Let You Deliver Food and You Become the Savior?

The synopsis was completely broken. The first few pages, which were originally about the main character traveling through the two realms of yin and yang, made the author write it into a Long Aotian-style pretentious slap in the face. The main line of the story, which begins when the protagonist returns to his hometown, has become increasingly deviated from the main line. The writing was a bit shaky at first, and it felt like it would only last a few chapters. It would be nice to go back to Zhonghai, but the results are not good. It is investing in real estate and pretending to be a slap in the face. To be honest, Q Reading can accept books of this level, which is really bad.

This book is really good. It can be regarded as a refreshing article. It's quite good. Good luck to the author.

It's really cool, do it faster, do it faster, it's not enough

But the protagonist brought this book down. How many seconds do you think he can survive with such a weak IQ and a protagonist with this theme? After reading only a few chapters, I saw that the protagonist was being played casually by the supporting characters, and his IQ was completely crushed, and he had no power to fight back. Even the minions abused the protagonist at will. I suggest the author increase the protagonist's IQ, otherwise the probability of GG will be high.

The subject matter of this book is really good and novel. The golden chapter at the beginning is also well written, otherwise it would not attract me. But the writing may fall apart later on. The middle and later stages are all the same old routine of pretentiousness and slap in the face, which is really disgusting.

Although it is a cool article, the setting is very novel, and the beginning is still worth reading. The ending is too irresponsible, digging so many holes and just disappearing. There is no criticism, I just sigh that it is a pity!

Although it is a good novel, the plot is too cliche and may be liked by everyone, but don't do this all the time. The rich second generation is written like a fool, and the intelligence is too serious. Now the plot has been written badly. Occasionally, there are one or two such plots that are okay, but one after another makes me vomit. There's still Chapter 28, so let me make a phone call... This is like a passerby coming up and giving you two big sinuses, and then telling you that you can't afford to offend me backstage. If you don't believe me, just ask me to make a phone call. If you don't think you can cut him off, it's over. Although it is said that reading refreshing articles should not stimulate your brain, it should not be too serious to reduce your intelligence. The main thing is the plot, which is just the same routine over and over again, and the rich second generation and the powerful second generation are brainlessly looking for trouble, and then the pig's feet drag an even more brainless "big shot" out to show off and slap him in the face...

I'm still a little interested in seeing the first few chapters. No wonder Douyin only explains the first few chapters. The old-fashioned plots in the following chapters make people's blood pressure rise. It's a pure SB plot and it doesn't even feel good.

This is so messed up that I feel numb. I originally thought that this plot would be quite interesting, and there would be many more plots to follow, but suddenly! Gave me an outline? ? ? ? Wtf? ? ? And then just... Gone? You are so irresponsible! I really can't find any reason not to leave a negative review, and the more I think about it, the angrier I get!

It's a bad review. Let's finish writing about the human world at least.