Dragon Ball: Saiyan Angel

It's quite speechless, trying to sell dog meat on a sheep's head. I feel like the author didn't pay attention to Dragon Ball. Let's not talk about other things. Angels in Dragon Ball are servants of God. They are servants. Regardless of their powerful abilities, they are basically destined to die. They were created to serve the gods of the universe. Although I also like to watch Dragon Ball, I have always felt that Ziziyi Gong is similar to the subtleties in martial arts and fantasy. It is powerful in dealing with people who do not understand subtleties. It forms a dimension-reducing blow, just like a realm. Bullying the people below is like torturing people, but it is not as awesome as in Dragon Ball. It is powerful in Dragon Ball. The main reason is that in Dragon Ball, power is the first pursuit of warriors. You may say that you pay attention to skills, but it does not show much. You may say that you don't pay attention to them. There are also all kinds of weird moves. But the protagonist is a time-traveler, and it's a bit stupid to brag about this stuff like this. Also, the protagonist has 20,000 combat power at the beginning, and is trained by King Vegeta. Have you really never watched Dragon Ball?

It looks better. There are indeed a lot of updated words on the shelves, but I feel it is not enough. My suggestion is to update 100,000 words a day.

The protagonist in the 100 pictures is still five years old. He has never fought. He uses the first few cards to show off Vegeta's performance in the two shots, and stops Vegeta on Namek. The summary of a lot of nonsense on Namek is that the protagonist has acquired the ability to survive in space. At the beginning, you said that you would raise Vegeta as a thug and then you didn't show your strength. The two attacks you took were both unexpected in Vegeta's eyes. If you don't show your strength, why should people believe you? Just because you know more about time travel, do you think you are superior to others? Do you think that a master pretending to be a master can just say a few words and let people realize it? Then I felt that he was too arrogant and didn't take it with him (he didn't let the great elder increase his combat power). When I went to Kaioshin Realm, the protagonist got the mecha in Chapter 16 and there was no real progress. When I was about to leave, I saw the sword being drawn. I thought I would let the old Kaioshin come out to teach the young ones, but then he just drew the sword and didn't let the old man go. At that time, I always thought that the protagonist's combat power should be stronger than Broly, because when I first wrote the story of Transformation into a Saiyan God, the angel energy reached 10. I thought that at 9, it should be stronger than Broly, but the result was not as good as others. The characters sweat several times in each chapter.

It's a member's article, so I don't expect it to be very good. It just has a lot of poisonous points. This book has a lot of vulgar and pornographic passages, just like the sausage gag in Douluo Dalu's Oscar. It's a boring and bad pornographic joke. Everyone looks like the protagonist's pet has no brain. Broly is portrayed as rubbish and a little too high. The emotions are really strong and inexplicable, and the plot is also inexplicable. You have already changed the earth to the universe, and you still want to force it to follow the original work? Don't you think about the plot yourself? I have to follow the original work. The plot cannot stand up to scrutiny if I think about it carefully. And Vegeta, I really feel like Vegeta has offended the author. The original CP Bulma is gone. When he was a few years old, his combat power has increased from 15,000 to 18,000 over the past ten years and decades. He is worthy of being the prince of the Saiyans and has actually increased his combat power by 3,000 in so many years😱 I don't think it is that strong when I learn how to self-destruct energy. Frieza said in the Namek chapter that a barrier made of millions of combat power can block Vegeta's destruction... It's really cheap. I really don't think he is any better than Vegeta at the same time in the original work. He talks about becoming the God of Destruction every day... Speechless The protagonist grows up too fast, causing everyone to have no soul. They are all afraid of the protagonist and afraid of the protagonist. It seems that everyone is a paramecium and a fool. Only the protagonist is a normal person. Let's talk about relationships. Let's take Broly as an example. The little robot loves "What are you looking at?" This is so strong. We haven't seen each other for so long, but we fell in love with him once when we were kids? A life-and-death thing? I fell in love with it without any foreshadowing. Broly also became a God of Destruction because of his little love and used two teleportations to cause his own fall. That part was really awkward. What a sense of sadness in the universe. The Gods of Destruction who came after him felt sad when they looked at Broly. Does the author want us outside the screen to cry with him? You see, Xiao Ai fell in love with Broly because he spent some time with Broly when he was a child. Although Xiao Ai is a robot, he still has feelings. He can sacrifice his life for Broly to save Broly. I was so touched that it made me cry. It made me feel a little physically uncomfortable. Even if Luo Tian dies, he will not see Broly like this. I wanted to read reviews of this book a long time ago. I thought I could read it for fun, but there was actually nothing, so I posted my complaints. Although there is still a lot left to say In fact, this book is worth reading, but you have to abandon your brain and don't think. You can accept bad jokes and meaningless pornographic paragraphs.

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It's okay, it's not ugly, but the plot is a bit stained, and there are two poisonous points. It's more than a hundred chapters long, the protagonist is still five years old, and the earth from the seventh universe is changed to the sixth universe, but it doesn't feel right...

Regarding the issue of angels, the original work said that they maintain the balance of the universe, and angels may represent balance. I think it may be because of the influence of this priesthood that angels are immortal, but they cannot break the angelic code, otherwise they will lose the protection of the priesthood and disappear instantly under the power of time. It seems that the rights of each god cannot be used in tandem!

It's not very good, but I wanted to finish it with a similar ending. There are all kinds of poisonous points, and I also found some unnatural reasons to kill the other Gods of Destruction. I didn't like the emotional scenes, etc. It's quite messy at the end. Kaioshin has been playing the clown here for so long, so it's outrageous and I don't believe anything. Then the old Kaiou appears and changes a few words. It's boring to write Dragon Ball with this kind of plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be a slap in the face. What the hell, I want to watch this kind of plot. There are many in Xiaobai's novels, and the writing is much better than yours. Later, the angels began to have emotions and desires, and various CPs were constantly dismantled (this is the idea of ​​people like me. If I don't like you and like your harem stud, don't come to me to get crazy). After that, the plot has no highlights. It is more funny, and the blood is nothing. There are good and bad divisions in combat power. Jiren's writing is still a bit low, and the whole tragedy tower. Does the prince have a grudge against you? The original work also has a tragedy tower, but it's not like you. Is there any highlight of the prince in the whole process? Including Goku, as well as Buu and Broly, their speed increased. How long did they practice for? The co-author's ability to raise pets is much better than that of the great priest. There is also the part about exchanging the earth. Did you think your part was outstanding? The summary of the theme ideas is okay, but the length is a bit long and the plot does not have many highlights, and it seems very watery, and there are constant poisonous points during the period.