Alliance: I Control the Rune of Thieving Omens

To set the tone first, this book is quite well written. Originally, it was just a book shortage at first, but then I found this book with a score of 9.6 With more than 200 chapters. The subject matter, plug-in settings, and time entry points. The first three chapters are all well written and deserve such a high score. Then I looked at the present moment in one breath, my brows became more and more wrinkled, and I couldn't suppress the complaints in my heart. I didn't want to say that I should just abandon the book. After all, this is a world created by the author himself. Having others point fingers is equivalent to saying something bad about his child in front of his parents and pointing fingers at his child's future. No matter what the purpose is, this is not good after all. If it doesn't suit your taste, the worst thing you can do is just not read it. But the most annoying thing is that this book is not to my taste. The subject matter and setting are all good. I want to give up the book but can't bear to part with it. If I continue to read it, I still feel that it has shortcomings. It's too confusing. ... Well, I've already written it down to this point, and I don't want to say anything I want to complain about, but instead of saying that I typed so many words in the middle of the night and wasted it, I might as well say something. What follows is full of emotional nonsense. If you are not interested, don't read it, so as not to affect your mood. When can the protagonist's name be changed? Let's unify it. One protagonist with two names feels like two protagonists, and the sense of substitution is extremely poor. The self-created female character was quite good at the beginning. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into it, but in the end he didn't handle it well. In order to advance the plot, he wrote her to surrender. For a childhood sweetheart who had feelings for both sides, whether the feelings were true or false, guilt, guilt, pity, or whatever, he finally let her go and broke up with her. Absolutely, it would be better to let her flee, or directly kill her sister to prove her truth, and keep her own secrets. It is better to let her surrender directly. Even if her intercession succeeds and she is free for life, there is no fear of sending her to the guillotine directly. This is a bit poisonous. It feels that the image of the protagonist has been directly destroyed. Shen Nong almost died of poison for many years. Moreover, the protagonist was a baron at the time, and no matter how low the title, he was still an aristocratic class, calling himself "little"... When reading novels, I pay attention to the sense of immersion. The novel was originally well written, and the nature of the novel was high, but suddenly it was like tasting delicious food. Suddenly, I was fed a mouthful of shit, and I lost the sense of immersion. It was so uncomfortable. There are also people who participate in competitions. Even though they don't have resources as good as Dragon Girl, they still know the basics (magic power). The swordsman Galena is also very familiar, Lux can also pave the way, and there is a base (alchemy) in the border mountains, which is full of dangers and can be practiced in life and death. This is better than an arena competition with unknown rewards, low intensity, and no danger. If the author had laid some foreshadowing to trick people, that would be a different matter. ...(Omitting a bunch of saliva) I can't stop complaining in the middle of the night. Don't blame the author. It's my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't complain.

Come on brother, some plots can be summed up in one go, otherwise they will be banned

To be honest, I can't stand this heroine. Maybe it's because she's not the heroine in my mind. I actually think Elle Bella is pretty good. Whether it's the emotional foreshadowing or anything else, it's very good. Whether it's the description of the character or the image of the character, the foreshadowing is really great. But in the end, it was written as Lux. Personally, I feel a bit poisonous. However, the author's writing style is also very good, and overall there are no major problems. I write this mainly because I want to complain and feel sorry for Elle Bella. As for this book, I'd better keep it for now. I'll come back after this emotional episode is over. After all, I still can't bear to throw away such a good book. (Ps: I rarely write book reviews. This review is not meant to be critical. It's mainly because I feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the author doesn't mind. I apologize if there is anything unclear in my expression.)

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Evidence, everyone testify, keep an eye on me

It's best to unify the names of the protagonists. After all, they have traveled through time and still write their previous names, but others call them their current names.

We became good friends after fighting the two magic hunters once, and when they were misunderstood, they didn't get angry after being beaten. They also patiently explained that after living with Green for so long, he was angry because of something he didn't see. He also sympathized with the magician when he was killed in the street. When he became a magician, he was angry with the magician when he resisted. After all, don't you still look down on magicians? If you are killed, I can sympathize with you, but if you resist, I think you deserve to die.

I'm really tired of reading novels with protagonists with this kind of character. It's still the same after more than 20 chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. I would have liked it more if I wrote it like this a year earlier.

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Either before time travel or after time travel,