I Will Post an Entry for the Exercises

This book is my favorite type. I also happened to buy the game Guigu Bahuang. Comparing the two, I thought it was quite good. But there are two small suggestions. 1. The author is not rigorous enough in the details of this article. My daughter's state was previously at the fourth level of Qi training, but suddenly it became the second level of Qi training. The protagonist's physical training state is the same. Before, it was 15 times of I Ching marrow cleansing, but suddenly it became 13 times. If there are any changes to the later article, the author of the previous article should not forget to make the changes as well. 2. There has never been a place in this article that explains the protagonist's strength in enough detail and completeness. Many techniques and values ​​are not fully displayed.

Kill someone who is grinding and chirping, a loser

Didn't it say there is no heroine? Wang Defa

Generally speaking, the writing is quite good. There are no weird emotional lines so far, and the protagonist is relatively rational (except for the daughter). I have read two books so far about cultivating immortals with a daughter, one is like this, and the other is about being a eunuch several years ago, but no matter which one is written, It's very good, that novel is very regrettable, after all, the side-by-side reading of "Hurt Xiamen" is very good, so I don't know why, "Eunuch", I also read that book after three months of "Eunuch", so I left it out, I hope, I sincerely hope that the author will finish it and write this novel well.

Obviously you can get entries that improve attributes, why not get all attributes?

Can anyone tell me what happened to the woman named Bai in Chapter 56? Purely disgusting.

That woman gave me a broken diaphragm😐 It's a very good book. Why did I give it to this woman? It's all inexplicable.

I just read the third chapter, and I have a question: I am an orphan, lack of resources for cultivation, and the protagonist, who has no money to eat and no squats, met a baby girl at the store. He was cruel and adopted her. Yu Si said: This is not called soft-hearted, this is called a saint! Nowadays, when people meet stray cats and dogs on the roadside, they have to hesitate for a long time, and they have to think a lot about giving birth to children. What's more, the protagonist's own situation was worrying at the time. Can't the orphanage raise children? If it can be said that this is a setting, then let me ask you: is this a normal operation? Shouldn't the normal operation be to pick up the child and call the police immediately, so that the police can verify whose family the child belongs to? What if someone loses their child or is a trafficker or an enemy? This is how normal people think! Only when you are sure that the baby is abandoned can you choose to put it in an orphanage or raise it yourself (●-●)

I didn't have any objections to you joining at the beginning, but you made a big detour and finally joined. It's very uncomfortable to watch. It's very unpleasant to be forced to join step by step.

In the third chapter, when I saw that the protagonist, who was an orphan and was in urgent need of resources and money for cultivation, adopted a baby girl at the store, I was thinking about a question: Is this really soft-hearted? Aren't you called a saint? Is this routine? It's not normal to pick up a child