
Evolution Starts with the Elf
About This Novel
In the age of spiritual power, besides warriors there are even rarer demon warriors. The demon warrior contracts the demon beast so that he can use the demon beast's abilities. Awakening two years later than others? It doesn't matter, I will give you an evolution system that can evolve monsters. Little elves, pure water elves, water and fire elves, five element elves, eight pole elves... Evolution starts with the elf.
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Official(26)Scraped 7d ago
Original God's Pure Water Spirit
Ah, pure water elf, the first thing that comes to mind is the original god. Raise your hand (
There are many unreasonable places.
First of all, this mentor is wearing a miniskirt when he first appears. When he first meets the protagonist, he wears a skirt and rides his monster deer. That scene... And later appearances are also in various skirts. This is the world of warriors. No matter how much you love beauty, you will not wear skirts often, especially miniskirts. Especially senior warriors are even less likely to be affected by the so-called love of beauty! There was also a female classmate who appeared in a short skirt. When we went together to another school, the teacher who received her gave her a classic test. She was also wearing a short skirt and was really speechless... However, when we explored the plot of the dungeon later and involved the official battle, it was mentioned that the girls had put on pants in advance. Although it was worth complaining about the jeans that easily fell apart during strenuous activities and wearing single clothes when going to the dungeon in the ice and snow... Secondly, in the story of the protagonist entering the school, the dormitory is actually a multi-person dormitory. As mentioned before, it is a luxury dormitory. However, at the end of the story, the protagonist talks to himself about what he expects from his roommates... This is a slap in the face to the readers, who are confused. This is really "luxury"! , It's absolutely amazing, and it seems to be a setting that goes against the background of your own world. If you are a pure warrior, it can be said to be far-fetched (does martial arts have no privacy tricks? There is also a mortality rate, the further you advance in a dormitory, the less, and seeing the bed every day and missing people affects your mentality, it is unreasonable), but you are a demon warrior, you have monsters to get along with and cultivate a relationship, and you don't even have a private space to play with it? Such a setting? The above are the bug points where the two major settings are seriously separated from the world background. Especially the second point is full of effects... I don't want to talk about other subtle points.
Some ideas
There are many people who write about pets. This book is not well-written and has many unreasonable plot points. The beginning is about chance, but when it comes to Goldfinger, it's very helpless. It should be the author's first time writing this kind of novel and he doesn't have much experience. What is rare and valuable is that the names of the secret realms, the names of the colleges, and the names of the elves in the book all have a sense of Chinese style. If some elements such as the Five Elements Bagua, some ancient anecdotes, mountain and sea myths, etc. Can be added later, there is still hope. I wish the author will write better and better!
Read a few chapters
It gives me the feeling that it is neither fish nor fowl, the military is a People's Liberation Army system, the social system is a capitalist society, and there are clans everywhere.
The catastrophe of all races? Su Yu, are you dreaming?
The catastrophe of all races? Su Yu, Su Yu, are you dreaming? Learn from it?
I've almost finished reading all the good pet stories, and I finally read a new book that's pretty good.
Why are there so many girls? It's okay for one elf to be a female, but the other one is also a female. What does this mean? There are also women everywhere the protagonist goes. The mid-term is so boring
I like this book very much. I hope the author will update it soon.
not bad
It's okay, I really enjoyed watching it, but it's a pity
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Official(26)Scraped 7d ago
Original God's Pure Water Spirit
Ah, pure water elf, the first thing that comes to mind is the original god. Raise your hand (
There are many unreasonable places.
First of all, this mentor is wearing a miniskirt when he first appears. When he first meets the protagonist, he wears a skirt and rides his monster deer. That scene... And later appearances are also in various skirts. This is the world of warriors. No matter how much you love beauty, you will not wear skirts often, especially miniskirts. Especially senior warriors are even less likely to be affected by the so-called love of beauty! There was also a female classmate who appeared in a short skirt. When we went together to another school, the teacher who received her gave her a classic test. She was also wearing a short skirt and was really speechless... However, when we explored the plot of the dungeon later and involved the official battle, it was mentioned that the girls had put on pants in advance. Although it was worth complaining about the jeans that easily fell apart during strenuous activities and wearing single clothes when going to the dungeon in the ice and snow... Secondly, in the story of the protagonist entering the school, the dormitory is actually a multi-person dormitory. As mentioned before, it is a luxury dormitory. However, at the end of the story, the protagonist talks to himself about what he expects from his roommates... This is a slap in the face to the readers, who are confused. This is really "luxury"! , It's absolutely amazing, and it seems to be a setting that goes against the background of your own world. If you are a pure warrior, it can be said to be far-fetched (does martial arts have no privacy tricks? There is also a mortality rate, the further you advance in a dormitory, the less, and seeing the bed every day and missing people affects your mentality, it is unreasonable), but you are a demon warrior, you have monsters to get along with and cultivate a relationship, and you don't even have a private space to play with it? Such a setting? The above are the bug points where the two major settings are seriously separated from the world background. Especially the second point is full of effects... I don't want to talk about other subtle points.
Some ideas
There are many people who write about pets. This book is not well-written and has many unreasonable plot points. The beginning is about chance, but when it comes to Goldfinger, it's very helpless. It should be the author's first time writing this kind of novel and he doesn't have much experience. What is rare and valuable is that the names of the secret realms, the names of the colleges, and the names of the elves in the book all have a sense of Chinese style. If some elements such as the Five Elements Bagua, some ancient anecdotes, mountain and sea myths, etc. Can be added later, there is still hope. I wish the author will write better and better!
Read a few chapters
It gives me the feeling that it is neither fish nor fowl, the military is a People's Liberation Army system, the social system is a capitalist society, and there are clans everywhere.
The catastrophe of all races? Su Yu, are you dreaming?
The catastrophe of all races? Su Yu, Su Yu, are you dreaming? Learn from it?
I've almost finished reading all the good pet stories, and I finally read a new book that's pretty good.
Why are there so many girls? It's okay for one elf to be a female, but the other one is also a female. What does this mean? There are also women everywhere the protagonist goes. The mid-term is so boring
I like this book very much. I hope the author will update it soon.
not bad
It's okay, I really enjoyed watching it, but it's a pity











