
Ultimate: Girlfriend Tian Xin and Wang Dadong Broke Through the Defense!
by A Pale Song
About This Novel
Ye Chen traveled through time! Being in the ultimate universe, he originally wanted to spend his life lying flat! But his girlfriend's name is Tian Xin! That potential of millions of points has long been targeted by various villains! Have no choice! To protect his girlfriend! Ye Chen can only end his life of lying down and think of ways to strengthen himself! What? Are you the protagonist (supporting character) destined to be the strong one? Don't be afraid! I am a cheater and I am destined to be stronger than you!
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Official(92)Scraped 11d ago
New books are meant to be popular. If they are not updated, how can they get traffic?
The front was fine
From now on, when you go to Tieshikong, you will be purely a tool dog protagonist. What do you want to do? Just do whatever you want. If your combat power is so high, what's the point of having sex?
If the donkey were updated like this, it would have become donkey meat and burned.
OK, but the layout is not perfect
Wang Dadong's dragon pattern sword is a spiritual weapon in the spiritual world, including Lanling Slash, which is also a spiritual weapon in the spiritual world. So, your magic weapon is a bit superfluous. At the same time, there is another point. The weapon of Iron Time and Space's Gun Spirit King, Wufeng, was originally an ordinary revolver. It was just because it was contaminated by the Gun Spirit King's superpower index after following the Gun Spirit King. In addition, it killed too many monsters and gave birth to the Gun Spirit. This was introduced by Brother Xiong, and Wufeng is a legendary weapon, not an artifact. You haven't incorporated these into the system of your works. In addition, you said that ordinary people without supernatural physiques cannot have combat power index. This point was contradictory when you introduced the seven dragons of the Force Judgment Institute whose supernatural physiques were unlocked by meteorites, so you need to change this point. Moreover, the original work has two points that can corroborate each other, which can prove that the combat power index is not innate, and ordinary people can also cultivate it. The first one is Lei Ting's grandfather. He invented a thing to eliminate the combat power index, but this was obviously a thing for psychics. Why would ordinary people lose their lives because of this thing? This shows that the combat power index is the sublimation of something in ordinary people, or to put it more directly, the combat power index is the embodiment of spiritual energy. However, the spiritual energy of ordinary people cannot be unified, and the innate is not strong enough, so it cannot be embodied. However, the descendants of superpower walkers can awaken naturally. This is because their inheritance from the previous generation has caused the spiritual energy of the descendants of superpower walkers to be naturally strong. The powerful spiritual energy will naturally become entangled to form a combat power index. The second point, as mentioned before, is that the seven dragons of the Force Judgment Institute. If they are not born with the physique of a supernatural walker, can a meteorite give them a combat power index? Impossible. It can only be said that they were replenished by the energy in the meteorite, thus forming a combat power index. Moreover, the attributes of the five people are completely different. This can also prove that their combat power index is not brought by the meteorite. Because how could the same meteorite give six people six attributes? And there are two of them with their own talents, one with a right fist and one with a fine point. It can only be said that the two of them awakened their talents because the energy of the meteorite replenished their energy and spirit, while the other three did not have this talent. So I say that your explanation is too far-fetched, and I gave it four stars just because there are too few ultimate fans. The most I can give is three points, but three points is more than 90% of the works, and it can be seen that the author is a novice.
This is a eunuch. In one chapter, his combat power increased by more than 40,000.
The author is not good!
Come in today and take a look. This is a eunuch. What's going on?
I want to give it 4 stars, but I want to give 3 stars because I want to say that I don't need water. The system list is well written.
No one has such a system that gets something for nothing. . The earning of points feels like it has nothing to do with the protagonist, nor does the improvement of skills have anything to do with the protagonist. In other books, the protagonist is successful because he is the protagonist, but in this book, it feels like another cat or dog could have succeeded.
The main character is written so scary
Tie Shikong is the same, they are all attacked with 56,000 combat power. Apart from Freelander, who else can beat Tie Shikong? Tie Shikong is always looked down upon by those Tie Shikong.
It's nice to read more, please come, the author will update quickly
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Official(92)Scraped 11d ago
New books are meant to be popular. If they are not updated, how can they get traffic?
The front was fine
From now on, when you go to Tieshikong, you will be purely a tool dog protagonist. What do you want to do? Just do whatever you want. If your combat power is so high, what's the point of having sex?
If the donkey were updated like this, it would have become donkey meat and burned.
OK, but the layout is not perfect
Wang Dadong's dragon pattern sword is a spiritual weapon in the spiritual world, including Lanling Slash, which is also a spiritual weapon in the spiritual world. So, your magic weapon is a bit superfluous. At the same time, there is another point. The weapon of Iron Time and Space's Gun Spirit King, Wufeng, was originally an ordinary revolver. It was just because it was contaminated by the Gun Spirit King's superpower index after following the Gun Spirit King. In addition, it killed too many monsters and gave birth to the Gun Spirit. This was introduced by Brother Xiong, and Wufeng is a legendary weapon, not an artifact. You haven't incorporated these into the system of your works. In addition, you said that ordinary people without supernatural physiques cannot have combat power index. This point was contradictory when you introduced the seven dragons of the Force Judgment Institute whose supernatural physiques were unlocked by meteorites, so you need to change this point. Moreover, the original work has two points that can corroborate each other, which can prove that the combat power index is not innate, and ordinary people can also cultivate it. The first one is Lei Ting's grandfather. He invented a thing to eliminate the combat power index, but this was obviously a thing for psychics. Why would ordinary people lose their lives because of this thing? This shows that the combat power index is the sublimation of something in ordinary people, or to put it more directly, the combat power index is the embodiment of spiritual energy. However, the spiritual energy of ordinary people cannot be unified, and the innate is not strong enough, so it cannot be embodied. However, the descendants of superpower walkers can awaken naturally. This is because their inheritance from the previous generation has caused the spiritual energy of the descendants of superpower walkers to be naturally strong. The powerful spiritual energy will naturally become entangled to form a combat power index. The second point, as mentioned before, is that the seven dragons of the Force Judgment Institute. If they are not born with the physique of a supernatural walker, can a meteorite give them a combat power index? Impossible. It can only be said that they were replenished by the energy in the meteorite, thus forming a combat power index. Moreover, the attributes of the five people are completely different. This can also prove that their combat power index is not brought by the meteorite. Because how could the same meteorite give six people six attributes? And there are two of them with their own talents, one with a right fist and one with a fine point. It can only be said that the two of them awakened their talents because the energy of the meteorite replenished their energy and spirit, while the other three did not have this talent. So I say that your explanation is too far-fetched, and I gave it four stars just because there are too few ultimate fans. The most I can give is three points, but three points is more than 90% of the works, and it can be seen that the author is a novice.
This is a eunuch. In one chapter, his combat power increased by more than 40,000.
The author is not good!
Come in today and take a look. This is a eunuch. What's going on?
I want to give it 4 stars, but I want to give 3 stars because I want to say that I don't need water. The system list is well written.
No one has such a system that gets something for nothing. . The earning of points feels like it has nothing to do with the protagonist, nor does the improvement of skills have anything to do with the protagonist. In other books, the protagonist is successful because he is the protagonist, but in this book, it feels like another cat or dog could have succeeded.
The main character is written so scary
Tie Shikong is the same, they are all attacked with 56,000 combat power. Apart from Freelander, who else can beat Tie Shikong? Tie Shikong is always looked down upon by those Tie Shikong.
It's nice to read more, please come, the author will update quickly









