My Summons Book Connects All Heavens and Worlds

Originally, there was a poisonous spot in front of me, and I could barely see it. Now I have a contractor, a pet, and he is a man... I have no choice but to slip away.

After reading Chapter 40, the main character is still a noob, and he keeps talking about some things that are good and bad, and a lot of useless things. Also, the things that the main character signed are of no use and I don't know why you signed them.

What I wrote before is okay. I tolerated all kinds of problems and got over them. The contract with the East Pole Demon Lord in Chapter 40 was instantly poisoned and died. I am not the only one like this. Many people commented that they also died of poison. Please read it carefully

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As soon as I looked at it, it disappeared. The most annoying thing was the eunuch.

In fact, in my opinion, this book only has a three-star rating, which is average! As for its characteristics, it is much better than those novice and brainless articles. But that's it, a mainstay in the vast army of writers. After reading more than 30 chapters, I lost motivation because of the setting, the plot, and the writing. I have seen them in other types of novels, but this book is more mixed. I have been reading novels for more than 10 years. I have read too many novels and they are not attractive. However, for new readers or newcomers, it is still worth a read. So I gave it 4 stars overall.

The subject matter is quite good. If I rewrite it now and change some bad points, it will feel better. If you write about summoning, then write about summons well. If there are too many designs, it will become a big hole in the book and you will not be able to write it. Your current summons doesn't feel like a summons, it's very chaotic.

Don't be a trap and you will definitely be popular. Come on, come on, come on, author! ! ! ! ! ! ↓Onmyoji Mountain Rabbit,

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The subject matter is good, but the plot is old-fashioned and poisonous.