
The Great Master: Born with Double Pupils, a Million Points of Shock!
About This Novel
Qingluo Daqian World, born with double eyes, the young master of Qingyu in the Northern Spirit Realm. Awakening sign-in system, After learning about the Great Master of Time Travel, he went directly to the protagonist Muchen to sign in. [Complete inheritance of Double Eyes, Kirin Treasure Technique, Qingtian Glazed Technique, Lingwu Academy Great Desolate Imprisoning Heaven Finger! Qingluo: Only use Qilin Steps when walking, and only use Double Eye Technique to see people! Muchen: They all come from the Northern Spirit Realm. How can the gap between people be so big? Luo Li: His name also has the character Luo... Jiuyou: Our Jiuyou clan does not recognize the master. Qingluo is different. Qingluo has given too much. Battle outside the territory! Qingluo: Standing in front of you now is the Lord of the Western Sky Continent, the Demon-Slaying King of the Daqian Palace, and the only one who dominates the realm - the Blue Emperor with Double Eyes!
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Official(263)Scraped 3d ago
Let's talk about the outline and character design.
First of all, the protagonist of this book is to not lick Muchen or eat dirt after Muchen's ass. Readers who want the protagonist to be a dog and Muchen to be awesome can read other Great Master fanfics. No need to torture yourself here. Secondly, some readers said that Muchen's portrayal did not meet the impact. You know, the reason why Muchen is positive in the original work is because women surround him at every opportunity. The protagonist wants to find out and be awesome, let alone women, it is necessary to seize the opportunity. If the opportunity is robbed and suppressed, your mentality will definitely change. I didn't deliberately say ugly things, otherwise there wouldn't be a plot where Muchen stood in front of Tang Qian'er. Muchen's character will gradually weaken or even develop in a bad direction as the plot develops, which is necessary to promote the plot. In other words, Your friend's woman has been robbed of her job and money. Is it realistic that you still want her to have a healthy and upbeat attitude? The essence of the world of immortality is the law of darkness, which means competing with each other. If you want to read fairy tales, you can go see Andersen!
Who doesn't want to think about millions of words in a book?
Let's talk about the author's situation. He has a four-year-old son. The author works 12 hours a day during the day and only has time to write after get off work at night. Writing a book is something I have always wanted to do. I have been writing it for four or five years. In the past few years, I could have written more than 1 million or 800,000 to 900,000 words. Nowadays, the authors of those discontinued books don't want to write, and they really can't write anymore. After get off work, I was so sleepy after writing for a few hours. As a result, the money I earned every day was not enough to pay for cigarettes and the electricity bill... The less money I have, the less I can write, the less inspiration I have, and the less motivation I have. The author has children to raise and a mortgage to pay, so he is really past the age of generating energy for love. The author believes that everything will be fine, that the new book will definitely make money, and that he will persevere. Come on! ! ! ! ! ! !
I really can't stand it anymore. Muchen is completely treating Lingxi as a training experience package. Damn it, I must take Lingxi, brother author.
The protagonist absorbed the black god thunder and reduced it to a state of residual health. He didn't treat it first and had to go and show off. Genius.
I really don't understand why the Ten Thousand Soul Banners were added. Don't you think it's weird?
The double pupil is invincible, so if you use any magic skills or grab any rubbish opportunities, just develop the double pupil to the extreme and you can kill indiscriminately! With a golden finger from Chongtong, he can kill no one and reach the finale. Let's find out the battle power of Immortal King Shi Yi! I don't understand what the author is doing with all those fancy skills and weapons! Don't you know it's more than you can chew?
I'm exhausted, my fighting power is under pressure, and I can't grasp the plot well.
After all, I don't have many big masters, so I won't go into details, but you really changed the protagonist to another person, who is not like Muchen's character.
The ten evil things that happen when a phoenix touches a porcelain😦! You are the most powerful
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Official(263)Scraped 3d ago
Let's talk about the outline and character design.
First of all, the protagonist of this book is to not lick Muchen or eat dirt after Muchen's ass. Readers who want the protagonist to be a dog and Muchen to be awesome can read other Great Master fanfics. No need to torture yourself here. Secondly, some readers said that Muchen's portrayal did not meet the impact. You know, the reason why Muchen is positive in the original work is because women surround him at every opportunity. The protagonist wants to find out and be awesome, let alone women, it is necessary to seize the opportunity. If the opportunity is robbed and suppressed, your mentality will definitely change. I didn't deliberately say ugly things, otherwise there wouldn't be a plot where Muchen stood in front of Tang Qian'er. Muchen's character will gradually weaken or even develop in a bad direction as the plot develops, which is necessary to promote the plot. In other words, Your friend's woman has been robbed of her job and money. Is it realistic that you still want her to have a healthy and upbeat attitude? The essence of the world of immortality is the law of darkness, which means competing with each other. If you want to read fairy tales, you can go see Andersen!
Who doesn't want to think about millions of words in a book?
Let's talk about the author's situation. He has a four-year-old son. The author works 12 hours a day during the day and only has time to write after get off work at night. Writing a book is something I have always wanted to do. I have been writing it for four or five years. In the past few years, I could have written more than 1 million or 800,000 to 900,000 words. Nowadays, the authors of those discontinued books don't want to write, and they really can't write anymore. After get off work, I was so sleepy after writing for a few hours. As a result, the money I earned every day was not enough to pay for cigarettes and the electricity bill... The less money I have, the less I can write, the less inspiration I have, and the less motivation I have. The author has children to raise and a mortgage to pay, so he is really past the age of generating energy for love. The author believes that everything will be fine, that the new book will definitely make money, and that he will persevere. Come on! ! ! ! ! ! !
I really can't stand it anymore. Muchen is completely treating Lingxi as a training experience package. Damn it, I must take Lingxi, brother author.
The protagonist absorbed the black god thunder and reduced it to a state of residual health. He didn't treat it first and had to go and show off. Genius.
I really don't understand why the Ten Thousand Soul Banners were added. Don't you think it's weird?
The double pupil is invincible, so if you use any magic skills or grab any rubbish opportunities, just develop the double pupil to the extreme and you can kill indiscriminately! With a golden finger from Chongtong, he can kill no one and reach the finale. Let's find out the battle power of Immortal King Shi Yi! I don't understand what the author is doing with all those fancy skills and weapons! Don't you know it's more than you can chew?
I'm exhausted, my fighting power is under pressure, and I can't grasp the plot well.
After all, I don't have many big masters, so I won't go into details, but you really changed the protagonist to another person, who is not like Muchen's character.
The ten evil things that happen when a phoenix touches a porcelain😦! You are the most powerful









