
Awesome My Primitive Man
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This is a prehistoric world where giant insects from the Carboniferous Period, dinosaurs from the Jurassic Period, and ferocious beasts from the Paleogene Period coexist, and are extremely ferocious. In this magnificent prehistoric world, human beings are no longer at the top of the food chain, but are struggling to survive in the cracks of various beasts and insects... Primitive society farming and adventure novel
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Creativity delayed by plot
According to my own rating: 2.5 Stars (My scoring method is different from QRead, so 2.5 Stars is not low. My scoring method will be explained at the end of the article, so I won't go into details here) 342 chapters have been updated and 249 chapters have been read This book tells the story of "After the protagonist Ye Xi woke up, he found that he had traveled to a prehistoric world where dinosaurs, ferocious beasts, and giant insects coexisted. Human beings had an insignificant position here. Therefore, the protagonist used his life experience to lead humans to the top of the food chain." I have to say that the creativity is quite good. The simultaneous appearance of dinosaurs, giant insects, and ferocious beasts makes the world full of danger and creates an original atmosphere. Human beings are dying in this environment, surviving humbly and hard. I don't know where tomorrow will go, and I don't know where the future will be. If they close their eyes, they may never wake up again. In this sad and desperate era, the appearance of the protagonist seems to bring a glimmer of light. He leads mankind to move forward hard. The stories of the human heroes that continue to appear: Suiren, Shennong, Dayu, etc. Make people forget to leave... Unfortunately... The story is not like this... In this magnificent fantasy background, the author points out the existence of superpowers as soon as he comes up. Powerful primitive people can rival dinosaurs, giant insects, and ferocious beasts... I am very disappointed... Because to be honest, this way, it feels like there is no difference from other fantasy novels. And the subsequent plot also confirmed my point of view... Although the original background is still there, it is actually a fantasy story. The most important "original atmosphere" is still there at the beginning, but then gradually fades away... Alas, such a good idea has changed the soup without changing the medicine, which makes people regretful... However, it cannot be demoted again and again just because of this. At least the original atmosphere at the beginning can bring people a sense of freshness. Although the subsequent plot returns to fantasy, it is also readable, such as the establishment of the Xia tribe, and the beginning of the myth of Shennong... What needs special criticism is that the cheats are a bit too big... There are a lot of cheats' tricks in the book, which are inferior. For example, the protagonist had a fight with a giant python and ended up with strange flowers and stalactites that could improve his physical condition. Why? Of course, this is to allow the protagonist to get through the novice stage quickly╮(╯▽╰)╭ Another example is that the tribe where the protagonist belongs is a small group, but it has a treasure like a pendulum. Why? Of course, it is so that the protagonist can set foot in the Great Witch in the future╮(╯▽╰)╭ In addition, I need to remind the author (the author seems to have already known it) that there are many loopholes in the early stage... For example, the protagonist suddenly has a brainless Virgin to save the female ape, the Titan python is stabbed seven inches, the python with obviously weak bite force can bite the body of the orangutan in one bite, the python rolls but has no effect on the protagonist, the protagonist dares to eat stone milk when he sees it... In the later stage, it felt quite normal, but in the early stage, these loopholes appeared too frequently, and the poison accumulated too quickly, and it was easy to discourage readers... I really hope that the author can make major changes to those chapters... All in all, for this book, you may be attracted by this primitive atmosphere when you first read it, but after reading part of it and getting used to this atmosphere, you will feel the essence of its upgraded monster-killing flow. In other words, it cannot retain readers, so I cannot give it three stars. But the original background and atmosphere at the beginning are indeed the highlights. Apart from the bad points in the early stage, the writing in the later stage is indeed okay, and some parts are quite good. Therefore, I give a 2.5-Star rating... That's it for the book review. Thank you for reading. I hope this review can make you interested in reading this book. I will try my best to write better book reviews and wish you all good luck in martial arts. Ps: My rating method: My one star is average, without any highlights. My two stars are some bright spots, you can take a look. My Samsung is very well written and recommends reading. My four stars is an absolute masterpiece, highly recommended. As for my five stars... It's difficult...
