Yu Di Xing

Come on, come on, remember, the following are the key points. 1. The author please break it down into paragraphs. There are so many of them that people won't be able to read them at the first glance. Segmentation allows each person to speak separately. 2. Can you please provide more descriptions of scenes, actions, psychology, expressions, etc.? They are all spoken words, and some places are neither divided into paragraphs nor written as to who said it, so readers can easily get confused. 3. Then, please use dividing lines to separate changes in location or time (referring to large spans). Otherwise, readers will be confused and confused about such sudden changes, and then the article will become increasingly incomprehensible. Since the author is determined to go to QQ to read some promotions, he must at least ensure that the language of the article is smooth, the interface is clean, and the main story line is clear. Although you may not be tired when writing in this non-paragraphed format, readers will be tired. Over time, either fewer and fewer people will read this article, or no one will read it at all. Look at your readers, there are only nine. How many have you written? Twenty thousand! You've already written 20,000 pieces, so you must have at least 20 or 30 readers. I'm not telling you, how many chapters of literary talent do eunuchs like me have? Excluding the last three chapters, there are only five chapters. I have one thousand per chapter, you have two thousand per chapter, I have twenty readers, one hundred and one collections, you have nine readers, how many collections? It's not that I'm trying to hurt you. You said you're a new author, and so am I. I was born in 2005, so I may be younger or older than you, but I believe that even if I'm older than you, I'm not much older. As a new author, I also felt that I could not write well, so I stopped writing novels first, read them first, studied them first, and then continued writing after I learned them. Keep working hard and get rid of some bad things. I believe you can gain more readers instead of just a few readers after publicizing it. I give you five stars to give you affirmation and encouragement, not to pick you up and ridicule you.

Thank you Brother Haoxian for your vote. I haven't updated it for a long time. I hope everyone can bear with me.

Seniors, I will adopt all your suggestions. I hope you can give me more suggestions.

You have written a lot of words, and you are not in the mood to read them. It is rare that you go to QQ to look for people, but it is useless as it does not look good.