
Versatile Mage: Get Douluo System at the Beginning?
by The Sea Will Submerge The Past
About This Novel
[Multiple female protagonists] [Decisive killing] [Soul Ring Soul Skill] Mu Chen traveled through time and came to the world of full-time mage But something seems to be wrong with his system... [It is detected that the host is in the Holy Soul Village and has not yet awakened the martial spirit. Please go to the Soul Hall of the Holy Soul Village immediately and wait for Master Su Yuntao to come and awaken the martial spirit for you] Mu Chen looked at the buildings in Bo City around him and suddenly fell into deep thought. [Host, the person standing in front of you is Shui Binger, the most talented ice attribute soul master in the future Douluo plane, go and make friends with her] Mu Chen looked at Mu Ningxue in front of him and fell into deep thought again. When Mu Chen planned to break through to the intermediate level, he found that he was still unable to break through the mental barrier and let his stardust turn into nebula. [Host, you must absorb the soul ring to break through to the next stage. Are you really the soul master of Douluo Continent? You don't even understand this] Mu Chen saw that after he killed the demon, a soul ring that only he could see emerged from the body, and he fell into deep thought for the nth time.
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Official(19)Scraped 8d ago
Let me say a few words: Can you read the novel first before commenting? In fact, I didn't use Douluo's combat power system at all, and the protagonist has not awakened the martial soul. Even if he gets a soul ring later, it will be obtained from the demon. What does it have to do with the soul beast, and what does it have to do with Douluo's combat power? I wrote this system just to provide program effects and rewards. Stop stressing and stop talking nonsense. There are people who are loved by Douluo fans and all French fans. Please respect them.
Author, have you watched too many female videos? A good novel is written by a fan with this virtue. The classic mute protagonist does not open his mouth to deliberately cause misunderstandings, and then uses inner drama or narration to quibble for a long time. It seems reasonable but is actually all self-movement and self-pua. The author subconsciously feels that the protagonist cannot be so smooth and cannot be understood by others. This is a typical way of writing female videos. Other female videos write this way because their plots are shallow. If they don't write it this way, they won't be able to advance the plot. Some even a whole book develops the subsequent plot because the protagonist doesn't say anything at the beginning. If you are a person who writes fan fiction and has a clear main line, but you still write like this, you are simply disgusting the readers. If you are not good at writing a long novel, then write short exercises first, and don't use such crooked ways to force it together. Finally, I would like to advise you, if you are poor, you will not be able to win because of your comments. Similarly, if there is something wrong with a review, you don't have to criticize it, and someone will naturally criticize it. You are the author, and speaking out personally will only make others feel bad about you and your book. If it is misunderstood, just explain it in a few sentences and make it clear. Don't keep arguing with people who don't understand.
In order to make up for the regrets of the brothers in the previous book The protagonist of this book is a time traveler who knows the plot, and the heroine is Mu Ningxue
I'm too lazy to talk about you. Half of the dozen or so pictures contain water characters.
I hope everyone can collect it and read it. The original intention of this book is to make everyone happy. The system is more funny and entertaining. I hope everyone will be happier after reading it. It is most suitable for relaxing. Thank you for your support👴👴👴
Nine out of ten chapters are nonsense and there is no plot.
The martial soul awakens. What martial soul awakens?
There is another system for traveling through the world of full-time mage, which is said to be from Douluo Continent. Previously, there were also systems that were said to be from Naruto, Fox Demon Matchmaker, and Fighting to Break the Sky (I have read these few so far)
I thought you could cultivate martial arts and magic. There are a lot of Wuhun Little Red Books that should be quite unique during the Wuhun Magic Weekend.
After reading a few chapters, I really have no desire to continue reading. First, I am really speechless about the age setting. . . Is starting at 12 years old a joke? Secondly, wouldn't Bo City be able to write a water-based start without being ridiculed? Third, the biggest dissuasion point is that the Douluo system is really misleading. . . . The reputation of combat floor tiles is too great. . Readers are automatically drawn in and are instantly persuaded to leave.
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Community(0)
Official(19)Scraped 8d ago
Let me say a few words: Can you read the novel first before commenting? In fact, I didn't use Douluo's combat power system at all, and the protagonist has not awakened the martial soul. Even if he gets a soul ring later, it will be obtained from the demon. What does it have to do with the soul beast, and what does it have to do with Douluo's combat power? I wrote this system just to provide program effects and rewards. Stop stressing and stop talking nonsense. There are people who are loved by Douluo fans and all French fans. Please respect them.
Author, have you watched too many female videos? A good novel is written by a fan with this virtue. The classic mute protagonist does not open his mouth to deliberately cause misunderstandings, and then uses inner drama or narration to quibble for a long time. It seems reasonable but is actually all self-movement and self-pua. The author subconsciously feels that the protagonist cannot be so smooth and cannot be understood by others. This is a typical way of writing female videos. Other female videos write this way because their plots are shallow. If they don't write it this way, they won't be able to advance the plot. Some even a whole book develops the subsequent plot because the protagonist doesn't say anything at the beginning. If you are a person who writes fan fiction and has a clear main line, but you still write like this, you are simply disgusting the readers. If you are not good at writing a long novel, then write short exercises first, and don't use such crooked ways to force it together. Finally, I would like to advise you, if you are poor, you will not be able to win because of your comments. Similarly, if there is something wrong with a review, you don't have to criticize it, and someone will naturally criticize it. You are the author, and speaking out personally will only make others feel bad about you and your book. If it is misunderstood, just explain it in a few sentences and make it clear. Don't keep arguing with people who don't understand.
In order to make up for the regrets of the brothers in the previous book The protagonist of this book is a time traveler who knows the plot, and the heroine is Mu Ningxue
I'm too lazy to talk about you. Half of the dozen or so pictures contain water characters.
I hope everyone can collect it and read it. The original intention of this book is to make everyone happy. The system is more funny and entertaining. I hope everyone will be happier after reading it. It is most suitable for relaxing. Thank you for your support👴👴👴
Nine out of ten chapters are nonsense and there is no plot.
The martial soul awakens. What martial soul awakens?
There is another system for traveling through the world of full-time mage, which is said to be from Douluo Continent. Previously, there were also systems that were said to be from Naruto, Fox Demon Matchmaker, and Fighting to Break the Sky (I have read these few so far)
I thought you could cultivate martial arts and magic. There are a lot of Wuhun Little Red Books that should be quite unique during the Wuhun Magic Weekend.
After reading a few chapters, I really have no desire to continue reading. First, I am really speechless about the age setting. . . Is starting at 12 years old a joke? Secondly, wouldn't Bo City be able to write a water-based start without being ridiculed? Third, the biggest dissuasion point is that the Douluo system is really misleading. . . . The reputation of combat floor tiles is too great. . Readers are automatically drawn in and are instantly persuaded to leave.