to the author
I don't have the money to read the original version, but I read the website and saw the part about the meteorite disaster. I didn't quite understand it. It was the hatred of the genocide. Even if I traveled to the past, I didn't have that sense of immersion. But no matter what, for the sake of the predecessor, for the remaining tribesmen of Langya, to take revenge on those who took action, for the sake of human beings Clan, unite, do not kill each other, but do not punish the perpetrators, that is why the rules exist. The human race in the wilderness has its own rules. If you get the inheritance of a witch from a tribe you have just met, you have to leave your home. The ancestral witch is very great, so Ye Xi becomes a stranger. He brought back the Langya tribe, but why didn't he take revenge? Thinking back to the three tribes who had an idea of Tushan, what price they paid, and what Kurosawa paid. If Kurosawa didn't take the initiative to kill Ye Xi, no one of them would die. If a mistake is made, it will be punished, but The ideal of laughter, as Ye Xi who traveled through the past, he should understand it very well. When I saw him saving Kurosawa from the fire, I knew that the merger would be the way to go in the future. It was almost there, but I couldn't stand this kind of thing. The book is very good. I will continue to read it. If you don't want the Virgin, the Virgin will not work in the wilderness.
I still like you very much
I still like you very much Like the mighty sea silent I still like you very much Like clouds filling the entire blue sky One glance for thousands of years I still like you very much Like chasing the wind alone alone I still like you very much Like waking up from a warm dream Just sigh I still like you very much Like osmanthus leaves falling in the wind crushed into mud I still like you very much Like stars falling into eyes A glimpse of thousands of miles I still like you very much Like a red tent on a spring night, sleeping without any breath Still afraid to remember I still like you very much Like the midwinter sun shining on the earth Warm and accessible I still like you very much Like Zhou You's beacon fire playing with the princes Smiling at Bao Si, I failed the Western Zhou Dynasty and killed myself. I still like you very much Goose flying south Come and go I still like you very much Raining on the tropics and polar regions Not far away I still like you very much Like the old city gate where old friends have been waiting for many years solitary I still like you very much Like the afterglow before sunset Can't bear to leave I still like you very much Like snow raging over the earth Boundless I still like you very much Like clouds drifting ninety thousand miles Never rested I still like you very much Like how much smoke curls up from a kitchen stove Tangli is fried in snow and rain falls I still like you very much Like the sun rising and setting No matter day or night I still like you very much Like the afterglow before sunset Can't bear to leave I still like you very much Like stars running through the dark night for billions of years No complaints I still like you very much I still like you very much Like the wind that has traveled eight thousand miles Regardless of return date I still like you very much Like a whale starved of oxygen at a depth of 6,400 meters never tire of it I still like you very much Breathing softly like a whale sinking to the bottom of the sea Extremely crazy and extremely angry I still like you very much Like the vast sea of flowers at Luoxing Lake Far out of reach I still like you very much Like the strong wind and rain in Cangyun Castle hysterical I still like you very much Like the sun falling on the equator and the north pole Seize the day I still like you very much Like the land separated by the ocean, we can rely on each other indefinitely I still like you very much Like snow in summer and rain in winter powerless I still like you very much Like the yellowed bridge in an old story Pretend to be deaf and mute, lose your voice
This book is okay
But can the author not always write the protagonist like this, for example, after hurting someone or accidentally hurting someone else, or failing to save someone, he always feels guilty and blames himself, or something like that. This is really embarrassing when reading this book. Author, you have to think clearly about what kind of novel you are writing and in what world. In this world, injuries and death are normal. In fact, you can write like this, for example, being sad, or trying to become stronger and protect your tribe. Isn't this a good way to write? Otherwise, reading this book will be really embarrassing and disgusting.
After reading this book directly, I also saw what the author said in some chapters, and I know that this book has been updated intermittently. Among the original books of this type, this book's score is still very good. Fortunately, the heroine is still whetting my appetite, so I have the confidence to continue waiting.
Sign in floor
If you see that there is no sign here, go to the sign-in building.
The author has pirated copies, and he is faster than you. I said you are a pirate, now I am confused.
This book is really beautiful. It definitely makes people forget to eat and sleep. The writing is so delicate.
As an old bookworm who has been immersed in online literature for ten years, I have read no less than five hundred online books over the years. Compared with those hardcore readers, this book is definitely good to read.
