Sword Art Online: Beginning with the Aria of the Sealer

I hold high the banner of the harem, I must have a harem

To be honest, this is the best sword fic I have read in the past two years, and the plot is not as cookie-cutter as other fics.

So far it looks pretty good, I hope I can finish it. It's best to have a single heroine, and don't have a harem or anything like that.

After reading Five Percent, I disliked 2 things. 1. The original plot description was too much. The total word count is 500,000. I wonder if the original plot has 50,000 words. 2. The protagonist replaced Kirito and saved Asuna. What about Kirito? The influence of the original plot on the novel cannot be ignored, so abandon it.

The ending is a bit loose, actually, but the protagonist retains all his abilities and it will be better to start plots in other worlds in the future! Or it's also good for others to just keep part of the panel (the limit for ordinary people)!

A very warm book, a rare slow-paced novel (non-plot), it feels like the excitement has just begun and is over! The early plot is a bit too slow and may be a bit boring, but in the middle and later stages the plot is very exciting and heartwarming. The ending is a bit rushed, but it is still very good, but the golden finger is a bit enlarged. It would be good to keep only the panels of the people around the protagonist, and there is no need to keep them all, or the protagonist and Asuna can all be kept, and it would be better to have a sense of layering.

I think this book is okay, I've read a lot of swordsmanship books.

The plot description has its own ideas, which is a relatively perfect ending.

Recommended reading! It's just that the pace is a bit slow. I personally think that returning to reality will definitely provide a more exciting plot!