Only I Can Do It: the Characters in the Play Help Me Become a Fairy

The writing is not good, too lengthy and wordy. If you have the ability, go directly to Macau, win enough 500,000 yuan in various casinos within a year, and come back to shoot a short play. I never expected that 5-minute short play, in which you make yourself a superman, cost 10,000 yuan for a short film, and shoot more than 30 short films. I don't believe you can't show the skills of a superman. Two more years of sunshine. At that time, I was invincible and slaved the earth. At that time, I could shoot whatever I wanted.

Author, let me teach you how to write. First of all, if you don't have money to buy a computer at the beginning, you can go to an Internet cafe to charter a plane, go to the Internet to use programming technology to take orders, and after making money, you can buy a camera worth tens of thousands of yuan, and directly shoot the character of a fairy (test the quality of the system). Of course, the system will definitely ignore the protagonist, which will leave suspense. Then try a simple one to see if even the most basic prerequisites are not met, blah blah blah. When writing a novel, the protagonist must first have a brain, have the ability to act, and give people the feeling of being alive. Your protagonist is just like the walking dead. What's so interesting about it?

This title may be viewed by quite a few people as a "me-only" approach. Keeping your focus on acting and the entertainment industry is quite a failure! !

The plot rhythm is too chaotic and complicated. There are too many unnecessary character background descriptions. It seemed a bit wordy, and after reading it for a long time, I couldn't get to the point.

I'm speechless. If the protagonist was really an aborigine, it would be okay to write like this, but the protagonist is wearing clothes, he is over fifty, and he has been around on the Internet, so it looks like cerebellar atrophy.

I really want to scold the author, but my personal qualities don't allow it. Just one. . MD

It was poisoned as soon as it was released... It fell into the river, and it took two chapters before it was found... Did you directly go from falling into the river to falling into the sea? ? ?

The protagonist is not related to others, and if others are threatened, the protagonist goes to help!

Why are they all explanations? Various explanations. Telling stories is not explanations. After reading dozens of chapters, they are all various explanations. Is it because the author is not good at writing? I am so speechless. You only need to read the beginning, middle and end of each chapter. The rest are all lengthy explanations.

The intellectual essay is about the author himself. What kind of thing is he writing? I couldn't stand it from the beginning. Is it worthy of this subject matter?