Don't Throw Away the Cards You Picked Up
About This Novel
All realms were shattered and fell into the water-blue world. Tianyuan Empire, Beiqi. The protagonist Yu Xin sees some brilliant apertures that are invisible to others and reaches out to collect them to obtain cards.
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Official(5)Scraped 27d ago
What, have you given up?
There has been no update for several days. Are you still there, author?
No more updates? ? ? ?
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No more updates...
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The content is interesting and the ideas are good
I have a few suggestions that may be useful for reading this book. First, the timeline is not very clear. You can write a dividing line between the events during the day and the dream at night, and then write down the time, otherwise the sudden jump will be difficult for people to adapt to. Second, you can have a harem, but don't write too many. Two are quite suitable at the moment. I was a little confused when I watched the haunted incident in the girls' dormitory at school. The plot developed too fast. I didn't know why it suddenly appeared, and it was unclear when it happened. The above are my suggestions.
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 27d ago
What, have you given up?
There has been no update for several days. Are you still there, author?
No more updates? ? ? ?
,,,,,,
,,,,,,,,,,,,
No more updates...
..................
The content is interesting and the ideas are good
I have a few suggestions that may be useful for reading this book. First, the timeline is not very clear. You can write a dividing line between the events during the day and the dream at night, and then write down the time, otherwise the sudden jump will be difficult for people to adapt to. Second, you can have a harem, but don't write too many. Two are quite suitable at the moment. I was a little confused when I watched the haunted incident in the girls' dormitory at school. The plot developed too fast. I didn't know why it suddenly appeared, and it was unclear when it happened. The above are my suggestions.
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