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Official(1115)Scraped 21d ago
Creativity delayed by plot
According to my own rating: 2.5 Stars (My scoring method is different from QRead, so 2.5 Stars is not low. My scoring method will be explained at the end of the article, so I won't go into details here) 342 chapters have been updated and 249 chapters have been read This book tells the story of "After the protagonist Ye Xi woke up, he found that he had traveled to a prehistoric world where dinosaurs, ferocious beasts, and giant insects coexisted. Human beings had an insignificant position here. Therefore, the protagonist used his life experience to lead humans to the top of the food chain." I have to say that the creativity is quite good. The simultaneous appearance of dinosaurs, giant insects, and ferocious beasts makes the world full of danger and creates an original atmosphere. Human beings are dying in this environment, surviving humbly and hard. I don't know where tomorrow will go, and I don't know where the future will be. If they close their eyes, they may never wake up again. In this sad and desperate era, the appearance of the protagonist seems to bring a glimmer of light. He leads mankind to move forward hard. The stories of the human heroes that continue to appear: Suiren, Shennong, Dayu, etc. Make people forget to leave... Unfortunately... The story is not like this... In this magnificent fantasy background, the author points out the existence of superpowers as soon as he comes up. Powerful primitive people can rival dinosaurs, giant insects, and ferocious beasts... I am very disappointed... Because to be honest, this way, it feels like there is no difference from other fantasy novels. And the subsequent plot also confirmed my point of view... Although the original background is still there, it is actually a fantasy story. The most important "original atmosphere" is still there at the beginning, but then gradually fades away... Alas, such a good idea has changed the soup without changing the medicine, which makes people regretful... However, it cannot be demoted again and again just because of this. At least the original atmosphere at the beginning can bring people a sense of freshness. Although the subsequent plot returns to fantasy, it is also readable, such as the establishment of the Xia tribe, and the beginning of the myth of Shennong... What needs special criticism is that the cheats are a bit too big... There are a lot of cheats' tricks in the book, which are inferior. For example, the protagonist had a fight with a giant python and ended up with strange flowers and stalactites that could improve his physical condition. Why? Of course, this is to allow the protagonist to get through the novice stage quickly╮(╯▽╰)╭ Another example is that the tribe where the protagonist belongs is a small group, but it has a treasure like a pendulum. Why? Of course, it is so that the protagonist can set foot in the Great Witch in the future╮(╯▽╰)╭ In addition, I need to remind the author (the author seems to have already known it) that there are many loopholes in the early stage... For example, the protagonist suddenly has a brainless Virgin to save the female ape, the Titan python is stabbed seven inches, the python with obviously weak bite force can bite the body of the orangutan in one bite, the python rolls but has no effect on the protagonist, the protagonist dares to eat stone milk when he sees it... In the later stage, it felt quite normal, but in the early stage, these loopholes appeared too frequently, and the poison accumulated too quickly, and it was easy to discourage readers... I really hope that the author can make major changes to those chapters... All in all, for this book, you may be attracted by this primitive atmosphere when you first read it, but after reading part of it and getting used to this atmosphere, you will feel the essence of its upgraded monster-killing flow. In other words, it cannot retain readers, so I cannot give it three stars. But the original background and atmosphere at the beginning are indeed the highlights. Apart from the bad points in the early stage, the writing in the later stage is indeed okay, and some parts are quite good. Therefore, I give a 2.5-Star rating... That's it for the book review. Thank you for reading. I hope this review can make you interested in reading this book. I will try my best to write better book reviews and wish you all good luck in martial arts. Ps: My rating method: My one star is average, without any highlights. My two stars are some bright spots, you can take a look. My Samsung is very well written and recommends reading. My four stars is an absolute masterpiece, highly recommended. As for my five stars... It's difficult...
to the author
I don't have the money to read the original version, but I read the website and saw the part about the meteorite disaster. I didn't quite understand it. It was the hatred of the genocide. Even if I traveled to the past, I didn't have that sense of immersion. But no matter what, for the sake of the predecessor, for the remaining tribesmen of Langya, to take revenge on those who took action, for the sake of human beings Clan, unite, do not kill each other, but do not punish the perpetrators, that is why the rules exist. The human race in the wilderness has its own rules. If you get the inheritance of a witch from a tribe you have just met, you have to leave your home. The ancestral witch is very great, so Ye Xi becomes a stranger. He brought back the Langya tribe, but why didn't he take revenge? Thinking back to the three tribes who had an idea of Tushan, what price they paid, and what Kurosawa paid. If Kurosawa didn't take the initiative to kill Ye Xi, no one of them would die. If a mistake is made, it will be punished, but The ideal of laughter, as Ye Xi who traveled through the past, he should understand it very well. When I saw him saving Kurosawa from the fire, I knew that the merger would be the way to go in the future. It was almost there, but I couldn't stand this kind of thing. The book is very good. I will continue to read it. If you don't want the Virgin, the Virgin will not work in the wilderness.
