Comprehensive Level: Immortal Martial Arts Starts from the Tomb of the Divine Eagle

I think this book has collapsed. The more I read these later, the more I feel that there is a big gap between this Yang Guo and the Yang Guo in Mr. Jin. He wants to have a harem, but he also says that he can't forget his wife in his previous life. He is pretending to be deeply affectionate, and he is irresponsible, not proactive, and not open to the little dragon girl. Mouth, isn't this the behavior of a scumbag in reality? Although Yang Guo in The Condor has stolen the hearts of many girls, there is still etiquette between them. Here, they kiss Hong Lingbo as soon as they meet him. There is no so-called offline at all. This is martial arts. This character is created in a way that makes people not like him.

Why is his meow gone in such a short period of time, Chapter 19? Get up quickly, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. In the first 19 chapters, I felt the writing was really good. As long as the plot behind it is not lame or silly, I think it's okay🌚🌚

Nowadays, there are many novels where cheating is either too harsh or has a bad start. I hope the author will keep writing and not be a eunuch

But there are some flaws. The narrative writing is not very bad, but there are too many typos, and the name is also a bad point. There is really no need for one person to have two names. One is Yang Guo and the other is Jiang Chen, and it is not smooth to read. Also, the content is boring, with too much nonsense. It doesn't matter if you don't explain some things. Readers are not fools and can understand. They are charlatans. If you want to fight, fight them. It takes too much ink to babble. There is also a very important point. Don't copy it from Baidu. You can refer to it, but don't copy and paste it. It's very disgusting. (The distinction between frogs and toads is really stiff. I don't understand why you suddenly explained how to distinguish this. It's not the Animal World Channel) Finally, it is really difficult to write the early stage of Shendiao. It should be more detailed.

The writing is really great, including Cheng Ying and Gongsun Lu'e, as well as Guo Fu, Lu Wushuang, and more about the harem and bringing them into the world of immortality.

Come on, come on, write a lot and collect more beauties

I think about how to make women fall in love every day. Xiao Longnu and other heroines are hanging on, saying that it is easy to open a harem. This is really not in line with the mainstream of harem. If you say to open up a new route, but the content is disgusting

To merge into the immortality cultivation technique, it is best to combine several immortality cultivation techniques for women, and bring his women to practice immortality. There is also a little Gongsun Zhi who knows how to make elixirs. He hopes that with full comprehension, he can refine the elixir of immortality first, so that their women will have eternal youth and beauty.

I have cast 9 recommendation votes and I hope you can update it quickly. If it takes too long, I will feel uncomfortable with the book.

It is simply a model of pretending and setting up. If you want to open a harem, open it, and if you don't want to, you can't. This is pretending and setting up again, and it is really disgusting to do so.