Spirit Realm Wandering God: I Have a Door to Two Realms

First of all, the development of the plot is too slow. It takes more than 70 chapters for the protagonist to reach the first-level profession. In addition, the prices are really messy, and there is no comparison between the gains and the gains. Although the protagonist is only a temporary worker when he joins the official job, but judging from the several tasks of the protagonist, it is a life-threatening job at any time. The salary is only 3,000. He has completed several tasks and received several third-class merits. The bonus is only a few hundred yuan. The protagonist opened his own shop and hired a few people. The employee's salary is 3,000 plus commission, which is higher than the protagonist's salary. The century-old medicine that the protagonist bought is only more than 20,000, which is a life-saving medicine. In the Jing'an Bureau, the protagonist actually bought a first-order monster corpse for 500,000 military points and 300,000 for explosives. In addition, the protagonist's golden finger has been read for dozens of chapters and has not been found to be of any use?

Forget about the slow pace. The main reason is that the protagonist is too stupid and has no temper at all. Everyone can do a calculation without fear of retaliation. And the mission has to come. I don't understand. You can't kill people without missions, right? You won't die if you don't have a mission, right? It's troublesome to ask for missions and you have to pay in advance. If the rewards later are not enough, will you still lose money? It's a steady profit but a hard loss. It's really refreshing to double-cross this theme and your protagonist has to be powerful, especially since this technology is still suppressed in the world. Even if you imitate Qingfeng, you might not be able to catch him. Why can't you be a little tempered?

The characterization, social description, and environmental analysis are all very good. The characters are vivid and colorful, the data is accurate, and the plot is reasonable. It's worth a look, come on

First of all, the writing is good, but the pace is too slow, and then the risks and rewards are not proportional at all. I risked my life a few times and just paid 3900. Do you think that idiot would go there? 100 Times of third-class merit, 100 times of life-threatening danger, in exchange for a career inheritance opportunity. Why do you think you have too many lives?

The protagonist is sometimes mature and sometimes looks like an adolescent boy, and the world view has not been fully developed in so many chapters. The plot progresses too slowly, and the setting is still in the first year of high school. So if the protagonist is asked to finish the book step by step, it will take two and a half years. According to the author's current plot development speed, it will take four to five hundred chapters to complete high school.

The protagonist's IQ is not very high. This doesn't quite make sense in many places. Except for the concept, it is relatively poor. It's a pity that this setting

Eunuch, can you please explain? I wouldn't have bought it if I had known it earlier. After I finished buying it, I found out that he was a eunuch. I followed him all the way to buy it.

The idea is very well conceived, very novel, and the writing is okay, keep up the good work

One thing to say, it's really average. The guy who hung up for a long time didn't know what he was doing. He didn't know what the protagonist was doing. It was very uncomfortable.

I don't know how to put it, it's really the same rhythm