I still like you very much
I still like you very much Like the mighty sea silent I still like you very much Like clouds filling the entire blue sky One glance for thousands of years I still like you very much Like chasing the wind alone alone I still like you very much Like waking up from a warm dream Just sigh I still like you very much Like osmanthus leaves falling in the wind crushed into mud I still like you very much Like stars falling into eyes A glimpse of thousands of miles I still like you very much Like a red tent on a spring night, sleeping without any breath Still afraid to remember I still like you very much Like the midwinter sun shining on the earth Warm and accessible I still like you very much Like Zhou You's beacon fire playing with the princes Smiling at Bao Si, I failed the Western Zhou Dynasty and killed myself. I still like you very much Goose flying south Come and go I still like you very much Raining on the tropics and polar regions Not far away I still like you very much Like the old city gate where old friends have been waiting for many years solitary I still like you very much Like the afterglow before sunset Can't bear to leave I still like you very much Like snow raging over the earth Boundless I still like you very much Like clouds drifting ninety thousand miles Never rested I still like you very much Like how much smoke curls up from a kitchen stove Tangli is fried in snow and rain falls I still like you very much Like the sun rising and setting No matter day or night I still like you very much Like the afterglow before sunset Can't bear to leave I still like you very much Like stars running through the dark night for billions of years No complaints I still like you very much I still like you very much Like the wind that has traveled eight thousand miles Regardless of return date I still like you very much Like a whale starved of oxygen at a depth of 6,400 meters never tire of it I still like you very much Breathing softly like a whale sinking to the bottom of the sea Extremely crazy and extremely angry I still like you very much Like the vast sea of flowers at Luoxing Lake Far out of reach I still like you very much Like the strong wind and rain in Cangyun Castle hysterical I still like you very much Like the sun falling on the equator and the north pole Seize the day I still like you very much Like the land separated by the ocean, we can rely on each other indefinitely I still like you very much Like snow in summer and rain in winter powerless I still like you very much Like the yellowed bridge in an old story Pretend to be deaf and mute, lose your voice
This book is okay
But can the author not always write the protagonist like this, for example, after hurting someone or accidentally hurting someone else, or failing to save someone, he always feels guilty and blames himself, or something like that. This is really embarrassing when reading this book. Author, you have to think clearly about what kind of novel you are writing and in what world. In this world, injuries and death are normal. In fact, you can write like this, for example, being sad, or trying to become stronger and protect your tribe. Isn't this a good way to write? Otherwise, reading this book will be really embarrassing and disgusting.
After reading this book directly, I also saw what the author said in some chapters, and I know that this book has been updated intermittently. Among the original books of this type, this book's score is still very good. Fortunately, the heroine is still whetting my appetite, so I have the confidence to continue waiting.
Sign in floor
If you see that there is no sign here, go to the sign-in building.
The author has pirated copies, and he is faster than you. I said you are a pirate, now I am confused.
This book is really beautiful. It definitely makes people forget to eat and sleep. The writing is so delicate.
As an old bookworm who has been immersed in online literature for ten years, I have read no less than five hundred online books over the years. Compared with those hardcore readers, this book is definitely good to read.
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A good fantasy seedling, the genre is fantasy from prehistoric times. The author's writing style is not bad, and the structure of the prehistoric environment is very vivid. The world background is also good. According to the current prediction of the single owner, it should be a Chinese martial arts world. The pace of the plot advancement is also good, the writing is non-routine, and the character creation is also relatively good. The cruelty and difficulty of survival in primitive society are well described. And the most important thing is that Shan Zhu is very interested in this type of novel! Let's talk about the shortcomings. First of all, in order to make the plot seem coherent and smooth, the author uses a lot of modern vocabulary and modern thinking of primitive people in the article, which can easily make people feel out of place. Secondly, the first two chapters of the article are a bit abusive, but I personally feel that they are handled very well. They reasonably outline the background of the primitive wilderness and lead to the following plot. For Shan Zhu himself, this is not only a drawback but also a highlight. Also, some details in the article are vague and the details are not handled well enough. The quality of the first twenty chapters or so is also average, not quite on the same level as the rest. All in all, this is a good seedling, and book lovers who like this type of novels should not miss it. Current overall rating: between dry food + to grain and grass -



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