Tv Plane Journey

I saw some readers saying that I don't write books according to common sense. I want to say that since you are writing a novel, you should give full play to your imagination. People all have preconceived notions. Once they determine how to do something, other ways of doing it will feel out of place. I don't think we should dwell on these issues. Are other people's settings necessarily correct? I just want to write it down and present some of my thoughts to everyone, so that everyone can enjoy reading in their spare time. It would be better not to write time-travel novels than to just stick to the original setting. After all, the protagonist himself has changed the original plot by traveling to the past. I will write it carefully, and any comments and ideas are welcome.

Not many people have written about the world of Magic Sword Chess of Life and Death, but the kung fu and weapons in it are not bad.

To be honest, the thinking is okay, but the writing is too poor. Most things are mentioned in one stroke, the sentences are not flexible, and there is no sense of substitution. It feels like a drama when you watch it. After reading Chapter 40, Pig's Feet is too childish, and it's obvious that the author is still young. For example, if you want to practice martial arts, someone will come to teach you right away. If you want to develop your power, someone will donate unconditionally. Pig's feet are only five or six years old, so the aura is too great! Were the heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties brainless if they wanted to stop their men? Just say a few words and compete with each other to recognize you as my lord? You really get what you want right away, without any foreshadowing. It feels like the pig's feet and the supporting characters are reading their lines stiffly, like soulless bodies. I hope the author can work hard! Make more copies and be attentive. I will pay attention to your works in the future.

I haven't watched it yet, so I'll give it five stars and add it to my bookshelf. If you want to ask why, then I read your introduction. It mentioned in the introduction (I Have a Date with a Zombie) that this is a TV series that I personally like very much. I have watched all four of them more than ten times. But personally, I think you should go for Ma Xiaoling instead of becoming a disciple. It's too embarrassing. After all, Ma Xiaoling turned into a purple-eyed zombie. No one can stop her. The one I dislike the most is Kuang Tianyou. He is a bad guy. That's it. I'll be reading when you write about your appointment. Congratulations! Happy New Year to the author. He has written a good book and suggests that he can go to the ferry of souls, including the chapter on the underworld.

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I hope there is an ancient sword story. Journey to the West. Qingyun Zhi... Three lives, three lives and ten miles of peach blossoms. . Stars change etc.

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Congratulations to the author for his first book, please don't forget to add a world.

5 stars, great experience. Looking for honest mutual relations (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

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