One Sword Dominates

I think why the author has to write it so tightly. Every chapter is either in battle or on the way to fight or on the way to practice. Can't you just loosen up a few plots? Before finishing this powerful one, another powerful one will come out. There is no benefit in being too tight, you know? . . . . He also said that he wanted to go back to Qingcang Realm to have a look, but he didn't believe it. I've almost seen more than 900 pictures now. It's impacting the fifth dimension. Has the author forgotten Tuoba Yan? He hasn't mentioned her since the protagonist left Qingcang Realm. Moreover, Tuoba Yan is the first woman that the protagonist has slept with. I won't write about it because she is not talented, and And when the protagonist leaves the Qingcang Realm, Tuoba Yan says he will wait for you to come back. This is a foreshadowing, that is, Tuoba Yan has not left the Qingcang Realm yet. I don't know if I should write about her. If the plot of waiting for the protagonist to return to the Qingcang Realm is that Tuoba Yan gets married, but is not the protagonist, that would be a bit nonsense. Please come and comment! ! ! ! ! ! !

The pace is very fast. In fact, each new region and new character can be discussed in a long chapter for a hundred chapters. A slightly more detailed feeling will also help the previous characters to catch up. To put it bluntly, I just hope that Ye Xuan can stay with us readers for a longer time. Even if the power ceiling of this work is extremely high, a few hundred chapters will be nothing. I really hope that One Sword Dominate will be on the best-selling novel list next year.

Please update it quickly. When I first started reading it, I had already updated more than a thousand chapters. I caught up with you before I knew it. The reason why I like this book is that I am used to reading many novels with similar plots. In this one, although the protagonist is either being tortured or on the way to being tortured, the protagonist has been tortured thousands of times and still remains the same. This is what I like. Also, when you go back to your old place to visit, have you forgotten the spirits, beasts, etc. That were with him in the past?

Hey, Ye Ling looks like a soft ball, but he can be tough when his brother is being bullied. Although... It has no practical effect, at least it is a sincere thought, hoping that this little girl's illness can be cured soon.

Alas, I feel that this dismissal has a lot to do with Ye Lang. It is very possible that this man is behind it. Taking advantage of Ye Xuan's absence, he gave Ye Xuanan an unwarranted title and tried to snatch the throne of the heir apparent. This is too much. When Ye Xuan comes back, we must take care of this Ye Lang.

A few suggestions: Where did the imperial dog go? What about promising the revival of the Gods? Should there be a sequel to Tuoba Little Demon and the bandit mercenary group? And Gong Qingcheng, Ye Ling who can write is his biggest success in the future, don't forget it! ! Where is the Financial Controller Jian Chuchu? Can't you just write it down and then disappear? There is also the little girl Tongtong I met during the battle against Chu. I always thought it was a foreshadowing and there was no further story. Ye Xuan is the double reincarnation of the prophet and Ye Shen? Ye Ling is the double reincarnation of Empress Shura and the Law of Reincarnation? Who is Ye Ling's mother? What is the relationship between Duguxuan and their siblings? Should we go back and repay the favors we owe in the clearance industry? Lu Xiaoran. There should be later chapters on Zuixianlou and the Sword Sect, right? There is also Ye Xuan's female master in Jianzong. . . There is very little written behind Xiao Ling'er. . . In short, what I thought was a lot of foreshadowing in the front suddenly disappeared, making it a bit confusing. I hope Qingluan has time to sort out his thoughts.

It was originally recommended by others, but after only reading a few dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was nothing at first, and I thought the novel was pretty good. Then as I read on, I realized that the character of the protagonist has some problems. It's okay to be a maniac about protecting the sister, but he also needs to have some IQ. Anyway, this novel is that no matter what, the sister is beaten (and the routine is too repetitive, and he always gets slapped), and then the protagonist loses his mind. No matter what the other party's power is, he kills people without remembering the consequences. Then the novel is written that if the sister is beaten, the other party will be punished no matter what. Later, life is still nourishing, and then the protagonist kills the other party. . . . . I want to say, this kind of protagonist can actually survive so many chapters? If you take a random picture, you should be able to tell the character of the protagonist.

I only read eight chapters of the article, which is really unsightly, so I stopped reading. The writing is young and needs practice. I know it takes time, but a good author will never publish such a work. If the author writes casually, treat it as if I didn't say anything. Improper wording, can the usage of "zai" and "zai" be wrong? It's no longer one place or two places.

The top of the girl, the walking sword, pointing in the direction for a moment The top of the brother, against the world, why is it so difficult to seek defeat? On the top of my father's world, my son Ye Xuan can become an immortal The top of the egg, updated twice a day, the successor is powerless and the water is boundless

Are there any book friends who have read for 7000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations