Feng Liuli Who Travels Through the Portable Space

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To be honest ☞ It's a slow-burning type. It takes more than 100 chapters to find space. I feel that the space came out too late and it didn't have a big effect. The heroine is not strong at all, a little weak and a bit of a noob, with a bit of a Virgin Mary plot.

First, the heroine is too weak. Second, the space appears too late. Third, the novel is too cliche. They all have the best relatives and kind neighbors. With the best stepmother, the heroine is still cowardly, which is not interesting. The article is too slow. I have read dozens of chapters, and it is too bland! Bye-Bye!

The male protagonist is too weak and the female protagonist is too holy. The whole story either saves one or the other. The space is written so well that it is not used when it should be used. It is injured so often and it is also drunk. The heroine said that she had traveled through time and was not even comparable to the ancients. She should be ruthless, but she could only talk. The characters that suddenly appeared didn't know where they came from. The most deceiving thing is that when she first started selling fruits and vegetables, no one suspected where they came from. There were no seeds at all and they just appeared out of thin air. Even the big shots couldn't find out her details even if they wanted to check her. The emotional line is also inexplicable. Before the relationship is explained, he desperately saves the hero's mother. The explanation of things is not clear. I have forgotten the plot I wrote. Some chapters are full of loopholes. It feels like it was released without careful examination. I didn't want to abandon the article and read it quickly. I only represent my personal views on the novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Is the heroine too virginal? His stepmother is about to sell him, why doesn't he let his father divorce her? Just speaking harsh words will accomplish nothing.

The heroine's whole family was imprisoned by the hero. When the hero found out, he pretended to save the heroine's family. The heroine's whole family burst into tears. I don't know whether it was the heroine who was stupid or the man and woman who were hypocritical. The heroine's secret was discovered and she didn't even know that she was used by the hero and they were still happy. Is there another book where the heroine was killed by the hero and then the heroine came back to take revenge? It's so disgusting. I don't know what kind of brain structure this novel was written by.

I don't have any emotional connection with the hero yet, so I went to save the hero's mother when I was not in good health. In fact, I could have waited until I recovered well and then saved him, haha. After saving the male protagonist, his mother's hair turned white, she was infertile, and her legs were bad. She began to hide and didn't say anything, Holy Mother, haha Knowing that Xiao Huo can save her and restore her body, but Xiao Huo is in the male protagonist's body, she still doesn't tell the male protagonist, feeling sorry for herself and worrying that she is infertile and the male protagonist's family will not agree, haha

It's okay, I have a personal opinion. I still prefer real farming stories that use modern methods to make a fortune based on evidence. I don't like farming stories that rely on space, special powers, golden fingers, and spiritual power. I think they should be fantasy farming stories.

It's okay, it's pretty arbitrary, and the ending is perfect.

New books will be on the shelves at the end of the year. I recommend Hao Ma's new book "A Thousand Gold Wrong: The Almighty Farm Girl Works in the Fields". We look forward to your support! Feng Liuli is the first book. It is very unfamiliar and I am still learning. Thank you all for your continued support and encouragement to Hao Ma. It is precisely because of everyone's support that Hao Ma has the motivation to continue writing! Following the first work "Feng Liuli Traveling Through the Portable Space", the second "Peasant Woman's Space: The Child Queen Mother" has been loved by everyone, and Hao Ma has the courage to continue. The third pure ancient Chinese book is not very good, with a collection of only 5,000. Maybe Hao Ma is still suitable for writing farming articles! "The King of the World: The Wife Is Too Enchanting" has a good plot, but it was a pity that I failed to write it. The plot of the fourth book, "Yaoxiang Farmer's Wife: The Military Advisor is Busy Chasing His Wife," is too slow and slow to pick up. The collection has not exceeded 10,000, so it is ready to be completed. In the fifth book of the new book, "A Thousand Gold Mistakes: The Almighty Peasant Girl Works in the Fields", Hao Ma switched to a soul traveling and adding system, which is not the usual farming space text. The plot in the new book has many twists and turns, and it will dig holes, but Hao Ma is usually the kind who digs holes and buries them, so please feel free to enter them. Of course, the new book will be different in terms of tasks and plot direction, and the story will not be so bland. I hope you will support Hao Ma and the new book, okay~~ In addition, I also decided to modify the writing method and speed up the plot so that everyone will not feel boring.