My Identity as an Immortal Cultivator Was Exposed by My Great-granddaughter's Live Broadcast

This is the first time I have seen the connection between the immortal cultivator and the live broadcast. Although the routines in it are very cliche and the same pretentious and slap-in-the-face writing as always, in general this book is still okay!

I have been studying hard for many years and I am finally going to break through level 5.

After watching it for 1 hour, the pace is fast and the foreshadowing is too high. The city can reveal a little bit of identity through the supporting characters unintentionally. It is best not to intersperse the previous kpa. It can be taught to let the granddaughter fight and feel about herself.

I think there will be many followers of this topic. For example, my identity as a cultivator was exposed by my female roommate who shared the same apartment. My identity was exposed by my wife, my daughter, my girlfriend, my students, my patients, and my XXX. . . . .

I have been using QQ to read for two years and have read hundreds of books of different kinds. Let me make an objective evaluation. First of all, from the subject matter point of view, this book should be the first one as far as I know. The subject matter is quite novel. In addition, I can also answer a comment in the comment area from the perspective of understanding: "You've already become an immortal, so why are you still an old man?" At the beginning, it is written that the protagonist fails to transcend the tribulation and ascend because there are still relatives in the world who cannot let go. If you want to successfully ascend, you must recognize your descendants, but if you wear a young face, your descendants will only treat you as a lunatic. Back to the topic, the downfall of this book is the introduction. The connection between the introduction and the title will give people a hint that the protagonist was accidentally broadcast live by his great-granddaughter while he was cultivating immortality. I believe many people clicked in because this subject attracted them. However, it has been updated to Chapter 32 and has not publicly mentioned the protagonist's cultivation of immortality. At most, it will make people think that this is an old man with good kung fu, which will make us feel disappointed and aesthetic fatigue. Anyway, when I saw Jiuxing Academician, I gave up after taking a glance at the catalog. Nowadays, fast-paced novels are popular, but your pace is still slow, which will make some people lose interest (such as me). Then there are the old-fashioned pretense routines and popularity. I shouldn't need to say more about this. This should be obvious to all. Give the author some advice: 1. Properly increase the pacing, and reveal the protagonist's ability to cultivate immortality through an accident, and then it should go through a lot of doubts, and finally be confirmed by the big shots, and the whole network will be excited, and everyone will be pretentious. It will be completed in about two to three hundred chapters, and it can also prevent the unfinished story from being criticized. 2. There are less tacky pretense methods. Most content can achieve the effect of pretentiousness through daily live broadcasts and various small events, such as saving individuals, putting out fires, telling the protagonist's past stories in the live broadcast, or performing spells after revealing his identity. 3. If it doesn't work, have a protagonist donate the method of cultivating immortals to the country, triggering a craze for cultivation in the world, and then show off in various ways, and finally take the great-granddaughter to ascend (this is a last resort, and there is really no idea) The above is my personal opinion. This book is the first one to test the water. It doesn't need to be so rigorous. It mainly focuses on accumulating experience. Therefore, having more than 200 chapters may be quite effective and it can also accumulate popularity for the next book. I hope the author can adopt it😸😸

I started reading novels in the first grade of junior high school. It's almost 89 years now. This book is still worth reading. It's very relaxing and can be read as a simple novel. This article is very refreshing, please give it a thumbs up, author! ! Update soon

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