In the World of Kexue, it is Bound to the Naruto System
About This Novel
Traveling to the world of Kexue, Akutagawa Hiko, who was waiting for his golden finger, stayed up all night to fight, and summed up a survival manual in the world of Kexue. He planned to blend in among the protagonists, break away from the theater version, live on rice flowers, and not seek to learn and achieve in Heisei. Unexpectedly, when I was planning to catch up on sleep, I was bound to a system that was long overdue. The moment he saw the name of the system, Akutagawa's face did not change. He just grabbed the results of the night's hard work with his backhand and tore it into pieces in an instant. On this big rice flower stage, I should dance alone. I miss dancing so much! -------- This article is also known as "Did I make a mistake in binding the Hokage system in the Kexue world?", "After binding the Hokage system, I danced on the rice flower stage", "What is the Akatsuki organization, and what does it have to do with me, an innocent rice flower citizen", etc...
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Official(11)Scraped 8d ago
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There's nothing poisonous about it, but it's also not that exciting. Maybe the title of the book gave me too high expectations. After reading Chapter 80, the biggest feeling was that it was bland. Extraordinary power was introduced into Ke Xue's world, but it actually followed the same plot as the original. I had no expectations. I came here for your book title because I wanted to see the protagonist use extraordinary powers to cause trouble in the world of Conan, but you actually wrote about daily life! After finally waiting for a climax, the process was over in one go, which was no fun at all. There are two aspects of writing Conan with extraordinary power. The first is causing trouble between the red and black parties, and the second is torturing the protagonist's washing machine. This book does not take up either of the two points. Most of the space is still about daily life. It is difficult to retain readers. Let me make a suggestion: According to the current relationship between the protagonist and Conan, the torture of Conan style is not suitable. Then put more effort into the struggle between black and red to reflect the extraordinary power of the protagonist. Under the premise of having extraordinary power, what we readers want to see is the battle! It's a river of blood! It's not about the protagonist using extraordinary powers to solve crimes! There are many ways to show your sage in front of people. Don't stick to the plot of the original work. The author can be more creative! Let me give you an example: For example, setting up a high bounty for Gin on the dark web, and waiting for the protagonist to open a new vest to take on the mission to assassinate Gin. Isn't this better than using extraordinary power to solve the case?
It's too cool. You have such a strong ability to do things. Play the role of a Konoha person and let others figure it out. Go join a black organization and play house with your children every day.
The front is okay, but why does it get so confusing at the back? Has the author changed? Why does a novel get worse as it gets written? There are just over 90 photos now. If I don't change it, I don't even dare to think about what will happen next🤗🤗
It doesn't feel very reasonable. It's okay if you have extraordinary power and don't delve into it deeply. You still participate in the plot in various ways. It's unnecessary.
I've never seen a Conan article that doesn't involve a direct showdown. To put it bluntly, Conan is just a series of hundreds of fans. Once the showdown is made, the character cannot stand up.
The first part was okay, but starting from chapter eighty or ninety it became a piece of shit.
It's pretty good, but I don't know who the heroine is? Or is there a female protagonist? Then there's the possibility that the protagonist has a bit of a double standard. He can't be called justice, nor can he be called evil. Anyway, as long as the character doesn't collapse in the later stage.
Why does it get worse as you get to the back? Was it written by the same person?
Redeem for intimacy paradise and become a writer
Write less thrusting plots and stop plotting in Suwon!
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Official(11)Scraped 8d ago
generally
There's nothing poisonous about it, but it's also not that exciting. Maybe the title of the book gave me too high expectations. After reading Chapter 80, the biggest feeling was that it was bland. Extraordinary power was introduced into Ke Xue's world, but it actually followed the same plot as the original. I had no expectations. I came here for your book title because I wanted to see the protagonist use extraordinary powers to cause trouble in the world of Conan, but you actually wrote about daily life! After finally waiting for a climax, the process was over in one go, which was no fun at all. There are two aspects of writing Conan with extraordinary power. The first is causing trouble between the red and black parties, and the second is torturing the protagonist's washing machine. This book does not take up either of the two points. Most of the space is still about daily life. It is difficult to retain readers. Let me make a suggestion: According to the current relationship between the protagonist and Conan, the torture of Conan style is not suitable. Then put more effort into the struggle between black and red to reflect the extraordinary power of the protagonist. Under the premise of having extraordinary power, what we readers want to see is the battle! It's a river of blood! It's not about the protagonist using extraordinary powers to solve crimes! There are many ways to show your sage in front of people. Don't stick to the plot of the original work. The author can be more creative! Let me give you an example: For example, setting up a high bounty for Gin on the dark web, and waiting for the protagonist to open a new vest to take on the mission to assassinate Gin. Isn't this better than using extraordinary power to solve the case?
It's too cool. You have such a strong ability to do things. Play the role of a Konoha person and let others figure it out. Go join a black organization and play house with your children every day.
The front is okay, but why does it get so confusing at the back? Has the author changed? Why does a novel get worse as it gets written? There are just over 90 photos now. If I don't change it, I don't even dare to think about what will happen next🤗🤗
It doesn't feel very reasonable. It's okay if you have extraordinary power and don't delve into it deeply. You still participate in the plot in various ways. It's unnecessary.
I've never seen a Conan article that doesn't involve a direct showdown. To put it bluntly, Conan is just a series of hundreds of fans. Once the showdown is made, the character cannot stand up.
The first part was okay, but starting from chapter eighty or ninety it became a piece of shit.
It's pretty good, but I don't know who the heroine is? Or is there a female protagonist? Then there's the possibility that the protagonist has a bit of a double standard. He can't be called justice, nor can he be called evil. Anyway, as long as the character doesn't collapse in the later stage.
Why does it get worse as you get to the back? Was it written by the same person?
Redeem for intimacy paradise and become a writer
Write less thrusting plots and stop plotting in Suwon!
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