Immortal Master is Invincible

My name is Fang Qingyu, which means upright and unyielding, youthful and energetic, and flying in the sky. Although I was born into an ordinary family in the human world on earth, I am a [god-level talent]. I practiced Taoism at the age of five, practiced the magic [Nine Transformations of True Spirit] at the age of six, and [became famous] at the age of fifteen. At the age of eighteen, he received the inheritance of [Emperor] and has been [unique in the world] ever since. Later, he entered [Douluo Continent] and created [Peerless Tang Sect]. I have [Covering the Sky] with one hand, my cultivation is [Number One in the World], I have already become [Immortal], and I want to [Fight to Break the Sky]. Unfortunately, he accidentally entered the [Immortality Realm] and accidentally obtained the artifact [Cun Mang], which caused a huge disaster. The [Holy King] commanded the [Great Master], [War Lord], [Dragon Blood God of War], [Demon Immortal], [Dragon Ancestor], [Kunlun Evil Immortal], [Evil Lord of Another World], [Crazy God], [Mad Lord] and [Fighting God] and more than a dozen of the ultimate emperors started a [Shocking Battle] with me in [War Sky Continent], which will be called [Sky War Chronicle] in later generations. This battle was shocking. I [Nine Deaths] finally slaughtered them all at my feet, and started the feat of [Zhu Xian] [Martial Movement of the Universe]. However, [Heaven is ruthless] and attacked me while I was seriously injured. I almost lost my soul. Fortunately, [the kind-hearted God of Death] helped me and I managed to survive. Later, I walked out of the [God's Tomb], spent my whole life [seeking demons], and engaged in blood feuds [I Want to Sealed Heaven]. I created two great magical arts [Nine-Star Heavenly Art] and [Star Art] that are known to the world, and finally became the [Peerless Martial God], standing proudly in the [Martial God Space]. I am the [Proud of the Nine Heavens], my heart is like the [Purple River] flowing endlessly, and I want to create the [Wild Era] and create the [Perfect World]. You see, my life can be regarded as a [Legend], a [Mortal Cultivation of Immortality] and a [Great Sage]! ? I see that you are also of the Shui tribe's bloodline, so I will pass on the family treasures [Water Emperor Manual] and [Ji Dao Lu Bing] to you. The gods of the galaxy have the intention to send down heavenly tribulations to control the world, making heaven and earth a prison, and all living beings suffer. I am about to retreat, and I will leave behind my masterpiece "Tearing the Galaxy" in the name of me [Fang Qingyu], to give the world a glimmer of hope and a trace of Taoism. I strongly recommend [Tearing the Galaxy], and I ask fellow Taoists to give you some pointers, so that we can realize the great truth together. When the yin and yang reverse chaos, I will bring the king back to the world, and let all living beings believe in the supreme supernatural power. Together with all my Taoist friends, I will [tear apart the galaxy]!

It seems that hundreds of books have been tested. Overall, this book gave me a bad feeling. It was like reading a novel written by an elementary school student. The characters are childish, the dialogue is brainless, and the storyline is like boiled water, with no taste at all. Let's talk about the characters first. First of all, as the protagonist, he has no soul at all, like a robot. You can feel it from all the lines of the protagonist, there is no sense of character substitution, and he always uses a few words to express the protagonist's emotions. For example: Xiaonan silently looked at so-and-so, Xiaonan smiled faintly, Xiaonan looked at so-and-so silently, Xiaonan smiled slightly. Is this the only way to portray the emotions of these protagonists? It's so childish that it makes me bleed. Speaking of lines, the protagonist always adds an emotional expression before speaking. A normal dialogue will make people particularly disgusted. For example, Xiaonan said lightly, Xiaonan said quietly with a slight smile, Xiaonan said calmly for a moment, Xiaonan frowned slightly, then said with a smile. This is a protagonist's performance that has appeared countless times since the previous 20 chapters. As for the storyline, there is no problem with the starting setting, and there is no problem with the protagonist inheriting everything if he fails to seize the body. However, these forced explanations feel very confusing, such as why the protagonist was not taken away. From the plot development, the audience actually knew that it was the problem of the jade pendant, but suddenly Mr. Huang showed up with a lot of bbbbs, which felt very pacing. In fact, these explanations can be described as an inner monologue when the protagonist slowly sorts out Mr. Huang's memory, and it is easy to make people feel that the audience is a fool. Later, the mother was found in the main plot, and various resources were collected in the side plots to become stronger. The various characters that appeared gave people a very childish feeling. Let's talk about the protagonist's father first. He is a bad good person and a waste. The son vomited blood when he saved others. Others came to seek medical treatment and let the son go. After all, the son was not allowed to save people again. This setting can dissuade a lot of readers. When the protagonist recalls that when he was a child, his mother went to all kinds of first things. There was a big problem with the dialogue when I was going to sell the jade pendant for money. My parents eloped here to work as teachers, and then they had to work as sellers. In those days, teachers were so cheap. They couldn't even afford to eat. The father kept blaming himself from the beginning to the end, saying that he was incompetent. This kind of character setting basically failed to retain the audience. When the mother was taken away by the family, I think the audience applauded, but of course there was no audience. The various subplots that follow suddenly appear without warning. The decent characters have no reason to bow to the protagonist, the villains attack the protagonist in various ways, and portray the national civil servants in a dark way. The senior leaders are all from the protagonist faction, and the grassroots cadres are all villains. Anyway, all the villains in the world except the protagonist faction make people feel like they are being deceived by children. I really can't stand it anymore when I see Chapter 140. It's very toxic. It's getting more and more rubbish after it's released. I feel like it's all written randomly. A "This is impossible" can be used a bunch of words to support the word count. It turns into "How could this be like this, this can't be, how could it be possible? You lied to me. It shouldn't be like this. You are not wrong." Do you just support the word count like this? Does this treat readers as fools? Finally, I would like to say, it is extremely poisonous, so do not watch it.

I want to know if the author's real name is Du Haitao? How much do you need to like Bangzi to write this novel?

What the hell is this? I can't understand it. Sometimes I'm fighting, sometimes I'm in the mountains. I can't explain the content clearly. The general outline and title of the book are different. It's about cultivating immortals. What a rubbish novel!

The author abandoned the book? Are you going to leave readers alone and say nothing?

The black man has a question mark face, was he a eunuch for a while? I couldn't even bother to read the questions in the second half.

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes, but it was still manageable at first. What is written on the back?

It was good at first, but I haven't been able to watch it since 100,000 years ago. I want to curse people, so stupid.

Chapter Three: Never Leaving South Korea. Do you admire South Korea so much? Did the author immigrate to Korea?

As the title says, the recent chapters are not good to read. One thing is always said repeatedly, so I have to make up the word count.