Popular Science Wizard, I Created a New Era!
About This Novel
Traveling to a world with the same Blue Star, everyone is afraid of the spirits, defends their homeland, and starts a battle with the spirits. After Chen Long learned about the appearance of the spirit, he was confused. The timid and gentle green caterpillar has become what people call the Green Goblin? Squirtle, the water turtle, has become what people call the turtle monster? Chen Long realized that this was not a spirit invasion at all! But the elves are coming! This is the best of times! Chen Long bound the popular science elf system to start a live broadcast tour to popularize science elf for people. With his efforts, the monsters that everyone fears have a new name - elves! No more fear of elves! In the name of elves, I start the era of elves for all people!
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Official(24)Scraped 26d ago
There is one that is almost exactly the same as yours.
I don't know which of you copied which.
It makes me so embarrassed
The Elvish language is a failure. The dialogue between elves makes me so embarrassed.
I just read the first chapter. If there is some weakened super power in your novice gift bag, forget it. Why don't you come up with an Elf language? ! Damn it, you are planning to write an elf novel into a fairy novel. You have started a one-on-one conversation with an elf. Isn't this the same as the monsters in a fairy novel? Then write a lot more dialogues with the elf. It's a drama. Hey, can't you use the ability to sense emotions and understand and express meaning? Direct communication is straightforward enough.
It's so embarrassing, especially the elves' awkward dialogues, and many details are problematic.
It looks so embarrassing
This writing style, this expression, this description, the more I look at it, the more it feels like a child writing a composition.
Really good
The titles of the two books have the same meaning, and the introductions are similar , but the contents are different.
embarrassed
After reading more than ten chapters, I feel so awkward
personal opinion
The fact that I can understand Elvish is a bit poisonous to me, as well as the reaction of the first green caterpillar, and the IQ of the elf. In my memory, the IQ of the elf is very high.
It was still watchable, but every time you, the protagonist, failed to assassinate me, I was torn apart. You don't need thermal weapons for assassination. You can at least get a few local guns. Every time you appear, it's an anesthetic needle, and it's from an elf. To be honest, assassination is really inappropriate to write about. After all, there are too many modern thermal weapons.
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Official(24)Scraped 26d ago
There is one that is almost exactly the same as yours.
I don't know which of you copied which.
It makes me so embarrassed
The Elvish language is a failure. The dialogue between elves makes me so embarrassed.
I just read the first chapter. If there is some weakened super power in your novice gift bag, forget it. Why don't you come up with an Elf language? ! Damn it, you are planning to write an elf novel into a fairy novel. You have started a one-on-one conversation with an elf. Isn't this the same as the monsters in a fairy novel? Then write a lot more dialogues with the elf. It's a drama. Hey, can't you use the ability to sense emotions and understand and express meaning? Direct communication is straightforward enough.
It's so embarrassing, especially the elves' awkward dialogues, and many details are problematic.
It looks so embarrassing
This writing style, this expression, this description, the more I look at it, the more it feels like a child writing a composition.
Really good
The titles of the two books have the same meaning, and the introductions are similar , but the contents are different.
embarrassed
After reading more than ten chapters, I feel so awkward
personal opinion
The fact that I can understand Elvish is a bit poisonous to me, as well as the reaction of the first green caterpillar, and the IQ of the elf. In my memory, the IQ of the elf is very high.
It was still watchable, but every time you, the protagonist, failed to assassinate me, I was torn apart. You don't need thermal weapons for assassination. You can at least get a few local guns. Every time you appear, it's an anesthetic needle, and it's from an elf. To be honest, assassination is really inappropriate to write about. After all, there are too many modern thermal weapons.
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