
The Wang Family of Family Cultivators
About This Novel
The rise of a small family in the world of cultivation. If you are interested, you can read it. If there is something wrong in writing a novel for the first time, please let me know.
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Official(8)Scraped 27d ago
I also know that I have many typos, and I will work hard to correct them. But this is my first time that this book can not hurt my confidence.
Cultivation to immortality, cultivation of immortality
You are also engaged in a technological revolution. You are not the patriarch.
good
The writing is quite good, but the name of pig's feet makes it easy to jump into the scene. It is recommended to change the name in the early stage. It is really easy to jump into the scene. The scene description and rhythm are okay, but it is difficult to enter. The name of pig's feet is a resistance.
The author checked it after he finished writing. There are too many typos! Add + oil
so-so
I hope the punctuation can be corrected. This kind of messy punctuation looks very unpleasant.
Ha ha
There are a lot of typos, but everything else is fine. Come on.
We are amateurs, and the updates are not very stable. Please forgive me for forgetting.
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 27d ago
I also know that I have many typos, and I will work hard to correct them. But this is my first time that this book can not hurt my confidence.
Cultivation to immortality, cultivation of immortality
You are also engaged in a technological revolution. You are not the patriarch.
good
The writing is quite good, but the name of pig's feet makes it easy to jump into the scene. It is recommended to change the name in the early stage. It is really easy to jump into the scene. The scene description and rhythm are okay, but it is difficult to enter. The name of pig's feet is a resistance.
The author checked it after he finished writing. There are too many typos! Add + oil
so-so
I hope the punctuation can be corrected. This kind of messy punctuation looks very unpleasant.
Ha ha
There are a lot of typos, but everything else is fine. Come on.
We are amateurs, and the updates are not very stable. Please forgive me for forgetting.










