The Age of Rebirth: Starting from the Ordinary World

The writing is okay, the plot is average, the logic is not clear, and there is no trace of the 1970s in particular. Each era has its own characteristics. It feels like you are using the people and things of this era to write about the 1970s. For example, when going to the countryside at the beginning, Zhang Lu and Jing Qiu, who were traveling together, were given a handful each, and a little girl riding in the car was also given a handful. This was basically impossible in those days, because sugar was a controlled item (strategic item) and required a ticket. Especially for White Rabbit, only one or two tons are produced nationwide in a day, and they are handed over and distributed uniformly. Even if you have money, you can't buy it. Especially the white rabbit costs 5 cents each, which is equivalent to 50 yuan each today. Even during the Chinese New Year, you are reluctant to eat it. Even for people nowadays, would you be willing to give hundreds of yuan worth of candy to random people? And do you have sugar stamps? Even if you get candy coupons because of a special relationship, they are only given in taels. You may only buy 2 taels during the Chinese New Year to support the occasion. If you give candies to people, they are always given in dices. Even children from relatives usually give two taels. Even this relative has to thank you. What I said is to give Tang a small microcosm of that era. Since you are writing a chronicle, it is best to talk to older people. Don't take modern times as the past. This time is taken for granted. At that time, you might be treasonous and you might be sued and investigated casually.

There are too many bad things. First, what attracted you to Zhou Dongyu as the protagonist? Compared to Wada Junye (Tong Liya), regardless of height, body, appearance, temperament and personality, isn't this on the same level? Second, it's unrealistic. When you go to the countryside, you just hand out handfuls of White Rabbit toffee to others. Every day, you either show off your white flour steamed buns or rice. Where did you come from? Even if you have money and tickets, what supplies can you buy as a member of the Shige Festival Commune? Thirdly, he repeatedly jumped between women and stood up, and the emotional drama was a mess.

There's a reason why you don't get good grades. When you write a fan fiction, the heroine chooses to write it herself, and that's basically the end of it.

The protagonist's halo is too strong, but it's a pity that the author couldn't write it. The writing is embarrassing, standing out from the crowd, licking a beautiful girl at the beginning, and falling in love after traveling back in time?

I feel that in today's era, people like to help others selflessly. I have not seen so many selfless people in modern times. Can human nature be changed after being reborn? I still like to watch the kind of movies that are humane and know that there are cheats in the plot. I still like to watch movies that can earn the most benefits for myself, such as slowly climbing up to a junior high official or climbing up to a senior official. Then use the golden fingers to make money and connections, and keep mistresses. This way, Deputy Director Li does not need to feel comfortable.

It's a pity that this subject matter, the emotional line is written in a mess, and the career line is even more brainless. If you don't know how to write about emotions, just keep it simple and crude. Being coy is the most humane thing, or the nature of the person who writes it. Going to college in the future cannot be said to be meaningless for time travellers, it can only be said that it is purely taken for granted. Then came the start of hundreds of millions of dollars at every turn. The hundreds of millions of dollars in the 1980s were not just numbers. Of course, ordinary people had no pressure to commit adultery. And what about participating in various major events such as the disintegration of the Soviet Union. The ordinary world fanfic you wrote is a big brother. Don't you feel like you've written it out?

The writing is okay. It's just that the relationship between men and women is too messy. Aren't you writing about the ordinary world for Tian Xiaoxia, Tian Runye, and He Xiulian? Why do you want to get a Zhou girl? What are you doing with this girl?

Period novels are written about emotional scenes, but the key point is that the writing is messy. If you have a single heroine, don't write so much about other women. Are you going to send them out one by one later?

If I traveled to the ordinary world, snatched He Xiulian life and death, and helped Sun Shaoan capture Tian Runye, I wouldn't be able to organize a Zhou beauty. What are you planning on? There are thousands of beauties in the world. What are you doing in the ordinary world?

The book is okay, but when I read Chapter 229, I knew I couldn't stand it. Self-righteous affection is actually the most irresponsible behavior. Other reckless behaviors are meaningless. Anyway, after reading this chapter, it feels like a disgusting plot like a Qiong Yao drama. Forget it, after reading this chapter, I knew I had to withdraw this book. I won't be able to read it anymore.