I am not used to this kind of book where the narrative is mainly about forceful eating and setting up a brain-enhancing environment.) 8 I hope this comment will be popular! (Doge)

The author's writing about Little Burial made me feel a little nauseous. What's the use of such a disgusting sister? She's always been a hamster at home, doing nothing but eating, drinking and having fun every day. The author also wrote it to make the protagonist think this is normal. Can he be like a normal person? He also said that he would raise his sister to waste, and he wanted to change but didn't do it. It's really funny when it's funny, but I think it's better to forget about such a disgusting plot. Suddenly I felt sick, so I stopped watching it. The green mountains will not change, but the green waters will continue to flow.

This is the fifth time I have added this novel to my bookshelf. It was originally a good light novel about complaints. Can anyone tell me? Why is it that the whole text is full of long and smelly old lady's foot-wrapped memories and memories within memories👹👹? I believe that everyone who reads this book will be persuaded to leave by such an author who is so good at word count.

I really like this style of pursuing pleasure. As expected, they are all crazy about self-understanding and self-guided strategies. However, the person involved is really just seeking death or pleasure. It turns out that An Yilun's operation can be understood in this way (I haven't seen the way the heroine of Passerby was raised). The scene where the president thought he was sick and sent an electric shock device to his sister was very impressive. Hijikata and Sougo's falling in love and killing each other, the daily seriousness of the orangutan master, Yamazaki's daily understanding, Ohira and Shizuo, the confrontation between Haruno and Hsuchima's sexy girl Sougo, Harano and Mashiro's haha, Mashiro's innocence... There are many more that I can't finish talking about. I'm very happy. This is also the reason why I like to read fan fiction. It feels very warm and can make up for some shortcomings (forget it, I will go under the water, haha). Sougo has given me a lot of strange knowledge, and full control is a good reason. Author bacteria has also brought me a lot of happiness. I can only vote for some free recommendation votes to encourage author bacteria. Come on, author bacteria!

Although the author makes the protagonist's character so awkward throughout the book, does he really intend to keep the protagonist single until the finale? Except for Xiaomi, when I encounter various famous anime beauties, I either avoid them or encounter various pitfalls. People like Kasumigaoka Shiyu have already fallen in love with the protagonist by themselves. There may be other girls in the future. Do they all refuse to be a girl-controller? If this is the case, then I hope that the author can let the protagonist and Xiao Mi really get together before the finale, and get married. If the author really dares to write about German Orthopedics, I will also support it. Otherwise, it would be good to have a group of sister controllers and a harem, or a sister controller and one or two heroines. The sister controller here includes Xiao Mi in the protagonist's harem, but there are just a few more heroines who are not sisters than the German Orthopedics. . . .

Hua Ye, the Lord of Heavenly Palace, comes here for a visit

After reading Chapter 63, I no longer know what is normal and what is in memories. Anyway, they all feel like memories, and they are memories within memories.

It's disgusting, so I won't fight after one star, because I'm afraid you won't be able to bear it.

The characters are introduced well, so you don't have to worry too much about what other people think.